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Posted: 8 years ago

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Well to be fair to the CVs, they succeeded very well in pulling down the show or destroying it, sometime back, much before this track. Other than random episode here or there or maybe some Shivika or Rikara scenes inbetween, I for one had lost interest in the show quite some time back. Meanwhile, the scenes could have been better showing Rikara and Shivika separately in their rooms or something but no they had to show them mimicking the gestures if not the actual dialogues, feels kind of weird. As for the trust factor, not really surprised there because Gauri had always believed in Omkara from the beginning, so I guess this was just an extension of that. But, seriously speaking would have been better if they had showed both a bit rattled atleast. Any case, can't see any reason for next one, a track with no head or tail- that is pregnant Anika. Would have thought they would go on to atleast Ruvya milao mission, AniRi flashback or the so called Raaz, but seem like they would rather show Anika- Pinky clash again because it's obvious that if pinky realizes she's not pregnant she'll change again.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Maisha123
Wow this is probably the first time I'm hearing something slightly against CVs. 😆
I don't know if you saw my post but this is literally a better version of everything I wanted to voice out but couldn't. More reasons to love you😉

Coming to your post, I love how even while criticizing you tried seeing the depth of CVs thoughts behind the tracks post marriage. I never thought of all these track as a whole until you mentioned in your post about love confession, old age insecurities and trust track. Keen eyes and good brain to connect the dots mushfika 👏

exactly my thoughts. I am not understanding why cvs are forcing rikara to be in the same phase as shivika when they have a totally different story line. They basically just started their happy marriage and as you mentioned, they indeed look like 5 year old happily married couple. 🥱

🤣This was the best...I can't breath🤣

Honestly thats how i am feeling like, not even joking. Tats probably what has happened

Can you go work with the CVs. I feel like they will get some brains. this is so precisely said!!! it's just so sudden and doesn't go with om's character. how's everything baclk to normal in rikara's life after what om has done to her?! I totally agree that from gauri, it's okay but om? it does not go with his characyter at all!! I love the taking gauri on a date part and how you said they should show a gradual development on gauri getting cofortable witn om instead of being so casual with his romance. 🤢🤢

@underline - I LOVE your thoughts behind it.

And your thought behind this shivika track reminds me of your story 'the aftermath'. we saw a little glimpse of it and god, what a phenomenal job you had done and how you had given something cvs couldn't !!!!

I don't know what to say about Ruvya. I feel theyre just hopeless. or may be CVs have MADE them hopeless. I agree leenesh is just amazing. he really deserves good track.

I just want to know if your post somehow be DMed to the CVs. This is just such nicely written thing that is not bashing them but instead showing how their thoughts were right but the execution was horrible. and they should really stop this "all brothers and bahus in sync" mode.

Maisha, I have never been a die hard RiKara fan, I have always loved Gauri and Om individually but not as a couple. but I have been really admiring these two after Om realized his mistake and went to Bareilley to get her back. Such cuties they are as a couple, now that I have start noticing some romance. That's basically why I really want to see some fresh start in their lives. Just because they are not the main jodi doesn't mean they can't be given a good start of developing husband wife bond from the beginning. As a great fan of Om and gauri for the kind of personality they have, this is something I'd really love to see. And I can just tell how wonderful the track is gonna be if they show the gradual build up instead of making them jump to where shivika are because to me, it feels like a huge gap.

Aww you read "The Aftermath"? 😳 Yes, I really wanted to see something like that on the show and quenched my thirst by penning it down, 😆 But that's nothing, I only scratched the surface... there's just so much that can be shown to close the pinky-shivay-anika track, I'm just crossing my finger that Pinky is not forgiven just 'cause she's jumping in joy for becoming a grandmother.

I wouldn't say it's CVs fault entirely. They're marely exploring the elements that might give them a good TRP. Hopefully they realize it soon that merging the different storyline of each lead into one is not gonna help :)

Thank you for all the appreciation lol, you make me blush ☺️

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: nebuna
Hey Brilliant post!!!
I will comment only about Rikara track ...Rikara track was never given importance in those 40 mins to develop their relationship so it will never happen now.This couple had just confessed shouldn't they be sneaking in to spend time together but they are busy with every other issues minus their personal relationship.Cvs were never interested with this couple and now they are in par with shivika so future prospects are doubtful.Cvs are lazy to write anything for this couple nor do they want to develop RIkara.Rikara's relationship will never be justified.In another 2 weeks Rikara will also consumate and they will move to their raaz track.

