Rikara FF :A Love story: yours and mine; [ON HOLD] - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Thanks for pm dear
Jealouskara want to know about chirag ahan!
Awesome eagerly wait what next up he do?
Where is svety darkling?😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good one
I like this jealous kara

Gauri always answers back to him that is good
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much guys for your responses. Thank you for your encouragement... I am really glad to reading your comments... I am sorry that I could not reply to them... I am also sorry for making you all wait for the updates but I promise you regular updates from now on... Hope you all enjoy your progression 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Ayushi,
Just read both the parts... Awesome updates!!!
Loving this avatar of our Chiriya...
aww poor Omki is jealous... how cute 😉
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello again guys... I am here again with the next part of the story... So lets move to that...

CHAPTER 7: THE JELOUS OSO

"Om, here is the list of people who you have to call for tomorrow's promotional event Shivaay came with a list for Om. "Oh... Thank you Shivaay he said talking it. " I hope you know that it's Risha's first stage performance and she will have to face a lot of audience, not like the one on your engagement party Shivaay spoke. "I know that Shivaay and I have called for the best choreographer in town for that he answered.

"What choreographer? What are you both talking about? Annika asked stepping in the conversation. "It's about business Shivaay ignored her. "Excuse me Mr. Bagaad bille ji, the place the discussion is going on is my house, and I can ask about it anytime she answered. "Omkara, tell me. It's just a waste of time asking him about anything she turned to Om. "Bhabhi, actually... "She is not your bhabhi Shivaay spoke before Om could say anything. "Let him speak Annika commanded and turned towards Om.

"Bhabhi, actually its Risha's first live performance and she has to dance a bit while singing to add some groove, so for that I have called a choreographer he answered. "Achcha... So when is the performance? she asked. "Tomorrow... Done with your questions... now leave Shivaay said angrily. "I didn't spoke to you... I am not leaving she argued.

"Shivaay bhaiya , you called me? Gauri said entering the converstion. "Yes, actually tomorrow is your live performance so Omkara has arranged for a choreographer so that you could enhance your performance with some dance moves Shaivaay answered. "So how long is the performance? she asked. "One hour Om answered. "Huh, just an hour; but as far as I know the performances are long alteast 3-4 hours she asked. "Yes but considering your health, I decided to keep the performance of an hour only he clarified. "And who are you to decide that? It is my first live performance and my fans want to hear me long she was not at all going to step back. "Firstly, I am the boss; and secondly your fans hear you daily, only your face was hidden till now he spoke again.

"And how do you know that? she asked again. "I know that because... And he stopped. "because... because what "because I have researched about your popularity, understand he said avoiding the topic. "I said it and I will do it. The performance will be of 3 hours she announced. "It will no be he said. "It will be "It will not be "it will be "It will not be "I said It will be "and I said it will not be.

"Enough, I am fed up of it will be and it will not be now Shivaay shouted. "The performance will be of an hour only and the rest of the things will go as Risha says he announced. "No; how come the rest of the things Shivaay? You don't know how stubborn she is Omkara complained. "As if you know me, right. Mr Oberoi it will be good if we don't come to this topic now she answered. "Gauri... he could not complete. "It's Risha she cleared. "Okay now stop it this time it was Annika instead of Shivaay. "When is the choreographer coming Om? she asked. "Just... and looked at the door "Oh... here she is. Guys meet Sofia he introduced her.

"Hello Sofia, this is Risha Gauri introduced herself. "Risha... as in the hidden singer Sofia asked. "Yes she replied. "Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God I can't believe this... I finally saw you. Ma'am I am such a big fan she said shaking her hands with Gauri. "Oh I didn't know. Thank you so much Gauri said removing her hand.

"So ma'am lets start saying this Sofia started to teach her steps. Omkara was there behind the window watching her moves. She was so graceful, and her grace increased with every step. "Omkara control your mind he scolds himself.

