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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

The sneak peak is very interesting, she's the bolder one here.

Hats off for your talent and imagination. So many different stories, all of them entertaining, gripping and wonderfully written.

Looking forward to the first chapter.

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Interesting sneak peak

The story seems different

Waiting for next

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

OMG...Maithu,don't tell me that this one is of a teacher-student...😈

Really???

You really tease us with sneak-peaks,I have already started imagining...😉

Sounds interesting

Will be waiting...😛

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
😊 super girl is ready with another story... 😛 you are too talented maithu dear... sneak peak is lovely... I think chakor shows her new avatar in this story... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... 😉 ❤️

Without you all I wouldn't be here!

I'm floating in the air with your compliments dear.

Thanks a lot.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: meshmesh
The sneak peak is very interesting, she's the bolder one here.

Hats off for your talent and imagination. So many different stories, all of them entertaining, gripping and wonderfully written.

Looking forward to the first chapter.

Thanks buddy!

I will not say anything about them.

Thanks for the encouraging words.

First chapter on 18th!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting sneak peak
The story seems different
Waiting for next

Thanks yaar!

Trying a new thing!

Let's see how it comes out!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: KUTUR
OMG...Maithu,don't tell me that this one is of a teacher-student...😈
Really???

You really tease us with sneak-peaks,I have already started imagining...😉

Sounds interesting
Will be waiting...😛

Don't think naughty dear!

I have several version of Teacher-Student relationship in my mind! LOL Even some indecent story but for sure will not do that!

It will be a decent one with only good moments.

I just hope to not have all the loopholes possible.

See on 18th with the 1st part.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Sp was so different..here i can say that "she s more mischievous than him"
Am i right sis..
Just waiting for ur 1st part of the story..
Luv u sis❤️

You can say that dear for Chakor.

Hope you will like it!

Love you too dear!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: maithu_

Don't think naughty dear!
I have several version of Teacher-Student relationship in my mind! LOL Even some indecent story but for sure will not do that!
It will be a decent one with only good moments.
I just hope to not have all the loopholes possible.
See on 18th with the 1st part.

Poor me...😔😆

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Hey!

Changed TS to SS, else each part would be a separate book! LOL
So more than 10 parts.
Coming with the 1st Part of Orenda!
Just to inform you.
There will be no thoughts of any characters in this story as I do in most of my writings.
Feel free to imagine what can they think.
An introduction part!
Happy reading!

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Part 1

"Good morning students. Hope I don't disturb your class Mr. Rajvanshi?"
He smile.
"We have got a new friend for you all.
Miss. Chakor Bhuvan Lal!" showing the girl who was by his side before continuing "She was board first last year in Punjab. I wish her to make a record this year too along with making our school proud." She smiled a plastic smile looking at him when he faced her "Mr. Rajvanshi from here on take care of her."
"Sure sir!"the teacher replied.
And the principal left from there.

"Welcome to your class Miss. Lal! I'm Suraj Rajvanshi. And I will be your Maths teacher for this year. Make yourself confortable and present yourself to your class." he said and turned towards his class.

"Thank you Sir!" she adresses him before turning to the class "I'm Chakor! I'm from Punjab.We are here since 1 week as my father got transferred here from Pune."
"Pune and Punjab! Something is missing Miss. Lal."
"He got transferred at least 8 times before getting a permanent posting here. He was the one to travel, the rest of my family stayed in Punjab until last week."
"Ok! Hope you will enjoy your life in this city and have great friends here." she nodded "You may take a seat."

She went to the first bench in the middle and sat there alone after putting her bag down.

"Since 1 month has passed from the starting of school, you can get all the previous lessons from the leader and topper of this class Miss. Raichand." turning toward the girl in the 3 row left "Guide her in all her classes." and the girl nodded her head with a grin.

He turns to the board and started to teach them matrices.

Her whole concentration was on all the lessons.
She had to present herself to all the teachers who made appearance in the class.
She got to get most of the subjects lessons by lunch break with a warning.
"I'm Tina! But for you I will be only Leader. Here are the notes. I'm giving this only because he asked else, no one would dare to give you their notes or talk to you as I don't like you. I want all of them back by tomorrow morning else you will be out of this school."
"But"
"Never talk to me. Just listen! This is my school, so be aware of the fact that you can't contradict to what I say. And one more thing! Don't make yourself feel higher. Here, I will be the only one to top and not you. Got it." Saying so Chakor was left alone with notes in her hand.

The day finished with not a great mood for Chakor as no one talked to her.
As her house is just few minutes away from there, she started to walk out of the school when she was called by Maths teacher.

