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I will never leave you OS part 3:
Heer woke up in early morning and felt her husband held her tightly. Heer saw the face of her husband. There he was sleeping with calmness in his face; however, Heer could detect hidden pain in his handsome face. She also looked how possessively he was holding her, as she would go away if loosed his grip on her.
Heer could understand how deeply her Prem was feeling vulnerable. She hugged her husband back and rubbing his back slowly. She finally kissed on his forehead. She silently vowed to give her support to Prem whenever he needed.
Feeling Heer's touch on his forehead Prem woke up and he looked directly at his beautiful wife. She was surprised to see her husband had been waked up and he was directly looking at her.
"Kya dekh raha ho, Prem. Heer shyly asked her husband.
"Main to ek apsara ko dekh ra ho aur soach ra ho kitne kush kismet ho main jo maine iss apsara ki payar paya. Satch me Heer tum bahoot khubsurat lag raha ho. Mere bas chale to sare din tumhe apne bahoon me samet kar kata doo isi bistar par. Prem's passionately commented. His hand was busy in touching her beautiful hair.
"Tum bhi na, Prem kutch bhi bolte ho. She smiled while replying to her husband. She could not explain how much happy she was feeling when her Prem was describing her beauty. She could feel his love for her in his every praise of her.
"Sahi to keha raha ho main Heer, Tumhe khud bhi nahi pata tum kitni khobsurat ho, mere najar se deko Heer tumhe pata chal jayegi ki tumko bhawgwan ne tumhe kitni payar se banaya. Prem was cupping his wife face while he was praising her beauty.
Heer did not know what to say. She did not spend any time in the past to think about her own beauty. But, whenever her Prem uttered those lovely words to praise her beauty. She found herself more beautiful. Prem's word had the strength to make her feel like the most beautiful woman in the whole universe.
"Prem. Heer only uttered the name of her husband after that she hide her face in Prem's neck.
Prem was surprised to see Heer's reaction. He tightened his grip on her.
"Kya hua Heer. Prem asked Heer curiously.
"Tum kheto kit um kush kismet ho par mujhe lagti hain sabse jyda kush kismat to main ho jo tumhe apni jeevan saathi ki roop me paya. Jo meri liye duniya se bhi lardne ke liye tayaar hain, jo har kadam pe meri humsafar bana.
Tum meri zindegi ho Prem. Prem main soch bhi nahi sakti main kaise jee pati agar main tumse alag ho jati . Tum meri roohn main bas gaya ho Prem, meri sasson me tum samha choka ho. Aab meri zindagi tumhari bina adhoora hain Prem. Heer was softly crying while she was expressing her deep feelings.
Prem looked at his love of life. He was thinking his vulnerability and his pain but now he realized what was going through Heer's heart when Gayetri asked him to leave her. How much fear she was feeling when she was thinking Prem might leave her. He was feeling the loss of his mother. But his Heer already lost her parents and she would feel unbearable pain if she lost him too.
Prem softly kissed on her neck and then starting to express his feelings to her.
"Heer iss sansar main aisi koi takaat nahi hain jisne mujhe tumse alag kar sakte hai. Kynki hamara payar saccha hain, humara dilo ka rishta saccha hain. Hum to ek dusre ka takat ho, sahara ho, aur main hamesha iss duniya ke samne hamari payar ke liye larne ke liye tayar ho.
Tumhe yaad hai Daljeet chachi ko mandap maine kaha tha ki tumhari aur duniya ki beech main iss Prem khara hain, main aaj bhi khara ho tumhare liye duniya ka samne.
Tum mera dilo ka dhadkan ho, mera zinda rahena ko ehasas ho, Mera zindagi ki har andhera maine tum mera roshni ho. Maut ke baad bhi hum ek dusre se jore rahenge. Kynki maut sirf sharer ka hota hain, attma ko nahin aur hamara rishta to attma ka rishta hain.
Prem's eye started to get wet when he was telling how important she was to him. Prem's passionate speech only made Heer more emotional, which in turn made Prem more emotional. The love they felt for each other was very precious to them and it was increasing day by day.
