SS: Orenda (Completed + Epilogue) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

It was awesome..

No words to express my inner feelings today..

Omg..tat sitting scene..i m just laughing like a mad here..

It s interesting tat teacher s passing chit to the student..i saw the students passes chit while teacher takes class..

But here teacher passing chit to the student while students presentation..very different story sis..

This tina s always irritating..

I think tina itself help our sukor to come more closer..

If i m the chakor..i never think tat he s my teacher and all..i directly go on my knees and propose him..

I have to wait till 25th for next update..so sad..

But today ur story made my day..

Luv u..tc

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

So sukor are somewhat attracted to each other😉

The bench part was bit awkward for sukor😆

Chakor is locked in sport room, I think suraj will rescue her

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update!

So the seeds of love are in both their hearts.

The way you've written how they felt after their eyelock made it feel so real. I felt their awkwardness around each other.

I can imagine their embarrassment after the sitting incident, but the note exchange was very sweet.

I'm already wishing the week flies by to read the next chapter.

Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: J.arora

The part was again superb di ❤️

Happy to read the feeling of attraction is mutual. And specially Suraj 's side of description part coming from you was wonderful.

Chakor sitting on Suraj' s hand 😆- that scene, it was just too amazing and their conversation which followed was also so well described by you.

Well being a love story with an age difference, u justify it so well with these small bonding scenes, even though their bond develops slowly but it still remains the favorite of mine. 🤗

I am in love with this story of yours... ❤️

Sorry for the late comment had a lot on list this weekend so caught up with work.

Originally posted by: chasa

Omg..that is so embarrassing ..i absolutely loved it..pls update soon

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Another Awesome update 👍🏼
Bench scene is awkwardly hilarious
😆
Hope Suraj saves Chakor in time and teach lesson to Tina and gang
Waiting for next !!