"Gauri yaar kahan hai tu... I searched for you in the whole mansion. And I tell you this mansion is not small Chiraag entered. "I am rehearsing Chiraag she told him. "You and rehearsals... Leave it he said laughing. "What do you mean? she asked narrowing her eyes. "I mean you never rehearsed for your recordings at the studio he shrugged. "Excuse me mister... Zyada nahi uchal raha hai tu she said holding Chiraag's collar. "Main uchal kaha raha hun... look I am on the floor he laughed even more. "Wait I will tell you saying this she started running after him as he loosened her grip on his collar and ran away.

"Chiraag ke bachche, ruk she said chasing him. "Chiraag ke bachche nahi, Chiraag hun main... bachchon ke liye tujhe abhi wait karna hoga meri chiraiyya he said teasing her and running. "Tu ek baar mere haath aaja... teri toh main... They were running in the hall laughing because there was no one in the house except one man.

"Yeh phirse aa gaya... Jab dekho madhumakkiyon ki tarah Gauri se chipka rehta hai he said folding his hands into a fist, as if controlling his anger to not burst out.

"Ma'am shall we continue? Sofia asked. "Yes we should Gauri said. "I will see you afterwards she turned towards Chiraag. "Hayee issi intezaar mein toh mare jaa rahe hain he said teasing her.

"What does he mean by issi intezaar mein toh mare jaa rahe hain and before that long haired man could analyse it, there came another bomb.

"Ma'am for this song you need a dance partner. And I am sorry my assistant could not come today to help you Sofia said. "Can I help you, miss choreographer Chiraag entered. "Yes you can Gauri answered.

"Okay then, Que song start... Sofia said and it started.

kachchi Doriyon, Doriyon, Doriyon se
mainu tu baandh le
pakki yaariyon, yaariyon, yaariyon mein
honde na faasley

tie me with weak threads,
there are no distances in true love.

eh naraazgi kaagzi saari teri
mere soNeya sun le meri
dil diyaan gallaan
karaange naal naal bai ke
ankh naale ankh nu milaa ke

all this anger of yours is just for show,
O my beloved, listen to me,
we'd sit together,
look into each other's eyes,
and talk the talk of our hearts.

Every move, every step, every inch of closeness between the two shook him to the core. His eyes were clearly showing his heart. Not able handle this anymore he walked towards them.

"Well done sir and ma'am, you both are really a good dancer Sofia complimented Chiraag. "So how are the preparations going Omkara asked. "They are really good dancer's sir Sofia said looking at Chiraag and Gauri. "Well done both of you he said walking towards Gauri and in the process he dropped the coffee cup in his hand over Chiraag's feet.

"Aaah, Mr Oberoi, look these are my legs Chiraag shouted. "Oh... I am so sorry, I didn't do it knowingly he apologised. "Aaah... it's hurting he cried. Gauri moved to him but "Ma'am we have to complete the rehearsals Sofia stopped her. "It's okay Gauri, concentrate on your work. I think I should leave saying this Chiraag left leaving a victorious smile on Omkara's face. Obviously Gauri knew that the coffee cup didn't fall accidently.

Done for this one... Guys please do tell me your views and suggestions

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Jealous kara is awesome
Gauri ko to pta chal gya
Ab gauri om ko partner bnayge rehersal k lye
(oso to kuch bhi kar sakta hy) hahaha!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
It was beautiful!!
Loved this jealous kara!
Bechara Chirag😆 omkie uska per jala diya!!
Now gauri will practice with om!!yaay
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Their nok jhok was so cute..
I loved the jealous a.d possesive Kara...
The best thing was he was concerned for her more than he should be..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
I love jealous Omkara 😆
definitely a delight to see him trying to find out what relationship Gauri shares with Chirag

And I love their cute little fights- Gauri won't give in anytime soon and Om has to live with the fact that he doesn't know her, that the woman he married is not the one that stands in fron of him

Lovely written dear :D as always amazing work


( and forgive me for the late comment, I am down with the flu once again 🤢)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Very good one
Poor Shivika stuck between two stubborn heads

Chirag seems harmless but poor O baby is jealous


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