After spending quite a few minutes in each other's arms they finally separated, however, their hand was still intertwined with each other.
"Heer tum tayaar ho jao, hamhe ghar jana hain, pata nahi oha kya ho raha hain. Prem told Heer in a serious tone.
"Ha prem pata nahi hum iss problem ko kaise solve karenge. Heer commented in a worried tone.
" Jo bhi hoga , hum dono milka uska samna karenge, haina. Prem softly asked his wife, Heer replied by nodding her head.
In Juneja Mansion
The whole family was waiting for Prem & Heer arrival. They already heard one-sided version of the events from Gayetri and Veera however, they wanted to hear from Prem , Heer also.
Approximately, at 10 am they saw Prem & Heer at their doorstep. Nevertheless, the Juneja family became more surprised after seeing Nihal along with them.
"Ye ya par kya kar raha hain Prem Bhaiyan. Harman angrily asked Prem. He was already convinced about Nihal's crime after strongly pursued by his mother, sister and his wife.
"Maine Nihal ko bulaya kutch satch ko aplogo ki samne anne ke liye. Prem told everyone in an emotionless tone.
" Konsa satch Prem, satch to hamari samne, ye to tera Heer ki liye andha payar ye jo tujhe satch dekhne se rokh raha hain. Aur kyun na hoga tu to Veera ka sautela bhai hai tu to degai apni biwi aur uska bhai ka sath. Gayetri remarked bitterly.
"Maa aap yain kya raha hain , aap acche se janti hain Prem bhaiya ne kabhi bhi humme aur kulraj di me bhedbhao nahi ki. Preet protested. He was surprised by his mother behavior towards his PB.
"Oh please Preet tum aab Prem bhaiya ki tarafdari karna band karo. Lagta hain tume bhi Meher ne badkha diya apni behen ki khilaf. Maya smirked after commenting that.
"Bhaiya apni biwi se kahiye aisi bad wo na kije. Preet told Harman.
"Kyun kaho main Maya to galat nahi hain. Galat to Prem Bhaiya he jisne Nihal ka sath dera raha hain apni behen ke khilaf. Mujhe bhi lagta hain Prem bhaiya sautela ka tara behave kor raha hain. Harman bluntly replied to Preet.
"Main kisiki Khilaf nahin ho Harman, main to bas saach ka sath ho. Apne sahi kaha hain maa andhi payar insan ko gumrah kar deta hain saach se, jaise aapke sath hua hain maa. Apne to Nihal ko aapni safai me kutch balne nahi diya. Kher main apko batato hun satch kya hain. Satch ye hain ki Veera ne khud ani abortion karayi aur ye rahi uski paper jisme saaf likha hain Veera ne khud abortion kiya. , uski doctor ki sath appointment list me naam bhi yaha par hain.
Prem after saying that gave the family members the copies of these papers. Everyone was shocked after reading the papers. They could not beeive their eyes. They could not digest the fact, they were wrong; Veera lied to all of them. Gayetri became speechless after reading these papers; she began to realize how Veera took advantage of her motherly affection.
"Ye paper nakli bhi to ho sakte haina? Gayetri asked in a weak tone. Her motherly heart still did not want to believe about the unwanted truth of Veera.
"To phir bhi aapko yakeen nahi hua papers dekhne ke bad, koi baad nahi chaliye main aap logo ko kutch dikhata hu. Prem opened DVD player and put a DVD into it.
Everyone looked at the TV screen and they saw how Veera entered into the clinic, how she asked for an abortion, how she told the doctor it is her own decision as she wanted to remain fit. Everyone except Prem, Heer, Nihal got shocked after seeing that.
"Ayye main aapko kutch aur bhi dekha ta ho Prem put another DVD into the DVD player.
That time Junejas saw how Maya telling Veera after becoming mother she would gain weight and how upbringing of a child would be time consuming and she would not have any time for herself. Veera agreed with Maya.
The whole family bends their head in shame they could not able to look at Nihal. Veera was nervous as she was getting exposed for her lies.
"Aap Nihal ablogo ko batayenge uske baad kya hua , bolo Nihal. Prem told Nihal .
