|White Lilies And Fallen Tears|Dev-Sonakshi OneShot| - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Awww
I don't have any words to describe this os.. .its really pure n beautiful. .just to see her smile..
N yes white is my favorite color n i live White lilies are my favorite too. N right now devakshi also
But now on white lilies will remind me ov devakshi.. .
Seriously this is reallyone of the best os i hv read it till nw..
N plss continue with another piece. M
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww sweetheart !!!!


This was so touching ! and heart breaking ...you gave us a glimpse of Dev-Sona in their difficult times to come !!


Loved the OS! Do write more please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Firstly. Hey Swara🤗
Coming to the story, it's so beautifully written.
I love how you've written little snippets showcasing the course of their relationship.
Despite them being tiny insights, it's written so well that one can imagine the entire scenario, that entire phase of their relationship.
You've portrayed the beauty of love and also the pain that it brings along with it. It's a bittersweet thing, love. If it has the power to make you happy, it can hurt you just as much.
Was a treat to read, Hope that you'll write a lot more.
P.S. Where's my cookie?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divi.C

Awww
I don't have any words to describe this os.. .its really pure n beautiful. .just to see her smile..
N yes white is my favorite color n i live White lilies are my favorite too. N right now devakshi also
But now on white lilies will remind me ov devakshi.. .
Seriously this is reallyone of the best os i hv read it till nw..
N plss continue with another piece. M



Oh my god! Thank you so much! You made me sooo happy!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written.
Incomplete love stories have a charm of their own.
Please keep writing in your free time
It should not effect your studies.
God bless you with a bright future.
Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Beautiful OS Swara

and welcome to the forum
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such an amazing os..
emotional one...

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