Rikara FF :A Love story: yours and mine; [ON HOLD] - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Awesome dear thanks fo pm
Om desrved ri anger ,why he don't realize his mistakes
Ahan om ri ko console krrha tha aur usne kuch bhi nhi kha why she took his support hmm
The where she dragged him eagerly wait for next

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just Read the last two parts... Awesome
Jealous Kara and Angry Riii are a treat to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
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loved it :D
she finally gave it back to him, making him question what really happened between her and KT

I love their intensity which you portray very well :D

Can't wait to see where he will take her

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ri gave back to him finally..yaayy..!! I hope Omkara will realise soon.. Where is she taking him..!! Can't wait to know..


It was just a reaction Tasmin... She didn't have in... But was just scared...
Thanks for your views... The next part will be up by tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chils

Awesome dear thanks fo pm

Om desrved ri anger ,why he don't realize his mistakes
Ahan om ri ko console krrha tha aur usne kuch bhi nhi kha why she took his support hmm
The where she dragged him eagerly wait for next


She was just scared and obviously she needed someone for support... And Omkara was trustworthy rather than anyone else... She has not yet given in😉

Thanks for your views...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

loved it :D

she finally gave it back to him, making him question what really happened between her and KT

I love their intensity which you portray very well :D

Can't wait to see where he will take her


She was just scared... She has not given in... And KT has a history and I am planning to explore it... Let's see what happens

Thanks for your views😊
Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry guys I know I am late but my laptop ditched me and I lost ally content so had to do this again... Still I hope you all like it

CHAPTER 9: THOUGHTS

"Can you please tell me where are you taking or should I say dragged me... Gauri I am asking you this since a long time he mumered. " Shut up, will you? She ordered. "Gauri, tell me... I want to know he was not able to handle this. "Look, I know that you don't trust me. But believe me this time I am sure about what I am doing she said still dragging him. "Gauri, I didn't want to... he tried to explain. "It's okay I... before she could complete she felt a hand covering her mouth.


She tried to get away but could not; the body against her was too hard. "Mmm... she tried to shout but again the trials went into vain. "Shhh... there is media he said making her nerves calm down. He took her between a wall and a curtain covering it. His body was covering her, avoiding anybody even sense her presence. "Don't worry, I am here he said calmingly. Her eyes met his, she was trying hard to avoid them but this was affecting her. She clenched her wrist, trying to hold her tight. She didn'twanted to blabber everything right here.

God! I want him to kiss me. Looking in his eyes is torturous. I don't want to loose myself, I can't help it. Stop this Gauri... are you crazy . He is the one who is the reason of your sadness. He left you to that monster.. you can't let go yourself that easily. But I love him... I love him more than myself, more than my life... more than anything in the world... stop this
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"Move she shouted. "Excuse me he was unable to understand. " I said move away she cleared. "Listen, I am not in a mood of fight now... as the media goes I will move he said arrogantly.

What the hell is wrong with this girl... why is she behaving like crazy... what the hell have I done... she was the one who was wrong... she cheated me and now look at the attitude... she should be thankful that I am taking care of her now... but than what is wrong... why do I think that whatever I did was wrong...

"Hello... Mr Oberoi... move away her voice brought him back to senses. "Get away... the media is gone she jerked his hands away. "Oh... yeah you were taking me somewhere he asked. "Yes and she held his hands again and started walking again.

"Rudra, where is Om? Shivaay inquired. "I don't know bhaiya. I saw him going towards make-up room he answered. "Oh... then he must have gone to Rishta Shivaay said. "Yeh aajkal O zyada hi Risha ke paas nahi jaa raha hai? Rudra said thoughtfully. "Matlab? Shivaay narrowed his eyes. "samjho bhaiya kuch toh hone laga hai he said lifting his eyebrows. "Oooh Shivaay said in an understanding tone.

"Gauri, this is the last time I am asking... Where are you taking me? he was done this time. She pointed her finger somewhere and when he followed he was shocked.. "Is that Ragini he asked confusingly. "Nahin main she mocked. "Shut up, I will never let you go in anyone else's arms he said... But what she heard was just mummer. "You said something she questioned. "Huh... no nothing he shrugged. "I think I should call bhaiya she picked up her phone. "No, don'tdo it this early he holded her hands back.

"Aap kya kah rahe hain, Omkaraji... Iss Nagini ki toh main she tried to move. "Wh...What did you say he asked. "I said, I am calling bade bhaiya she tried to brush off.
"No... Before that... You called me something he said teasing her. "Mr Oberoi... I just said that I am calling bade bhaiya now. What is wrong with him. From when did he started paying attention to my words. "No, don't call Shivaay now he said. Ughhh!!! This man... Ab kahenge wait till we gather evidence. "I think we should wait till we gather evidence he completed. Look, how predictable is he... God this guy is mad.

" Baby don't worry, I will look after whatever goes wrong... we will have our plans successful the man said. "It's not that easy Siddharth... everyone in the Oberoi house still likes that Annika. Everyone still praises her as if she is a Goddess and I don't know how to defame her Ragini spoke worriedly.
"We will manage that...just focus on the plan... If we want to get the Oberoi empire down... It's necessary to have Shivaay, Omkara and Rudra in control the man spoke. "But baby still they have a big family... what if anything goes wrong, what if I fail, what if there is... Before she could complete aa voice cut her. "Don't talk about loosing... We have to still take our revenge the man hugged her and started walking away.

"Mr Oberoi, I don't think that if we let her go now... We would ever be able to know who that man is she tried to explain.

"Is it your family? Are they your bhaiya bhabhi? No right... so stay away from us... stay away from my family he said in a warning tone, unknowingly. "Yes, right that is your family... it was always your family... I am what... I am a cheap, characterless woman who walks around men like you to come and ravish me for money... I am a wh***, a bl**dy wh*** right... this is what you think about me right... This is what you feel... I know you don't trust me to anything but Mr Oberoi... I am not at all going to leave this idea until I get things right for bade bhaiya and bhabhi... I will surely leave after exposing this Nagini and you will not have to tell me that she completed with tears almost covering her vision.

"I didn't wanted to say this his voice choked. The feeling of him doing something wrong strengthen even more... Though he thought that his idea about who Gauri was is correct but then her tears also felt right. They didn'teffect him before but now it feels as if a big mountain has been kept in his heart... He felt heavy, he felt disgusting, he felt wrong.

"It's okay Mr Oberoi, I think it's normal now. I am now done with this and I think we should follow her she sighed wiping her tears off. "If you still don't believe me I think I will go alone and find out who the person is she completed and started walking. "Gauri, wait. I think because I am here to take care of you... I will come with you he said running behind her. "As you wish saying this she started walking again.


Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Lovely Update as always
Damn she still loves him and you portrayed her inner turmoil nicely
She hates herself for loving him, for loving the man that hurt her self respect many times
And Om is truly an idiot--He needs to learn when to say what 😆
So they will work together
Can't wait for more
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Omkara should think twice before he speaks..he's behaving like an idiot..
Ri is hating herself for still loving him..she's in a mess..
It was amazing..continue soonish..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Loved it so much
Loved this jealous kara!
And om deserves gauri's anger
Waiting for the next chapter
Continue soon

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