Hello, Deshians I am writing a new os on Prem Heer. This os based on Prem , Heer romantic moments which disturbed by Gayetri and Veera.
Neither English nor Hindi is my native language, Therefore I am apologizing to all of you in advance for any grammatical errors.
Prem's romantic moment with Heer suddenly interrupted by ring tone that was coming from Prem's mobile. Prem unwillingly go ahead to attend the call. Heer on the other side got herself as worried as she saw Prem's facial expression was hardening after hearing something from the caller.
Prem ended the call and before Heer could ask him, something Prem phoned somewhere.
"Kya aap mujhe who document fax korkar bhej sakte hai? Prem asked the caller.
"Ha bahut shukria aapka. Prem thanked the caller after he replied affirmative to Prem's question.
Immediately after that, Prem and Heer heard knock on the door. Both were surprised to hear that knock that period. Prem opened the door.
As usual both were shocked to see Gayetri and Veera . Prem was shocked to see Veera's state.
"Bhaiya, Nihal ne me bacche ko mar dala. Veera told Prem in a crying voice .
"Veera, ya tum kya batta rahi ho, bhai ne aisa kya. Heer was also shocked after hearing accusation about her brother.
" Saach hi to batta rahe he mere bacchi, teri bhai ne meri veera ka kya haal kya hai tu to acchi tara se dekh sakti hai, phir bhi poonch rahi hain. Gayetri angrily scolded Heer.
" Mujhe sab kutch bato Veera, ye kaisa hoa. Prem told Veera in a clam voice.
Veera told his brother her fabricated story.
" Ek minute to tum ya kahi rahi ho, tum bacchi ko janam dena cahati thi, par Nihal ne tumhari ye haal kya hai aur tumhari bacchi ko mar dala? Prem asked Veera in a serious tone.
"Ha bhaiya, usne aisa hi kya. Veera cried heavily when she replied to her brother.
"Bhai aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta. Heer told everyone. Disbelieve was evident in her voice.
"To tu meri beti ko jhooti kahe rahi hai Heer, mujhe maloom tha tu teri bhai kai saat degi. Gayetri shouted at Heer.
" Maa aap please shant rahae, main baas ek minute me aya. After requesting his mother, Prem went inside of the house and he came back to them after one minute.
" Prem beta tu dekh rahi hain Nihal ne tere behen kya haal kia , par phir bhi Heer ne Nihal ka saat de rahi hain. Prem aaj tujhe apni maa aur biwi ki bitch kisi ek ko chonna hoga. Main tujhe aadesh de rahi ho chor de tu Heer ko. Gayetri demanded.
Prem and Heer both became stunned after hearing Gayetri's demanmd. Heer was fighting to stop her tears to fall in the ground. Gayetri was the supporter of their relationship. Heer knew how she and Gayetri shared the pain of Prem's death. Heer remembered how she always told her helpless state.
Now the same Gayetri mom was asking her Prem to leave her. Separation from Prem was like death for Heer. However, Heer would not mind if Prem choose his mother over her. She could understand his dilemma. She could sacrifice her everything for Prem's happiness.
"Maa, main ye nahi kar sakta. Prem replied in a low voice.
"Kya nahi kar sakta hai tu beta? Gayetri asked Prem in a worried voice.
"Maa main Heer ka saath chor nahi sakta. That time Prem replied in a strong voice.
His answer shocked everybody. Gayetri was stunned after hearing that reply, she could not believe her ears. Her beta Prem was choosing Heer over her and directly told no to her demand.
Veera was feeling angry that her plan was getting flop.
On the other hand Heer's heart danced with joy when she heard Prem's declaration that he won't leave her. She was touched in her heart by the depth of love of her husband. Nevertheless, she was worried about Gayetri's reaction.
"Kya kaha tune , tu uska saat nahi chor sakta, itne sob hone ki baad bhi tune aapni biwi ko chona. Aapni biwi ki payar main andha hogya tu Gayetri told Prem in a shaken voice.
" Maa mera baat samajni ki koshish ki je. Aap aur Heer dono hai mere liye anmol hai, mai aap dono main se kisiko bhi hurt nahi karna chahata. Par maa aap mujh se ye kya mang rahi hain. Chaliye maan leta ho aap aur veera sahi hain aur Nihal ne Veera ka saat o sab kutch kya jo aap mujhe bata rahi ho. Lekin iss sab ki liye aap Heer ko kaise dosh de sakti hain. Maa aap janti hain, Heer ne hamari pariwar ki liye kitne kurbani di. Hamari pariwar ko bachane ke liye o aapne apko dao me lagai thi. Kya aap bhul gaye wo sab. Kya aap ke paas aaj Heer ko wos kurbani o ki koi mol nahi hain jo aap mujhe wose chorne ki liye kahi rahi hain. Prem told Gayetri in a passionate voice.
