Rikara FF :A Love story: yours and mine; [ON HOLD] - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Are mera JealousKara..he's so effected by Gauri hugging Chirag..oh..!! Something is burning inside.. I'm loving this dabang chiraiyya..she giving him takkar.. Can't wait for the next part..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Aww jealouskara...

Love this new version of rii...the powerpack rii

Amazing story dear

Update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Lovely update
So i really like this Gauri and how she constantly tells Om off
He doesn't know what he did to her by saying all those things and I really like that he tries talking to her

I want to know more about that Chirag and Ri ;D I want jealous Om declaring her as his wife :P

Update soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Nice story.
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved it
Loved this jealous kara!Want to see omkara confessing her as his wife
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Lovely
I like Dabang chirayya nd desperate Kara
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Read all the five parts in go and I loved it.
Story kafi tezi se aage badh rahi hain👏 But I am confused, so none from the Oberoi family knows that Om has ever married a girl called Gauri...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii guys... This is Ayushi, back with another dose for my dearest rikaraland ke waasi... I am really thankful for liking the jealouskara and angryri... my version of their story will have alots of them... but but but... I will never ignore their forte i.e. intensity in love... So adding one more chapter to this love story I began...

P.S. - no one in the family knows that Omkara is married.

CHAPTER 6: CONFUSED THOUGHTS

"Shivu baby Ragini came reciting Shivaay's name like a poem. "Jee aap kaun? Gauri asked confusingly. "Tum kaun ho?, and where is my shiv baby she barked. "hum kaun hain isse koi farak nahi padta.. yeh bataiye ki aap kaun hain she again asked. "Main Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki fianc hun. Aaj kal ke naukaron ko achche kapde kya mil jaate hain, khudko maalik samajhne lagte hain she shouted. "Abeyyy oye chiraiya.. Tameez se baat karo. Tum jaanti nahi ho ki hum kaun hain Gauri too raised her voice.

"Areyy Nagini... I mean Ragini, tum yahan? Kaise aana hua Rudra stepped in. "Kaise aana hua matlab? Shivaay mera fianc hai, yeh mera sasuraal hai, mai yahan kabhi bhi aa sakti hun she argued. "But I thought Annika bhabhi and Shivaay bhaiya are married Gauri asked. "No they are divorced... long time back Ragini commented. "Ragini Shivaay bhaiya is upstairs in his room. You can go and meet him Rudra said giving her the way and fumingly she moved.

"Rudy, what happened? I thought Shivaay bhaiya and Annika bhabhi are married she asked. Should I tell her or not was Rudra's dilemma. But then she felt like family, she meet them just a day ago but all the while she was with them he felt a strong positivity. The dilemma answered in positive and he told her everything about them. (Same thing that happened in the show).

"Didn't you all tried to solve this? she asked. "Wee did many times, Risha, but none of the two is ready to listen. Annika bhabhi is adamant of not telling the truth and Shivaay bhaiya toh tadibaaz hain hi... he said in a so-obvious tone, shrugging. "Dono bhai ek jaise hi hain. Kisi ki baat nahi sunte Gauri mumered. "Kuch kaha tumne? Rudra asked. "Nahi nahi... kuch nahi she answered.

" Dandi, who is this Chirag? Omkara asked him, on call. "Where did Chirag come from now? dandi asked in a confused tone. "Who is Chirag? How does he know Gauri he asked more firmly this time. "Mr Oberoi you just have signed her for a contract. And I feel what you know about her is more than enough he answered. "I know how much I can ask about her and how much should I know about her. You just tell me who the bl***y hell this Chirag is he asked controlling his anger.

"Mr Oberoi, be in your limits a harsh sound came to his ears. "Who do you think you are, huh she shouted. "Gauri, listen I just wanted to know who this Chirag is he replied calmly. "Mr Oberoi, I already have told you that it has nothing inreference to you about who Chirag is... Whoever he is, he is a much better person than you she said raising her finger. Omkara would have reacted in a calmer way but the Omkaraji in him was not ready to take it. She was actually calling a no one in their lives better than him. How could she?

He pulled her toward him and she landed with a thud on his chest. "Listen to me now he griped harder "I want to know about each and everything in your life. Every single change and every single moment. I want to know about every single hour, minute and second in your life. I want to know about every single day that happened in your life after that day. He murmured against her ears.

"Really, you want to know what happened in my life she said with a humourless chuckle "if I would have been the old Gauri, I would have believed you. I would have surrendered to you. But you are talking to Risha, Mr Oberoi. And this Risha has nothing of Gauri, just nothing. Gauri was dead the same day she was mercilessly given to a demon by the person she believed in the most she said holding her tears back. "Gauri would have told you all about her. But for Risha, you don't hold any importance she answered pushing him back.

But the tiny hands were not even able to push him an inch. He was moving closer and closer. He knew that she will not respond but this time the Omkaraji in him wanted to see how this tiny woman would react. "leave me Mr Oberoi she said struggling. "jana chahti ho toh khudko chuda lo Gauri he agin repeated the murmuring. "Don't react, stay calm Gauri she said to herself. "Leave me or else I will... "You will what... yehi toh main bhi dekhna chahta hoon he again repeated. "Ek characterless ladki ke saath yeh sab karna aapko shobha dega she said. And the arrow hit the point; he left her and moved back. "I knew that you have ranked me very low in your thoughts Mr Oberoi, but what you did that day made me low in my thoughts too she said and started moving out.

He held her hand and flipped her to his chest again "you know what Gauri, I would have myself shown you the gate but then I have invested in you. I have paid for your skills, your talent and you are bound to deliver that to me he said. "Really Mr Oberoi, and what do you think my talent is huh. You have not purchased me. You have just paid me to sing in your concerts and I am ready for that. And I don't think for that you would need my history for that she answered. "Why won't I need to know your past? I know nothing about you and you are my company's brand ambassador. I need to know everything about you he tried hard to get what he wanted out of her words.

"I am a brand ambassador right? Okay then you can talk to my secretory. She will tell you everything which is needed. "Gauri tell me, I want to know he said controlling his voice. "I don't want to. Who are you to me? A no one right. Why should I tell you then? she replied moving away. " Mujhe janna hai. Mujhe sab kuch janna hai he bursted out "Kyunki main tumahra p... and stopped himself. "Rehne dijiye Mr Oberoi jo khatam ho chukka hai uske bare mein baat karne se koi fayda nahi hai saying this she rushed out controlling her tears.

"Rehne dijiye Mr Oberoi jo khatam ho chukka hai uske bare mein baat karne se koi fayda nahi hai were the words still ringing in his ears. But why was it affecting him. "Sachhi toh kaha usne. I myself finished it all he said to himself. "Yeh Chiraag kaun hain he said angrily.

"Baar baar hum hi kyun maa she said holding her mothers picture frame. "Kaali Thakur se toh hum phir bhi lad sakte the, par Omkaraji se kaise ladenge maa. Kaise?? she wept her heart out...

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Done guys... Hope you all like it. Do tell me your views

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Nice update
Loved this jealous kara..He is so desperate to know who Chirag is!
Waiting for the next chapter
Continue sooon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Are meri bechari chiraiyya..she can't do anything about the way she feels for Omkara..and it's making her more frustrated... I'm loving this jealous and possessive Omkara..he's showing his full rights on Ri.. Waiting for the next..continue soonish..

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