Then Nihal told the family how Veera told him about abortion. How she insulted his financial condition, and their relationship, how an accident happened, how Veera threatened Nihal with his sisters happiness if he told the truth.
"Us waqt Nihal ke mobile me call aya tha, Nihal phone kat nahi paya theek tara se aur ye sari batten voice mail me record hogya . Ye raha tape. By saying Prem played the tape and the whole family heard very clearly how Veera was trying to blackmail Nihal to make him silent about the whole matter.
" Kya hua aap sab chup kyun ho gaye achanak? Chauk gaye aoni Veera ka ye roop dekh kar. Ye hi saach hai, ye hei aasli Veera, jisne aajtak Nihal ko apni jeevan sathi ki roop me nahi mana. Jisne aajtak apni pati har waqt tane dere arhai hai, jisne kabhi bhi apni rishto ki koi kadar nahi , jisne itne payar karne wala pati ko pane ki baad bhi usski payar ko kabhi samaj nahi saka. Jisne bina kuch soch bichar ke bina abortion kara li kynki use aapni body ka shape maintain karni thi. Ek bar nahi socha iss bat se Nihal pe kya gujrega. Prem told everyone.
"Bhaiya wo main... Veera was trying to say but Prem stopped her, as he was not interested in hearing any of Veera's excuses.
"Itna sab karne ki baad bhi tune apni safai deni ki kosish kar rahi hai, tujhe sharam nahi ye sab karte hue. Tune ekbar bhi Nihal se baat nahi ki, bina kutch soche samjhe tune itna bara kadam utha liya. Iss ke bad jab Nihal ko sacchyi ke bare pata chal gaya to tu ujhe blackmail karne ki koshish ki. Tune ek bhai ki apne beheno ki sukho ke liye mujburi ka faida lene ki koshish ki. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi kar sakta .
Prem shouted at Veera, his voice was shaking with anger.
"Bauji , aap hamesha mujhe iss ghar ka Ram bolte he. To aap mujhe batiye Bhagwan Shri Ram kiske saat dete Nihal ka ya Veera ka. Aap hi mujhe samjhya tha hamesha saach aur nay ke sath dene ke liye. Aaj main saach ka sath khara hu.
Ek bar sochiye, Veera ka pass to maa, bauji hain, bhai, behen hain, ussi dam par hi to usne Nihal ko fasani ki himmat ki hain. Kynki Nihal ke sath dene ke liye to koi bhi nahi he unki maa, bauji nahi rahe. Aapni khud ki dam par o aaj makam par poucha par kabhi bhi kise se kutch madad nahi manga.
O veera ka har tane, baijjati chupchap ashen karte gya taki unki do behen aapni sasural main kush rahe. Ujhe laga agar kutch bhi hua to aap log bina uske baat shune use doshi goshit kardenge aur uski do behen ko taklif denge. Uska daar jayej tha kynki maa aur Harman ne to aisai kiya ya tak maa ne mujhe Heer ko chorne ke liye kahi.
Hamari pariwar ne Nihal ki acchayi ki faida uthaya aajtak aur iss ke badle me hum ne use kiya dia taane, illzam, nafrat. Bauji ekdin jab aap Balraj papa se milenge to aap kaise najar mila payenge jab unhone app ko pochega kyun iss ghar ki beti ne unki beta ka zindegi barbad karne ki koshish ki. Prem's eyes got wet when he was talking with his father.
On the other hand, after learning the truth Lalit had lost the ability to say something. Tears were continuously falling from his eyes. He was feeling deeply ashamed because of his daughter's deeds.
Meher was also crying after hearing everything. She did not know her brother tolerate so much for her and Heer's happiness. Preet was holding his wife tightly try to give her moral support.
Heer on the other hand was feeling proud for both, her husband and her brother. Her fingers were intertwined with Prem.
"Aur Harman tu aaj mujhe apno ki liye khade hone ka nasiyat de raha hain. Kaha tha tera ye jassbat jab tune iss pariwar ka sath chor diya tha, apni kushi ke liye. Kaha tha tere ye apnapan job iss ghar ko tera sahara ka sabse jyda jurarat tha. Jab tune iss ghar chor diya tab isi Nihal ne iss ghar ki haat thama tha. Kya tha uss waqt hamara pas, aare sadak pe aa gaye the hamlok.
Nihal aapne khud ka 50 lakh ruppe tere bhabhi ko de diya tha, jisko tere bhabi ne hamari pariwar ke liye kharach kya. Tujhe maloom hain ye kitna jaroori tha iss ghar ke liye. Phir bhi Nihal ne kabhi apna itna bada ehasan ka kabhi jikar nahi ki, kynki Nihal ne iss pariwar ko apnya khud ki pariwar mani. Aur aaj tu uski safay sunne ke liye tayar nahi hain. Prem reminded Harman about his past actions and Nihal's contribution to Juneja family.