Heer was feeling overwhelmed after hearing the way Prem defending her in front of her mother. She could feel Prem's love for her in his every uttered word.
"Bah beta bah, aaj tu khub bol raha hain aapni biwi ki safai ke liye, par beta tu bhul raha hain uska bhai ne tera behen ka saath kya kiya. Gayetri pointed her finger at Heer.
"Main to bas satch bata raha hu. Aur agar main man bhi lu Nihal doshi hain to kya hua. Aap chahate main ek bhai ki galti ki saja ek behen ki do. Ye kaisa soach hain maa. Har insan sirf apni karam ki liye jimmadar hai kisi dosri ki nahin. Aur Heer kisiko jhooti nahi bol rahi hain. Wo to bas aapki baat shun kar hairn hain, jahatak main samaoj ta hu Heer Nihal ka taraf se bhi kya hua janna chahati hai apni kisi bhi bitchar dene se pehele Prem was trying to hold back his anger.
Heer was surprised to see how much Prem understood his Heer. He was truly her soulmate, Heer thought. However, she was also feeling bad after seeing Prem was arguing with his mother for her.
" Prem, agar maa ye hi chaati ki main... Heer was interrupted midway by Gayteri.
"Baas Heer tujhe aur mahan banne ki drama korni ki jaroot nahi hai, tu to pahele si meri bete ko apni payar ki jaal main fasa liya hai. Mera Prem aab bas ek jaru ka ghulam ban kar rehe gaya. Gayetri told Heer .
Heer was trying to say something about that, however, before she could do that, it was once again Prem who gave reply to Gayetri on behalf of his Heer.
" Kya bola apne, Heer ne mujhe jaru ka ghulam bana diya. To main aap se aaj janna chahata hu jab main apni sari property Harman aur Veera ka naam kar diya tha tab Heer ne mujhe bhina jijhak support kiya to Heer kya tab apni aashiq ka ghulam tha. Jab aap sobko ye laga main mar gaya hu tab Heer ne mera bidhwa ban kar rahi aur hamara pariwar ka boj apni sar par liya, kya wos waqt Heer apni pati ka ghulam tha.
Ye jaan te hue bhi Rishabh wooski zindegi narak bana dega, aapni dil main patthar ban kar Heer ne usse shadi karne ke liye raaji ho gayi thi taki wo mera pariwar ko bacha sake,baliye maa kya was waqt Heer mera ghulam thi.
Heer ek aisi patni hain jis ne mere har faisala ko bina apni swarth dekhe bina samarthan ki , jis ne mere har safar main mera humsafar bani ye jane hue bhi mere aage ki safar kate se bara hua hai, jisne mujhe aur meri pariwar ko apne se jyda payar ki. Is liye maa aaj agar aap mujhe Heer ka sath dene ke liye jaru ka ghulam bola to mujhe koi sharaminda mehosos nahi hora raha he. Prem's voice was expressing his passion for Heer. Prem also intertwined his fingers with Heer's finger to show his support for her.
" Maa dekhliya Prem bhaiya kis tara Heer bhabi ki payar main dhub gaya. Prem bhaiya aab kisi aur ki nahi sunega akhir Heer bhabi bhaiya ko ek aisi sukh de sakti hai jo kisi aur nahi de sakthi. Veera remarked. Prem and Heer clearly understood what Veera implied.
Heer was clearly hurt after hearing that how Veera defined their marriage and relationship in such a narrow term.
"Veera, main soch bhi nahi sakta ki tumhai soch itna gir jayegi. Ye afsos ki baat hain ki tum aajtak rishto ki ahemiat ne samj payi. Mera Heer ka sath aatma ka bandhan hain kisi bhi rishta ka pahele. Prem protested.
"Tu Veera ko kyun daat raha hain, sahin to kehe rahi hain. Tujhe to Heer ki siba aur kutch dikh nahi. Tujhe to aapni behen, maa ka koi fikar nahi aur hoga bhi kaise hum to tere sautela maa aur behen hai saagi thodi hain. Gayetri finally uttered and after that, she left with Veera.
After hearing that, Prem felt he lost something precious. Prem realized his mother had changed for worst. How could she say Prem thought them as stepmother and sister only? Could not she saw the love and respect he had for her? Could not she read his eyes where pain was visible after hearing such hateful words from her mouth? Did not she know he would give his life to protect them? Prem thought silently
Gayetri taught him to judge people by their own action not by the action of their kin. Gayetri taught him to hear both sides of the story before reaching any conclusion. Gayetri taught him to oppose someone when he/she was doing something wrong even if he/she was your relative.
Prem only followed her teachings today. Prem only tried to do right thing. Somehow, his mother misunderstood him and marked him as sautela. He was not feeling well. For the first time in 20 years, Prem Juneja felt he was an orphan.
End of Part 1.
Part 2 on Page 3
Part3 on Page 5
Epilogue on Page 8
Please tell me, should I continue this os.
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Aami Daakini
