Rikara FF :A Love story: yours and mine; [ON HOLD]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii guys and girls... so this is my first ever writing. I have planned writing a story.. maybe a ff or a ss but still don't know how many chapters will it lead to. So here is the story and please give it a little of your precious time and tell me how is it.

PROLOGUE

"Please listen to me omkaraji. I really was not having any attention to hurt you. Mai aapki bohot izzat karti hun. Bhagwan hai aap mere liye. Please ek baar meri baat sun lijiye. She cries and pleaded him to listen to her side of the story. But he was adamant "tum jaisi giri hui aur ghatiya ladki aaj tak nahi dekhi maine. How can you be so disgusting huh?? You came to me disguised as a boy only coz u wanted my money. Only coz I am rich. You are just like one of those girls who could do anything for money. From now on, chulbul aur gauri dono mar chuke hai mere liye. Shakal bhi mat dikhana aapni aaj ke baad mujhe. "Nahiii omkaraji ek baar humari baat suniye she cried.

"Gauri sister kya hua tume . Phir se vohi sapna dekha kya ? Dandi asked as he came rushing to gauri in her room. Again she saw that dream, dream of that day when he left her alone amod most of the disgusting situations of her life. Though she ran away from kaali but yet has not found peace in her life. "Sorry dandi bhaiya, humne aapko phirse pareshaan kar diya. "Koi baat nahi sister, ab so jao. Kal subah recording ke liye bhi jaana hai. Good night sister. "Good night bhaiyaa. Saying this she slept thinking about all that happened in her life in these six months.

"So Risha haan?? "Yes shivaay, I don't know what is there in her voice that attracts me, but surely her voice gives me my much needed satisfaction. She seems more like me, struggling to find peace. "But how are you so sure O?? She has not even showed her face to anyone in public. No one knows where is she from, what is her real name... what everybody knows is just 'Risha' which is only a fake name given to her. "I don't know rudra. It's just that her voice sounds so beautiful to my ears. "Ooo so humare lambe baal waale bhaiya ko us gumnaam gaayika se prem ho gaya hain. Rudra said mocking on om's expressions. "Shut up, Rudra both shivkara said in chorus. "humesha mujhe hi daantre rehte hai Rudra said pouting.

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So friends this is a wrap for the prologue. Do tell me how it was and also that should I continue or not..


INDEX

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9

CHAPTER 10

CHAPTER 11

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Ms.Lizzie thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seems interesting
Sure is Gauri , I guess

So waiting to know how they meet again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Seems interesting

Sure is Gauri , I guess

So waiting to know how they meet again


thank you.. well I have planned something interesting.. lets see how it goes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Looks interesting ! Bring it on 😃
Waiting for part one 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A very interesting prologue ... looking forward to the story.

Please pm me when u update next :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting start...
hope risha is Gauri
Waiting to know...
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you guys for all your replies, likes and views... Thank you all very much for liking the prologue😛... hope you all like the story too... There is a slight change in my story. Jhanvi doesn't know who chulbul was and I don't have buamaa in it. So without any more blabbering lets start the tale...

CHAPTER 1: HUMARI ADHOORI ZINDAGI

"Good morning gauri sister". Dandi wished as gauri descended down from the steps of her newly purchased house. "Good morning dandi bhaiyya. You are still waiting for me to have breakfast? I told you to have it if I get up late". "It's ok sister. I don't like eating without family and you are the only one I have to name as my family. FAMILY' that word strike gauri's mind. Who does she has to name as her family, except her dandi bhaiya there was no one she could even fully rely on or believe in. She went to the puja room of her house and stood near a photo frame. Crying she said "Maa tum kyu chod kar chali gyi hume. Tumne bhi humara saath usi din choda jis din vo hume chod kar gye. Tumne toh humare aane ka intezaar bhi nahi kiya". She said wrenching her heart. "itne bure hai hum maa ki tumne hume aakhri baar tumse baat karneka ya tumhe pakad ke rone ka mauka hi nahi diya. Kehne ko toh aaj sab hai humare paas; paise, ghar , gadi kisi cheez ki kami nahi hai. Par maa koi nahi hai yaha jisse hum baat kar sake, ro sake jisko pakadke, bata sake ki pichle 6 mahine se kya toofan chal raha hai humare dil mein". "Maa, aaj bhi ussi seher mein reh rahi hai jisme vo rehte hai, usi hawa mein saasein le rahe hai, bohot koshish ki unko bhulne ki par nahi ho paa raha hai humse. Toot rahe hai har din, tinka tinka karke bikhar rahe hai... bohot kosish ki ki khud ko samhal lein lekin ab nahi ho paa raha hai humse maa. Thak chuke hai hum". She cried her heart out to the photo frame of her dead mother who she has lost the day omkara left her. Her evil chachaji and chachiji told everything to her mother about her marriage and just then she suffered a heart attack. That day was the worst day for her. She lost two most important people of her life.

"Gauri sister agar maaji se baatein ho gayin hot oh nashta kar lein. Aaj 10 baje recording hai and it is already 9". "Jii bhaiyaa aayi". "Chalte hai maa, kaam pe jaana hai". Saying that, like everyday, she left the puja room and just 20 minutes after that she left the house with dandi.

"O aap sach mein uss botox kumari se shaadi karoge. Don't do this to you O. aapko yeh karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai" rudra said in an almost pleading voice.

"I have to do this. Mujhe yeh karna padega Rudra. Agar mainne use shaadi nahi ki toh puri family ko bohot loss jhelna padega. Aur mom aur dadi toot jaenge. Aur mai unhe tootte hue nahi dekh sakta."

"Par O.." "Enough of discussions rudra, kal ki party mai sagai ki date announce karne jaa raha hun and I don't want any more discussion on that". "Aapki jo marzi voh karo. "Saying this rudra left the room.

As om was still working on his laptop. He heard some one entering his room. "Rudra kaha na maine tujhse no discussions..." "Rudra nahi baby, it's me. Om looked at the direction and found swetlana standing in front of him waking slowly towards him. The next moment she started touching him "Baby I can't tell you how desperate I am for you." Om felt disgusting on her touch. It was as if creepy worms are running across his body. He immediately jerked her hands "Kar aha hun mai tumse shaadi. Ab aur kya chahiye tumhe?? Kam se kam shaadi tak toh akela chod doh mujhe". "Jitna bhagna hai bhag lo, par shaadi ke baad toh tum kahi nahi bhaag paoge." "Get out swetlana. "Omkara said in an angry tone. "Mai janti hun ki tumhe kaise aapne paas lana hai, kal ki party mein tuhare liye tumhari favourite singer ko bulaungi. Phir dekhti hun yeh artist kaise muje ignore karta hai" thinking this swetlana left omkara's room and he again started working on the presentation about the 'The Grand' hotel going to be built in Bareilly.

Little did she knew that she was going to hit her own leg with hammer 😆😆

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Phewww... Completed... Do give it a read and tell me how it was😃... silent readers please do like and try telling me your opinions tooo

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start...
Would be nice to see how Omkara reacts seeing Gauri infront of him after so long...
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That's interesting
Waiting for RiKara meeting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm liking it..
So Omkara is marrying Svetlana...
Waiting for him reaction when Risha will come to the party..

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