"Aur Maya tumne ye bolne ki koshish kar rahi ho ki Heer aur Meher mujhe aur Preet ko apne bhadka rahe hain. Har insane tumhari jaisa nahi hoti hain Maya, jisne apni hi ghar ko todene ki koshish ki. Heer sirf mujhe nahi aapnya meri poori pariwar ko apnaya o bhi mujh se shadi hone ki pehele. Kitni bar usne apne aap ko dao pe lagayi iss ghar ke liye o tum soach bhi nahi sakte. Maya aapni soach ko badaldo barna ekdin tumhari pas koi bhi nahi rahegi. Prem quietly told Maya.
At last Prem gave his attention to Gayetri . She was silently crying. She was cursing herself for supporting Veera.
"Maa aap hamesha mujhe ye kahati rahi maa-beta ka rishta sirf khoono ka nahi hota hain, ye to attma ka rishta hain. To aap phir kaise mujhe aaj sautela kahi, kyun aap mera baat sunne ke liye tayar nahi the, kyun maa kyun. Prem asked Gayetri, while he was crying uncontrollably.
"Maa apko usdin yaad he jab Basu aunt ne kahi thi..
Flashback
"O kya haina Mrs. Juneja mujhe ek bimari hain aur os bimari ka naam saach bolne ka bimari, main hamesha saach bolti hu chahe wo jitna bhi kaura kyun ha ho aur jahir se baat hain mere iss adat koi logo ko accha nehi lagta . Aap Prem ka samne jitna bhi aachi banni ki koshish kyun na kare main janta ho aap ekdin iss me aur apni sagi bacchion main bhed bhao korengi.
Ek din aapne sage bachao ki baato ko samne aapko Prem ki koi baat sunayi aur samaj nahi ayegi Ek din aap apni saagi baccho ki kushi ke liye apni sautela beta ka kushi nahi dekhay degi. Ek din aap khud use ye kahengi ki aap ko us ki harkato main aapni sautela beta dekta hain saga nahin.
Flashback End
Maine kabhi sapne bhi nahi socha tha Basu aunt ki baat sach hogi. Lekin aaj apne uski baat ko saach bana diya Maa. Kyun hua aisa maa. Shayed mujhmei koi kami tha jo aaj mujhme aap ko apna sautela beta najar ayi.
Jante he maa jab bhi Veera aur Harman ne mujhe sautela kaha mujhe bahut taklif hoti thi kyun ki mera liye to koi saga aur sautela nahi tha sab mera bhai aur behen tha.
Lekin jab aapne mujhe sautela kaha tab mujhe laga mera pairo se zamin hat gaya. Mujhe ye eshas hua ki mere maa aab iss dunya me nahi rahi, jis ehasas ko maine biss saal pahele bhul gaya tha aaj o laut aya. Maa main aapko bata nahi sakta iss waqt mujhe kitna dard mehosos hora hain. Main nahi janta ki aab apko meri takleef se koi farak padta ya nahi. Prem ended his conversation with Gayetri in a sad voice.
"Prem Gayetri was only able to say his name but she could not get courage to say more.
"Bass aur kutch mat kahiye. Main pahele si toot choka hun aap ki mooh se sautela sunke, aab shayed mujhme itna himmat nahi hain ki main aap ka jabwab sun sakhu.Prem sadly told her.
" Heer, Nihal tum dono mere sath kamre aao, mujhe tum dono se kutch baat karni hain.
Prem asked Nihal and Heer to come with him in his room. He did not give anyone the chance to say something and left for his room with Heer and Nihal.
Preet wanted to meet his PB immediately but Meher made him realized that they should go few minutes later. Preet and Maher went to their room. Rest of the family remain in the living room of the Mansion, they were too busy to digest the truth.
In Prem-Heer room:
After they reached into the bedroom, Prem was the first one who decided to break the silence.
"Nihal , main janta hu mujhe ye kahena ki haq nahi hai, ho sake to meri pariwar ko maaf kar dena. Un sabki taraf se main tumse maafi mangta hain. Prem asked forgiveness from Nihal for his family's behavior towards him.
"Bhai mante hona mujhe , tab do bhaio ko beech mafi kaise aagya, mujhe to iss baat ka kushi hain, ki tumne mujhe galat nahi samjha aapni baat kaheni ki ek mauka diya aur phir mujhe madat ki saboot jutane me. Jo kutch bhi hua shayed o mera kismet me likha hua tha. Mujhe iss bat ka bhi kushi hain ki mera bahen bahut kush kismat hain kynki use tumhari jaise pati mila. Nihal praised him.
