New Prem Heer OS: I will never leave you (Epilogue on page 8)

Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti
Good work 👍🏼
Nice lines from Mrs.Raheja
Let's see what'll happen in the next..will u write which i think or something different .
Waiting for next

Thanks, I will update in next 3-4 days.

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Fatima

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hi Shuridh, I didn't know you were writing something until you mentioned it...so sorry for the delay in checking this out.

Part 1: Interesting start...I couldn't help but thinking throughout my reading that this is how it should have been in the drama too...Prem standing by Heer. Aw...but poor Prem

Well done. 👍🏼

Will comment again after reading part 2. Send me a PM when you update.

Edited by Fatima_Q - 7 years ago

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Hi Shuridh, I didn't know you were writing something until you mentioned it...so sorry for the delay in checking this out.
Part 1: Interesting start...I couldn't help but thinking throughout my reading that this is how it should have been in the drama too...Prem standing by Heer. Aw...but poor Prem

Well done. 👍🏼

Will comment again after reading part 2. Send me a PM when you update.

Its ok Fatima. I am happy that, you like the story. I also think it would have been better if Prem supported Heer in the drama.

I will definitely pm you for final update of this os.

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