|White Lilies And Fallen Tears|Dev-Sonakshi OneShot| - Page 3

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

It is beautiful! Trust me. It is very, very good. And it's a unique way of writing. The way you carried the emotional qoutient is beautiful. And you are 15...? Oh god, I need to take a lot of writing tips from you!

Thank you so much!!
And yeah, I just turned 15 on the !4th of Feb this year. But, no I'm not that good of a writer that you'll take writing tips from me.
I mean, I'll happily give them. But then, I don't want to see you crying after you read them. Okay? Lovey to you!

Originally posted by: MySarun

This was heartbreaking😭

I guess we will see something like this in the show too😔

Anyway I enjoyed reading it and loved your narrating style .. keep it up dear👏

Welcome to the forum dear .. Come and join the maddness that we have here😃

Did your heart got back together? I hope it did so. And thanks a lot for your reviews!

Originally posted by: swaralika

Hello! Thanks a lot for your reviews! It really made my day. Trust me.
And frankly, I can never understand how you people study Bio. It's the worst subject ever(no offence, but I'm all engineering). In fact, two days ago I was talking to this girl who has just joined 10th standard and she was asking me about some good books for Science. I told her some books for Physics and Chemistry, but I had to ask her if we had or have Bio in 10th too, given the fact that I gave a test on it just two months ago. That is the kind of hatred towards Bio. Please don't kill me after this. Okay? I'm sweet. :)
*Whispers*:
And I give cookies too!!

P.S. Thanks for the lilies! And the comment. Keep reading. Keep commenting ;)

Originally posted by: randommusings

hey Swara, lovely and emotional OS.

Such a matured piece of writing, that too from a 15yr old.👏

PS - Focus on Physics Chemistry not on Dev Sona chemistry😆😉lol talking like ur mom now😆

Thank you So much! Believe me, I'm NOT mature! All the madness is available in me. And that makes my mum go crazy!
And, it's completely fine for you to scold me. After all, you're older than me, right?
I love you!

Originally posted by: Jade0001

A Soulful and Beautiful OS

Emotions portrayed was brilliant

I would really like to read more of your stories Swara

Thank you SO much!

Originally posted by: littleshine

It's beautiful. Being a 12th std science student I know the hard work we have to do in these 2years but inspite of that you gave a good one.And I being on crucial point studying for NEET is checking IF every hour bcoz of these beautiful show😳

Cheers😉

Thank you so much!!!
And NEET! 😕
All the best!

Originally posted by: krystle123

welcome to the forum dear🤗

its really awesome yaar..👏👏👏very well written. keep writing and do more os of devakshi.😛

Thanks a lot!

That was really good Swara. The dialogues alone conveyed the emotions. you didn't need the narrative

Swaralika from DYM forum right ?😉 i was a silent memeber then...i often wondered how can a 14yr old girl write such beautiful pieces ? ohh..i just loved your stories...

Thanks to all the people to whom I couldn't give a personal reply. I'm so glad I got such a warm response, given that this was the first time I wrote in this forum.
P.S. Mimiii22, yes I'm the one from DYM forum. And you don't know how happy your comment made me! Thanks a lot! :)

Thanks to all the others too. I promise to post a new write up as soon as my sleepy brain wakes up.
Till then,
Keep reading, keep commenting and keep having cookies :)