"Haa bhai , main bahoot kush kismat ho kynki mujhe Prem jaise pati mile aur aap jaisa bhai. Heer proudly remarked.
"Nihal aaj ke baat , jab bhi tumhe koi apno ka jarurat hoga tab yaad rakhna main aur Heer ho hamesha tumhara saat dene ke liye. Prem hugged his brother in law after saying this.
" Lekin tum dono ne clinic ka video kaise jugar kiya? Heer asked Prem
" Prem ne apna tadika chalaya doctor pe.
Flashback:
"Dekhiye Mr. Juneja main aap ko ye video footage nahi de sakti, ye doctor aur patient ke beech confidential matter hain. Doctor told Prem.
"Theek hain, Nihal tumhe pata hai Satish Kashyap ji ki bare main, wohi jo state Health Ministry pain secretary hain ,Main aur unka bete me to bohoti gaheri dosti hain. Wo shayed mujhe bata raha tha ki uncle ne kutch clinic ko bandh karne ki soach raha hain jisme facilities kam hai . Tum iss clinic dekh lo bed kam, rogi jyda, doctor 10 hone chaiye tha he 5, iss instruments ko dekho kab kharida hai inko 1990 me.
Main to soch raha ho main iss clinic ka jikar uncle ji se karonga,
After saying that Prem dialed Satish's number and put it on loudspeaker
"Namaste Uncle ji kaise ye aap. Prem asked Satish uncle.
"Main to theek ho beta tum kaise ho aur bhaisab aur bhabiji kaise hain. Satish replied.
"Sab acche hain, uncle ji kya aap mujhe kutch waqt de sakte hai ek ghante main.
"Jaroor beta.Satish assured Prem.
"Thanks uncle, main ek ghante me aapse milta ho. Prem told him.
"Chalo ,Nihal hum chalet hain, doctor sahiba to hume madat karne ke liye taiar nahi hain.Prem told Nihal.
"Rookiye, main aap ko footage de rahi ho but please ye baat aap kisi aur ko maat bataye.Doctor told Prem.
Flashback end
"Prem , aab Nihal bhaiya aur Veera ka kiya. Heer asked her husband.
"Heer, ab to bas ek hi rasta hain wo hain divorce. Nihal main janta hunt um hairan ho, lekin tum sacho, kabtak tum Veera ka liye aapni zindegi kharap karte rahogi, tumhara samne puri zindegi ki para hua hain, aage baro apne zindegi me. Prem advised Nihal and give him divorce paper.
"Prem shayed tum thik hi kahe rahe ho, aapto iss rishta ka koi maine hi nahi raha. After saying that, Nihal signed divorce paper.
Heer was upset about the whole thing but she could understand that it was unavoidable.
"Main tum logo ka ghari main intezr karonga, jaldi aa jana. Nihal left the room to give Prem and Heer some alone time.
"Tum bahoot acche ho Prem. Heer smiled at her husband.
" Accha to iss acche pati ko kutch reward to milna chaiye . Prem teased Heer.
"Tum bhi na Prem. Heer blushed deeply.
" Main bhi kya, accha ek kiss to banta hain. Prem told Heer in a romantic tone.
"Baad me Prem, koi agyega. Heer replied. Heer knew Prem was trying to forget his sorrow by trying to be in light mood. Therefore, she was playing along.
"Thick hain, raat me deklunga tumhe. Prem sweetly warned her.
"Prem, tum hamesha hai aise ho , kabhi bhi khud ki gum jahir nahi korte, Prem ab tum ekela nahin ho main hu tumhari saath tumhari gum baat ne ke liye. Heer rested her head on his neck.
"Main janta hu Heer, jab tak tum mere sath ho main har gum ko sahen kar sakta ho.Heer main ek baat soach raha haun usme tumhari ray janna chati ho.Prem suddenly became serious and asked his wife.
"Kya, Prem? Heer curiously asked her wife.
"Heer maine socha ki kyun na hum Canada shift ho jay. Mujhe to bachpan mai uha ka permanent resident ship mil chukka tha. Aab apply karunga to uha ka citizenship bhi mil jayega. Aur mera wife hone ki naate tumhe aasani se visa bhi mil jayegi. Prem replied Heer.
Prem's answer shocked Heer.
"Lekin, kyun Prem? Heer was shocked to hear that.
"Kynki hamari zindegi nayi tara se saru karna chata hu. Ye par rahunga to koi na koi nayi musibat ayega. Tumhe to pata hain ghar ka mahal kaisa hai. Sage sautela ka baat chal raha hain, upar se mujhe yakeen Veera koi nayi drama jarur korengi, aur insab me tumhara apaman hoga , jo main kabhi sahen nahi kar sagunga.
Canada pe hamara business hain , jo main woha se aur bhi acche se handle kar paonga. Aur uha par tum apni education khatam kar sakti ho. Mujhe pata hain Heer tumhe bass ek saal lagega apni study complete karne ke liye. Prem told Heer.