"Hope you got all the lessons?"
"Yes Sir!"
"If you don't understand anything, make notes of your questions and ask me after the class, before lunch tomorrow."
She nodded.
"Ask your classmates to help you if your aren't feeling to ask questions to me or any other teachers."
She smiled.
"Ok! See you tomorrow!" and he started to move away from there muttering "1 hour left for evening class. Have to finish the project on Algorithms!"
She heard him talk to himself seeing his watch and moving away from school.

She entered her house to be greeted by her brother:
"How was your first day at school Choti?"
"Hmmm" shaking her head signalling average.
"How are your teachers?"
"Good!"
"Friends?"
"None!"
"You know that we have to get used to here."
"I hate here. I hate this school. I hate my class." she rushed to upstairs to jump in to her room before launching on her bed.
Her brother came up to her room and knocked.
"What?" she barked still her face hidden in her pillow.

"I know that you miss your school and all your friends. I too miss my life there. But we have to Choti. For the happiness of our parents. So try please." he waited few seconds to see if he gets any answers but nothing came, so he continued "My classes starts in 30 minutes, I will be back around 8. Dad will be late too. Mom will be back once her lectures are finished. Take care Choti." he left from there.

She heard the main door shut and sounds of keys.
She got up from her bed, freshened up then started to work on her notes she has to pass to Tina, next day.

After 2 hours, half of her notes are filled but still 1/2 the work is pending.
Leaving her books there, she made her way to kitchen to grab two sandwiches that her mother had made for them before going for her work.

Once finished eating, she continued copying until sleep took care of her.
Her alarm rang around 5 AM to wake her up to find that she has slept over her notes with blankets over her head.

She got ready for school and made her way downstairs to have breakfast before getting on her feet to walk to school.
Once there, the first thing she saw was the T clan which belongs to Tina and her right hands and left hands.
Without saying another word than 'Thank you', she gave those notes back and left to her class.
This day started and ended with maths, one of her favorite subject.
All the classes of the day went interesting and like that few weeks passes.

No one dared to go against Tina's order, so Chakor was always left alone.
She comes to school, attend all classes with full attention, have lunch alone, rest of the classes goes on, then back to home where she will be alone most of the time.
She can't even chat a lot with her friends as this years studies determines the last 11 and 1/2 years of work and gives access to a better future.
Little by little, the number of friends she had started to reduce and now she has only 2 persons who are in contact with her.

Even if she is angry with her parents for shifting, his brother for supporting, she tries to be cool around them but it was impossible for her to not think of her previous happy life she had.

1 and 1/2 months of this miserable life passed.
She liked school but didn't love it anymore.
All teachers are happy with her works and marks.
Everybody started to like her but never showed it due to Tina.
Maths has become more than a favorite subject. Not only because it's maths but also because of the Teacher who is understanding, easy going and interesting.

She came to know he is the youngest of the teacher in this school, being 23 or 24 and this is his first year here.
He is not only a teacher but also a student himself with the evening classes for his PhD.
He is interested in basketball and he likes to keep distance with everyone when he is out of his teacher's coat.
The one information that interested her the most is that he is doing some research in Algebra and he was intellectually precocious children.
She even started to admire him and made him her role-model as she herself wanted to do PhD in Chemistry and become a teacher.
All these informations were discussed by most of her class students during breaks and especially Tina who seem to have a crush on the teacher.
That's what she heard from T clan.

Life was going smooth with no interest apart from her classes and her extra-activities which are classical dance and painting.
The 1st trimester of this year has just finished and exams was even better than what she expected.
She is back to school after 2 weeks of holidays and today is Monday and she has 2 hours of Maths in the end of the after-noon.

"So students! As discussed before your holidays, we are going to start Integrals." he announced
"NO" was the word echoing in the classroom.
He smiled and started to teach them all the basics and did few exercices added with question and answer session between them.
The bell rang and everyone started to back their bags to bid adieu to first long day of school.

Chakor packed everything except her notebook and a pencil with which she went to his desk.
"Please wait!" he said and went to see the peon who just knocked the door with a circulation letter in his hand.
Chakor just nodded and watched the classroom get empty.

Suraj came back to his seat with the paper he got from peon and put it inside a file in his bag before giving full attention to her.
Chakor neared him to put her notebook on his table to show him where she is having doubt.
She tripped on her shoe lace, making her note and pencil land on 2 different places over the big table and gripped his shoulder for support to not go head to head competition with the chair he is while he supported her by holding her left arm with his right.

The touch of his hand on her skin made her look at his face which was just 20 cm away from hers, only to lock their eyes together.
They were in the same position for few more seconds without any audience.

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Ok! Buddies!
How was it?
Ready to accept anything you throw on me!
Thanks for reading!
If you liked it: Hit the LIKE and COMMENT!
Next part: Part 2

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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