New Prem Heer OS: I will never leave you (Epilogue on page 8) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Finally got to reading part 3 😳

Very nicely done. You reworked the entire Veera-Nihal scenario a hundred time better than the original one put out by the CVs...👏

I especially liked the proofs Prem presented Gaytri and the family.
Loved the tiny but cute Meet part near the end.

Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

Now I have to find time to read your FF 😆

Yea, I always thought cvs were unfair with Nihal and Veera and Gayetri were never exposed.
Please read the epilogue of this os on page 8.
If you can get any time then please also read my Prem Heer ff You are my destiny, I already wrote prologue and 2 chapters of this ff.

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