Heer knew Prem was logical in his thinking. She understood that, sometimes you had to make tough choices. Heer was also happy when she learnt that, Prem wanted her to complete her study. She always wanted to do that but after her parents's death circumstances made her to sacrifice her dream. Now she could dream again.
"Accha study khatam hone ki baat main kya karungi. Heer asked her husband.
"Uske baad tum mere saat company me kam karugi company ke co director ban ke. Prem notified her.
"To tum mujhe hamesha aapna pass rakhna chata ho? Heer cutely asked her.
"Ha Heer main chata ki tum hamesha mera pass raho, office main bhi aur ghar pe bhi. Kynki tum mera zinde rahne ke ehasas ho, Insan ko zinda rahene ke liye oxygen lagta hai Heer, lekin mujhe zinda rahene ka liye oxygen sath tumhari sath bhi zaroori hain. Tum mera dil ka dhadkan ho Heer , aur insan apni dil ka dhadkan se dour nahi rahe sakta. Prem passionately replied to Heer while he got himself lost in Heer's eyes.
Heer blushed more when she felt her husband's intense looking at her. She was touched by his every word. She also felt same about him. She always wanted to be with him in his every step as his proud life partner.
" Main bhi ye hi chahati hu Prem , ki hum hamesha saat rahe kabhi ek dosre se juda na ho. Heer hugged her husband tightly. Prem returned the hug. He was holding her waist in one hand and slowly playing with her hair in other hand while closing his eyes to feel her more closely.
"Oops humne kutch nahi dekha. Preet announced loudly while covering his eyes with his hands, his wife Meher was also doing it.
"Tum dono yaha par kya kar raha ho. Prem was little disappointed as his romantic moment with wife ended too soon.
" Bhaiya aab aap gussa maat ki jiye. Hume kya jane aap itni romantic hain ki daroja khule rahene ki baat bhi bhabi ka saath romance shuru kar denge. Preet teased his elder brother.
"Oh Preet tum sirf jiju ko kyun kahe raha ho, Heer di bhi kutch kam the kiya. Dekhana kis tara se jiju ko kaske pakad rakhi thi aur unki haat to jiju ke... Meher teased Heer.
"Meher teri to mai pittai laga dungi jamke, aur tera bhi main khabar leti ho Preet. Miya-biwi dono ki dono besharam hain. Heer angrily told them.
" Ye lo Meher, romance kar raha ye dono , aur hume keh raha besharam. Preet again teased Prem-Heer.
However Preet and Meher soon regretted for teasing Prem and Heer. As Prem was holding Preet's ear and Heer was holding Meher's ear.
"Didi, please chodiye na.Dukh raha hain. Meher pleaded to Heer.
"Ha bhai, chod dona please mera kaan lal hogya hain. Preet pleaded to his elder brother.
Prem and Heer both laughed at Preet and Meher's antics and they left their ears and hug them.
Prem and Heer told them about their decision to move into Canada. Preet and Meher was really sad after hearing that as Prem- Heer was leaving them but Prem-Heer told them it was necessary and Preet-Meher should try to observe house's climate for few months and after that if they wanted then they could come to Prem-Heer.
After Preet and Meher leaving their room, Prem again started conversation with his wife.
" Heer aab jaldi se ready ho jao, hume Ambala jana hain.Prem notified Heer.
"Hum dono uha kyun jayenge? A curious Heer asked Prem.
"Sirf hum donoi nahil, bauji,Kul di, Kiran jiju,Nihal, Preet aur Meher bhi hamare saat ja raha hain. Prem informed her.
" Lekin kyun? Heer found herself more confused.
"Wo hi to tumhari liye surprise hain. Prem smirked.
End of part 3.
I really wanted to end this os in this part. However, as you are seeing this part is already huge compare to previous parts. Part 3 is 3.5 times larger than part 2.
Therefore, I think it is wise to end this part here. The next part will be epilogue of this os.
I am happy to see so much positive responses from you all. Your kind works always inspire me to write more on Prem-Heer. Please continue your love and appreciation for this os.

