New Prem Heer OS: I will never leave you (Epilogue on page 8) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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super awesome
like ur story plz continue
waiting for next part
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

super awesome

like ur story plz continue
waiting for next part

I will do that in next few days.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice story, good to read it ..plz continue and update next part soon
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

Very nice story, good to read it ..plz continue and update next part soon

I am glad that, you like it. I will update soon.
Posted: 7 years ago
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I will never leave you OS part 2:

Prem, Heer was sitting on the bed. Prem did not speak a single world in last few minutes. Heer also did not say a word to her husband. She could understand that, her Prem was going through an emotional turmoil. She knew how much Prem loved his mother and how the sudden change in her affected Prem. Before, today Heer loved and respected Gayetri so much but now she was feeling certain resentment towards Gayetri for hurting her Prem like that.

"Bis saal teen mahieny aur ponra din Prem finally broke his silence.

"Kya Heer was surprised to hear Prem's word.

"Bis saal teen mahieny aur ponra din ho choke mere sagi maa ki maut hui, main bas sare char saal ka tha job ye hua tha. Bahud jyda kutch samaj nehi ata tha uss umar pe par ye samaj me aagya tha ki mere maa ab nehi rahi. Jab bhi maa ki yaad ata tha main asman me tare ko dekth ta tha aur soach tha maa ki bare main.

Phir Gayetri maa aiyi jab main paanch saal ka tha. Tumhe pata hain unhe dektei laga o mera apna hain. Dhere Dhere Gayetri maa ne mujhe dil me apni jagya bana li. Kabhi bhi maa mujhe ye nahi jataya ki main uska sautela beta ho. Main bhi apne dil se unhe maa ki roop me apnaya. Jab bhi main Gayetri maa ko dektha ho mujhe ye lagta ki samne mera maa hain mera sautela maa nahin.

Tumhe pata hain Heer ek bar school me apni maa ki bare bolne aur likhne ka function tha. Maine Gayetri maa ke bare me bola aur likha aur first prize jeet gaye. Jab maine first prize jeet ka kushi maa ka sath share kar raha tha tab

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maa nahi balki sautela maa hain. Dosri taraf tune apni maa ke bare bolke aur kahake second hua hain, ek taraf se to tuhi first hua hain. Mother of one of Prem's classmate told to her son who ranked second in the competition.

Prem was visibly upset after hearing that and Gayetri noticed that.

"Mrs. Baundhara Raheja agar aap apni bete Pyush ko samjhane ke liye mere aur bete ka rishta ko jikar naa kare to hum sab ke liye accha hogi. Gayetri cautioned her.

"O kya haina Mrs. Juneja mujhe ek bimari hain aur os bimari ka naam saach bolne ka bimari, main hamesha saach bolti hu chahe wo jitna bhi kaura kyun ha ho aur jahir se baat hain mere iss adat koi logo ko accha nehi lagta . Aap Prem ka samne jitna bhi aachi banni ki koshish kyun na kare main janta ho aap ekdin iss me aur apni sagi bacchion main bhed bhao korengi.

Ek din aapne sage bachao ki baato ko samne aapko Prem ki koi baat sunayi aur samaj nahi ayegi Ek din aap apni saagi baccho ki kushi ke liye apni sautela beta ka kushi nahi dekhay degi. Ek din aap khud use ye kahengi ki aap ko us ki harkato main aapni sautela beta dekta hain saga nahin. Basundhra smirked after saying that.

" O din kabhi nehi ayegi Mrs. Raheja. Sare duniya kya soach ti hain iss he mujhe koi farak nahi parti. Main bas ye janti hu ki Prem meri beta hain aur main uska maa hon Gayetri leave with Prem after replying to Basundhara.

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"Jab maa ne kahi main uski beta ho tab mujhe jo apnapan mehosos o main tumhe bata nahi sakta. Mujhe laga kya hua maa ke sath mera koi khoon ka rishta nahi hai , kya hua maine unkha kokh se janam nahi liya, o phir bhi meri maa hain kynki unki sath mera aatma ko rishta juda hua tha.

Bachpan se aajtak maine kabhi nahi socha tha Basundhara aunt ki baat kabhi saach hogi. Kynki mujhe mere maa par viswas tha ki, o kabhi mujhe galat nahi samjengi. Itna saal ka mera biswas , mera himmat sab kutch aaj toot gaya Heer. Basundhara aunt ki baat aaj saach sabit hogayi aur iss sach ne mujhe aaj phir se apna maa ko khone ki ehasas dila diya. Prem finally broke down in tears . He was hurting badly and he did not know how to minimize that feeling.

