Rikara FF :A Love story: yours and mine; [ON HOLD] - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: chils

Jealous kara is awesome

Gauri ko to pta chal gya
Ab gauri om ko partner bnayge rehersal k lye
(oso to kuch bhi kar sakta hy) hahaha!



Thank u sooo much for your comments😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

It was beautiful!!

Loved this jealous kara!
Bechara Chirag😆 omkie uska per jala diya!!
Now gauri will practice with om!!yaay
Continue soon


I will... Thank u for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Very good one

Poor Shivika stuck between two stubborn heads

Chirag seems harmless but poor O baby is jealous



He has to be Lizzie... The mistake he has committed will now pay...

Thanks for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I love jealous Omkara 😆

definitely a delight to see him trying to find out what relationship Gauri shares with Chirag

And I love their cute little fights- Gauri won't give in anytime soon and Om has to live with the fact that he doesn't know her, that the woman he married is not the one that stands in fron of him

Lovely written dear :D as always amazing work


( and forgive me for the late comment, I am down with the flu once again 🤢)


Thanks for reading and commenting your views Mel... And get well soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Their nok jhok was so cute..
I loved the jealous a.d possesive Kara...
The best thing was he was concerned for her more than he should be..


Thank you for reading and commenting Tasmin... Actually he is now paying for what he did... I hope you like it as a whole too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER 8: THE CONCERT

"Ma'am, shall we continue? asked Sofia. "Yes, we should she answered. "But Ma'am this is a couple performance and we ... "Sofia, change the song she commanded. "But ma'am "I said change the song, right now she again commanded. "But ma'am the song, it's your favourite one she said. "I don't care, just change it.

"But suddenly what happened? You were dancing with him right? he was confused. "I can't believe this Mr Oberoi, even after months, you still believe in what you said that day... That I am a... she couldn't continue. "Sofia, will you please wait outside she gestured and Sofia went, leaving both alone. "What are you doing Gauri? Why did you stop? he asked confusingly. "What am I doing? What are you doing Mr Oberoi? Look at you, you are still the same man who believes that whichever person or to say precisely, man I am with, I have a rela... Relationship with him she was stammering for the first time in six months. Why is it that this man affects her so much? Why is it that his thoughts about her are so important? Why can't she erase him from her heart? Why is life that cruel to her?

"Gauri, listen to me. I was just trying to... He tried to explain. "What trying to huh? What trying to? You made me stay here, you tried to take out my past from me and from Dandi bhaiyya , and when you didn't succeed you hurt Chirag... Are you in your senses? she shouted. "No, I am not... You understand; I am not in my senses. I can't see that bl***y near you, touching you, holding you or even sensing you. Because I... again a pause. "How many times Mr Oberoi, how many times will you do this? That time I thought I was fooling you, that I was wrong all for all those things that I did to you, and I got the punishment of all my crimes. The man I loved, pushed me to the darkest well, and I thought I deserve it, but now nor I love you and neither have I to seek punishments for anything. I am over with all this, I don't need your help for anything she had tears covering her eyes.

Those tiny water droplets may not matter to the world, but they had the capacity to make The Omkara Singh Oberoi's heart sink. "Gauri, I didn't want to hurt you anyhow but... he stretched his hands towards her. "Stay away from me, I said she had red eyes this time. Omkara had never thought his life that this tiny woman could also tremble in anger and that too on him. "Who is this Chirag? And why is he affecting you so much? he asked. "You know what Mr Oberoi, I don't think I need to give you any answers she turned to leave. "What to you think of yourself Gauri Kumari Sharma? Why is it that every time you don't listen to me and just go away? You need to listen, you have to listen to me Gauri he held her shoulders tightly looking into those mesmerising eyes.

"And what will you say, that Gauri you are a characterless girl who could go with anyone who offers money, or that I haven't seen a cheap girl like you. And then the as usual dialogue Leave my house... You will say this right she chuckled humourlessly "Mr Oberoi, go tell someone else because I am over with this now.

"O, come down, where are you? Rudra shouted. "Go down Mr Oberoi, I think your brother is more important than me she left the room making her words echo in his mind continuously. Was he really that wrong? Although he knew that leaving someone with a demon like Kaali was wrong, but then Gauri was marrying him. But why did she run away? What happened?

"O, what are you doing here? Rudra came in. "O, listen he shook him making him come out of his thoughts. "Haan, tell me "O, we need to go. We have to check all the preparations taking him both went to the place.

"Again butterflies she was really nervous for her first ever live concert. "Risha, may I come in? Annika asked. "Sure, please do she obliged. "Nervous, right "Yes, very much she said. "All I can say is all the best dear Annika wished her. "Please can you call me Gauri? she asked. "Okay so, All the best Gauri she said and turned towards the door. "Annika... she called. "Yes, you needed something "No, but thank you for coming here. It really gave me confidence .

"Then I am also here Rudra entered. "Loh... You were only left Annika said. "Offo, bhabhi Rudy means good luck. Where ever I go I bring happiness he said excitedly. "Yeh toh sach hai, where ever my little brother goes he brings Good luck Shivaay and Omkara entered the room. "You all are really cute Gauri complimented. "O bhi bohot cute hai vaise Rudra grinned. "Shut up Rudra Omkara hit his head. "Don't worry Risha, you will be great tonight Shivvay said. "You were great always Omkara said making Gauri's confidence shoot up unknowingly.

"Thank God everything went good bhaiyaa. I was really tensed she said. "I told you everything will go well Dandi answered. "But, why did you leave this morning? I really needed you she complained. "Sorry sister, but had some urgent work. I am happy that you managed everything Dandi complimented. "Yes... Okay Bhaiya, I think I should leave. It's late "Yes you should. Bye saying this he hanged the call up.

The lights were so harsh as if they would make her eyes bleed. Cameras were everywhere. All she could see were people everywhere. Some were reporters, some were guards and others were shouting out her names in chorus. "Ma'am, what do you feel about the response from the audience? one reporter said. "Ma'am what made you sign the deal with the Oberois? "Ma'am, why are you staying in the Oberoi Mansion? "Ma'am, when will be your next show?

Questions over questions were only heard. She knew that she was a star but this was really unexpected. This was her first time that she witnessed this huge amount of people in front of her. Her heart was bumping her chest in nervousness. She was scared and she crunched her skirt trying to calm down. Suddenly she felt someone holding her hand dragging her.

"Save me she shouted. "Ssshhh... It's me he said. She bumped into his chest, crying "I was really scared. All those people... there were so many people she said sobbing. "Shhh... I am here now... You don't need to be scared... Everything will be fine he hugged her fitting her in his embrace properly. She was really scared and crying continuously "shant ho jaao Gauri... Main hoon yahi... This is normal he said. "What normal? My heart almost stopped. So many people were just asking questions. Stupid people... They were asking stupid questions and... "Achcha shhh shaant... calm down... calm down... he rest marking a rest to her complaints.

"Come with me she started dragging him. "But where are we going? he asked confusingly. "Look, you know I can't drag you... Please have some faith and come with me she said and he followed without questions.

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Done... Do tell me your views

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Ri gave back to him finally..yaayy..!! I hope Omkara will realise soon.. Where is she taking him..!! Can't wait to know..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Loved the updates continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
gauri shouted on om👏👏👏
How i love this attitude se bhari hui ri...

The way omkara consoles a nervous ri...awww☺️

waiting to see where she takes om...
update jaldi jaldi!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
I love Everytime she shouts on him
Curious to know where they are going

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