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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: maithu_

I would say, it's not a comment! But an esay! Or a new story that you have extracted from Orenda! Hehehe
What have you named it?😉

@bold

Well,I request you to the honours dear,😃and also our other common friends here are also welcome for doing so😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: Eatifi

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Well,I request you to the honours dear,😃and also our other common friends here are also welcome for doing so😳

Oh dear!

You are the hard worker here, so I let you do the honours to name it for us!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: maithu_

I would say, it's not a comment! But an esay! Or a new story that you have extracted from Orenda! Hehehe
What have you named it?😉

Wow story within story

Lovely rabia

Name it Sukonda😉

This seems to be a good idea...

Maithu am really so pissed of after the hush hush wedding sukor didn't even hug..

Rabi now your shayari... Girl you know what i read the last two parts again.

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Wow story within story

Lovely rabia

Name it Sukonda😉

This seems to be a good idea...

Maithu am really so pissed of after the hush hush wedding sukor didn't even hug..

Rabi now your shayari... Girl you know what i read the last two parts again.

Sukonda??😆

Sorry Sumi,didn't got it...

Which two parts?

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Eatifi

Sukonda??😆

Sorry Sumi,didn't got it...
Which two parts?

Read orenda last two parts again...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Read orenda last two parts again...

Lovely name Sumi!

Me too dear! Wanted hugs and many more things!

But here not even a good side hug.

What will happen to Suraj's dream of having his honeymoon with his DP!

Poor Suraj!

Aww Sumi! You read it once again the last 2 parts!

Did you find any hidden secrets in there ;-)

Well one more day to wait and you will be Maithu! What have you done to us? :-)

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#237

Maithu

I am waiting for the Thursday eagerly for some sukorilicious moments... else grhhh i will come to you!

Hidden secret just that i feel the makers got clue from your story and are taking a leap of 5 years like she went for studying...

evern since I read that stupid news of KN being killed and chakor arrested... my head is so heavy!!!!!

why did i ever get obsessed to sukor and undergo this pain.😭

well you and rabi will say

Sumi, to enjoy love you have to endure pain like sukor...

...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

@Rabi

Oh my Rabi dear!

Should I write another esay for your esay?

Well you left me speachless!

Student - Teacher is something that was always in my mind!

So just got it out!

So so happy that I didn't dissapoint my deary!

Hehehe

Maths will become biology for you LOL

Well all swience related subject including Maths are my fav!

Even now I teach Maths to few children ;-)

I can feel you dear!

Because same happened with me but not in high school but college 2nd year as the course I wanted wasn't there in my 1st year college, so changed college.

But then in 3rd year it was a new path, so all started well and ended well!

I really pity your sir for helping you and in return got hurt!

Hehehe!

He should have known that Rabi is a big girl and can handle well herself ;-)

When one adamant person was there, he for sure needed to order.

And CPR dear is not a kiss!

Suraj need to take a lesson to you so you can understand the real meaning of CPR!

You are seeing things from some other view dear!

I never thought he was clearing his image in front of Chakor for the matter of CPR, pub...

Your justification of what Suraj was feeling when Chakor kissed him proves that the title Lawyer given by me is apt! LOL

Glad Vivaan came on good books here! ;-)

And what is your type parts dear? I didn't get it! :-|

You mean that shirt wala part!

Well with this Chakor, what else can you expect?

Lovely lines of yours!

They always make me feel good whatever way they are!

Big hug on the way!

You can just suggest, no need to request!

I will try my dear!

Already a college story is creeping in my mind!

Let's see when this one comes out!

Happy that Rabi enjoyed this story!

Tons of kisses and hugs for you dear!

P.S. By replying to your comments, I end up writing another essay each time! Hehehe

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
I am waiting for the Thursday eagerly for some sukorilicious moments... else grhhh i will come to you!

Hidden secret just that i feel the makers got clue from your story and are taking a leap of 5 years like she went for studying...

evern since I read that stupid news of KN being killed and chakor arrested... my head is so heavy!!!!!

why did i ever get obsessed to sukor and undergo this pain.😭

well you and rabi will say

Sumi, to enjoy love you have to endure pain like sukor...

...

Me too yaar!

Eagerly waiting to finish what I'm writing!

If CVs have taken ideas from me, we would have witnessed a big happy wala wedding!

But they didn't! :-|

Me too!

Can't believe the foolishness of these CVs

They really need a check-up for their brain and heart!

The obsession towards Sukor is the uniqueness they have for the definition of word LOVE

SO just enjoy it dear! ;-)

And we just need to wait patiently and cross the path along with them to see their lovely journey!

And of course Love can't be without pain as another synonyme is Pain and Bliss!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#240

Hello!

Well!

As I started to write the epilogue of Orenda last week, I thought about Zarir and my evil mind said : Why to write two stories when you mingle everything in one!

Then I asked myself how come a student-teacher story mingled with a business profile story?

And there I got the answer that even in Zarir, our hero was teaching and guiding his love, his wife and she in her turn will guide and teach others. So there I got the idea of making it one!

Hope you all like it!

Here is the link : Epilogue - Jackpot

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