Thank you! :)
Never been a RiKara fan so it never really bothered me to see how their story was handled. Sorry but Shivika was enough for me to day dream about 😆 I have been loving the lovebirds these two have become after bareilly and started noticing the cute chemistry the are capable in reflecting - except that I wish it was followed by some good redemption track (not too lengthy but at least to keep Om's character justifiable). And idk if you can relate to this but now that I know Anika and Gauri are sisters, there are more reasons for me to see RiKara's slow build-up in their relationship - as in how differently the two sisters handle their marriage life and accompany their husbands in the journey.

I haven't heard anything about Rikara's consummation lol but it will actually be weird if that indeed happens so quickly. They might have spent a lot of time together but all those time they had one baggage or the other that stood as an obstacle between them. I for one would never want such abrupt jump to the next stage without making sure the necessary relationship to reach to that stage is made, because they're definitely not there yet...at least to me, they're not.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kala16
Thanks for your post. More than Rikara iam feeling bad for Leenesh. His story has been ruined to the core
Such an amazing talent he is.

When I first started watching this show, Shivay was never my favorite. It was leenesh who literally made a special place in my heart. His jolly nature, that adorable smile and all those stunts he pulls off without thinking rationally used to make me smile like anything. I don't think anyone else could have completed Rudra's role so beautifully other than him - and as much as this is something to be proud of, my heart rips seeing him neither getting the much deserved fame nor a good storyline. By good storyline I don't mean give him a love/married life like the other two obros. I want to see something meaningful - something that wouldn't ruin the jolliness and innocence of his character yet push his car forward. And hence I wanted a strong friendship track :)

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mainkyanaamdoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Brilliantly said. Disappointed so much. And not to say supposedly others get more SS than some lead couples.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ithihaas
Mushfika,
A post from you will always being a smile on my face :-)
Such a superb post. Written so well by pointing out the issues current story line is going through for every couple. I have seen so many posts trying to bring up the same points but then you have put them so subtly without bashing neither the CVs nor the story line. Kudos girl !!!

I loved what you have written for Shivika's story line should be... Something that would create conflict yet the love is never undermined or tested.

Yes we had gotten some very nice scenes where shivay had taken proper stands for Anika but that shouldnt be it after what she had done to that poor girl. anika being the sweet being she is, would obviously try to make everything right and may be through that they could show a few fights between Shivika followed by him making her understand that it's not easy for him to do so after what she had done his wife - this would not only keep the track balanced in terms of the fact that it's not always "mushy gushy romance" yet those fights just tell how precious she has become to him that he's good to fight with Anika BECAUSE he doesn't want to forgive the person who has hurt his wife so much.

@Bold . Very true and it would make a nice track.
I would want this to happen in the show.. both Shivaay and Annika suffered a lot because of the game Pinky played with them.

Only when CVs create different story lines for individual couples along with family drama, people will be able to connect as all the couples and enjoy the family moments.
Every one having and behaving same to a particular situation is not fine. As an audience you tend to be disconnected with such scenes. And even the essence of the dialogues is lost some where between all couples. The come up with very nice dialogues but then they are ruining the essence by use it over all couples.

Thank you for your post dear !!!

Aww Rohini, your comment made ME smile, 🤗 So sweet!

@green bold: Couldn't agree more. Regardless of how great the dialogues are, audience could never connect or enjoy the scenes if the execution is bad - and on wednesday's episode I strongly felt what you said there - losing their essence. From what it seems to me is that CVs are not realizing what path they have chosen as a source to increase their TRP. A drop in the TRP may help strike the realization and change the route

By the way, I feel i like I haven't seen or talked to you in ages!! I hope you're doing well. I remember you had said your vacation was near the end. Did you go back to India already?

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Rohini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Aww Rohini, your comment made ME smile, 🤗 So sweet!

@green bold: Couldn't agree more. Regardless of how great the dialogues are, audience could never connect or enjoy the scenes if the execution is bad - and on wednesday's episode I strongly felt what you said there - losing their essence. From what it seems to me is that CVs are not realizing what path they have chosen as a source to increase their TRP. A drop in the TRP may help strike the realization and change the route

By the way, I feel i like I haven't seen or talked to you in ages!! I hope you're doing well. I remember you had said your vacation was near the end. Did you go back to India already?

Yes, I am back to India ...travelled back here over the weekend... Started my work as well...I just wished my vacation would somehow been extended...I just didn't want to leave my husband and come back...the flight journey was a tough one for me... couldn't sleep through whole journey...

Also, my husband's assignment my probably be extended and there is no way I can take another vacation... That was why it was difficult for me to come back...but nothing is in our hands...we didn't expect this assignment to be extended by 4 months...he was supposed to come back in December...but...hmm...now can't help it...I am just hoping that his assignment is completed as soon as possible...

How are your studies and I am guessing university is keeping you busy these days...

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