Edited by mijanur - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
I really love this os. The way it goes and the way premeer standing for each. I loved ur style too. You are an amazing writer.
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alina...

I really love this os. The way it goes and the way premeer standing for each. I loved ur style too. You are an amazing writer.

Thanks for liking this is.
I will conclude this in next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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completed all 3 parts in a stretch. what a beautiful story. awesome man.. how badly i wish CVS showed something like this in the show. This is the real premeer. This is how prem should have behaved instead of kicking heer out when his mom demanded. they ruined prem too after reunion. he was a perfect son to lover..but as husband prem was a disappointment in show.
but now i can see how beautifully the hsow could hav.. thank you for writing. looking forward to read the last part and also more stories from you
Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

completed all 3 parts in a stretch. what a beautiful story. awesome man.. how badly i wish CVS showed something like this in the show. This is the real premeer. This is how prem should have behaved instead of kicking heer out when his mom demanded. they ruined prem too after reunion. he was a perfect son to lover..but as husband prem was a disappointment in show.

but now i can see how beautifully the hsow could hav.. thank you for writing. looking forward to read the last part and also more stories from you

Yes, I totally agree with you Prem could do better as a husband. His behaviour as husband was also illogical. I shiva was a disaster for kiss Deshian as cv. She had no clue about the essence of the show. She was desperate to make it a sass bahu saga from a love story .
Thanks for liking this story.
In my next story Here will be older than Prem and they will be second or third cross cousin.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: mijanur

Yes, I totally agree with you Prem could do better as a husband. His behaviour as husband was also illogical. I shiva was a disaster for kiss Deshian as cv. She had no clue about the essence of the show. She was desperate to make it a sass bahu saga from a love story .

Thanks for liking this story.
In my next story Here will be older than Prem and they will be second or third cross cousin.

the real premeer is vikas gupta's premeer.. even after that they managed to keep that charm during rajesthan track and the one followed.. but once prremeer got married.. then started to miss it.. leap was the second blow and second juneja family was final nail🥱
wow.. so a mature love story is waiting for us? cant wait to read
Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

the real premeer is vikas gupta's premeer.. even after that they managed to keep that charm during rajesthan track and the one followed.. but once prremeer got married.. then started to miss it.. leap was the second blow and second juneja family was final nail🥱
wow.. so a mature love story is waiting for us? cant wait to read

I will develop this story once I finished this os.
I am also starting to think write a prem -heer story that based on turkish series kilark ask.
Another one will be based on post leap where heer decided to forgive prem in shiv mandir while prem was going to Delhi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
woohoo
Amazing dailouges
loved loved loved it
superbbb os
Love prem Heer sceans ❤️
hehe aacha hua maya nd veera dono ka sach samne aaya
soo happy :p
awosome update thank uuu
Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: tarannum6

woohoo
Amazing dailouges
loved loved loved it
superbbb os
Love prem Heer sceans ❤️
hehe aacha hua maya nd veera dono ka sach samne aaya
soo happy :p
awosome update thank uuu

Thanks for your kind remarks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
This is also so beautiful... Love this Prem-Heer os

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