|White Lilies And Fallen Tears|Dev-Sonakshi OneShot| - Page 2

It's beautiful. Being a 12th std science student I know the hard work we have to do in these 2years but inspite of that you gave a good one.And I being on crucial point studying for NEET is checking IF every hour bcoz of these beautiful show😳

amazing hatsoff👏. I could just visualise each and every scene and trust me Im crying😭 as I read.

Very well potrayed. Short but intense and packed with emotions.

welcome to the forum .. ur os is awesome u can start writing an ff to .. i am writing my 1st ff and that also on devakshi .. its name is kya ma manengi ? ... a devakshi ff .. do read if u want and i am 13 years old :-)

Originally posted by: bobadekajal88.8

it was so emotional at the same time it was so beautiful...pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: ammu3

Awww - I just absolutely loved the title and the story !!

I just loved how you portrayed the emotions so beautifully ... and the flashbacks are wonderful !!

Being a writer, i know that the biggest success is when you are able to put across the feelings and essence

Welcome to the forum dear - Myself ,Akshara.

Even I study in Delhi though I'm in college pursuing medicine😆

I'm currently running towards you with white lilies in my hand !!

Hello! Thanks a lot for your reviews! It really made my day. Trust me.
And frankly, I can never understand how you people study Bio. It's the worst subject ever(no offence, but I'm all engineering). In fact, two days ago I was talking to this girl who has just joined 10th standard and she was asking me about some good books for Science. I told her some books for Physics and Chemistry, but I had to ask her if we had or have Bio in 10th too, given the fact that I gave a test on it just two months ago. That is the kind of hatred towards Bio. Please don't kill me after this. Okay? I'm sweet. :)
*Whispers*:
And I give cookies too!!

P.S. Thanks for the lilies! And the comment. Keep reading. Keep commenting ;)

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">A very warm welcome to the forum Swara... And what a lovely OS... I just loved it... Thank you so much for sharing and do keep writing.👏😊</font>

Thanks a lot! And I will keep writing!
Keep reading, keep commenting!
And, keep having cookies!

Originally posted by: saumya07

Beautiful OS ..and welcome to the forum Swara..Keep writing more..I can understand totally understand ' science around' 🤣 because I too have just passed class 12th..

Thank you so much!
And, OH MY GOD!
How did you make it alive after 12th?
(Don't beat me after this)*Cheers*

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

Firstly you are adorable Swara! I love how honest you were when talking about this OS 😆. Secondly you are adorable. Period

Coming to your OS, it's beautiful! It really is! You say the first parts of your OS don't fit, but it does and really well too! Conversations about colours is getting a bit too exclusive to this pairing now! Loved the second half of the OS, the emotion was hard hitting and genuine! Really liked the ending too because it's something a Romeo like Dev would totally do (🤪)

Hope to see you around with more works!

-Pari

PS- I am more of a chocolate cupcake type of person 😆

Awwiez!
Thanks a lotty!
Although, my mum says that I was adorable only when I was a kid.
According to her, now it looks as if Satan himself gave birth to me.
So I ask you, does that make my mum Satan? I've asked her this question, but only got a beating as an answer.
Anyway, even I like the exclusiveness of colour talks about them!
See, I'm a kind of person who always seeks hidden and deep meanings behind everything. And if you see this story, I've tries to show the change in equation between these two love birds by changing the way they call each other in every flashback. From Dr. Bose to Miss Bose to Sonakshi and Sona.
Hope you got that reference;)

P.S. Don't worry, I will give you a choco cupcake. Share it with me. I love it too. Okay?