Heer's heart was breaking after watching her soul mate in such vulnerable state. She again started to feel deep anger for Gayetri for hurting her husband like that. Heer now understood how Gayetri's word touched a sore spot in Prem's heart.

"Sab kutch theek ho jayegi Prem. Sambalo apne aap ko , koi aur tumhara saat de na de main hamesha tumhai saat dongi. Heer's eyes also got wet while speaking to Prem. In reply Prem pulled Heer into a tight hug and Heer hugged him back. Her head was resting on Prem's neck.

"Kyun hota aisa Heer. Kyun kutch insane badal jate he, unka najariza, soach badal jate? Prem asked his Prem.

"Waqat aur halat insane ko badal deti hain Prem. Heer quietly replied Prem.

"Mujhe aaj iss baat ka bhi gum hain ki unhone tum par iljam di, tumhari haar acchayi ko, har kurbani ko bhool gayi, main unki taraf se tumse maafi mangta ho Heer. Prem told Heer while cupping her face.

"Tumhe maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hain Prem, tumne hain to kaha tha ki har insan apni karam ka jimmadar hoti hain kisi dosri ki nahi. Main jhoot nahi bolongi Prem unki har illzam mujhe takleef di, kynki main bhi unhe appni maa ka tara manti ho. Lekin jab tumne meri saat di, jab tumne meri taraf se sawal kya tab meri sari takleef door hogayi. Jab tak tum mere saat ho tab tak mujhe zindegi se aur kutch nahi chayie. Heer told Prem in an emotional voice while touching his face with her hands.

"Maine iss liye tumhari saat di kynki tum sahi the Heer aur jabtak tumhari ye Prem zinda hain o tumhari khilaf koi galgat ilzam ashen nahi kare ga. Kynki Prem aur Heer to ek hain. Heer prem ka pratik hain aur Prem sabse jyda Heer main samhaya hua hain. Prem softly kissed Heer's forehead after telling her that.

"Prem tumhari isse payar mujhe takat deti hain har mushkil se larne ki. Heer hugged Prem after saying that. She was slowly running her hand through his black hair lovingly. Prem was also enjoying her touch and it made him feel peaceful.

"Heer kaal main tumhe ek special place main le jana chata ho. Prem sweetly told Heer.

"Kaha Prem? A curious Heer asked Prem.

"O to ek surprise hain tumhare liye. Prem replied.

"Main tumhare saat kahi bhi jane ke liye raazi ho Prem. Heer softly told Prem.

"Itna bishwas hain tumhe muj par? Prem lovingly questioned her.

"Aapne app se bhi zyda. Heer confidently replied.

"Main tumse wada karta ho Heer main tumhari biswas ko kabhi toot ne nahi doonga. Chalo aab so jate hain bahut raat ho gaya hain. Prem suggested.

Finally, two lovers got themselves sleeping in each other arms in the bed. They were worrying about the family situation but they also know when they were together they could face the whole world.

End of Part 2.

This Os will be concluded in the next part.

I am very much thankful to all of my readers. I hope you all will continue to show support for this story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Page 3 Part 2

So it's gona end soon 😭 v sad 😭

Lovely convo between PH.

Nice that Prem is v honest and wow he counted exact number of days since his mom's passing and g3's entry in his life.

What about Nihal - after the incident no one talked with him 😲
I thoight that is one thing g3 would make sure to have happened.

Sweet PH and Heer is being a strong support and caring wife. Her support is v soothing.

Prem is going to give a surprise huh - A date may be hmmm let's see.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow itz amazing n Beautifully written.. waiting at which place prem taking Heer.. Plz update next part soon...
Edited by Trisha510 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good work 👍🏼
Nice lines from Mrs.Raheja
Let's see what'll happen in the next..will u write which i think or something different .
Waiting for next
Posted: 7 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: AASUS

Page 3 Part 2

So it's gona end soon 😭 v sad 😭

Lovely convo between PH.

Nice that Prem is v honest and wow he counted exact number of days since his mom's passing and g3's entry in his life.

What about Nihal - after the incident no one talked with him 😲
I thoight that is one thing g3 would make sure to have happened.

Sweet PH and Heer is being a strong support and caring wife. Her support is v soothing.

Prem is going to give a surprise huh - A date may be hmmm let's see.

Don't worry I will write a new ff, which will be different than this.
You will find out about Nihal in next chapter.
Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Trisha510

Wow itz amazing n Beautifully written.. waiting at which place prem taking Heer.. Plz update next part soon...

Thanks for your kind words. I will try to update in next 3-4 days.

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