The starting was very normal as any other story, and then came the unexpected climax which made me weep😭!--A truly heart touching moment.
Twinkle imagining his presence around is the highlight..
You have seeped into the depth of their characters and given us what we couldn't have imagined seeing ever.
This story speaks for their love..and it couldn't have been more perfect a tribute to a love story which is eternal in all the sense.
Have always yearned to read a story with such strong emotions that shakes you within and this was that story for me.
You can't possibly imagine how I'm failing to put my feelings into words, cause no words are good enough to describe how I feel right now.
Those small caring gestures of Kunj which she so adoringly reminisces, her feeling his presence around ..from what I have understood from the story, it heals her and completes her like no other, and drives her forward,notholding her back. Itistrue love if it gives you strength. How weak is it if it grounds you or holds in shackles?
And coming to the real story of your family, I can only say that Hats off to your Aunt, for being such a strong woman👏. Their love truly would have been immortal, for her to have that much of a powerful grip on his memories. And not once did it falter her spirit. Instead made her stronger.
And you're right.. in today's world people hardly believe in these things but you have to see something to have faith in them and you have gone through both, so it doesn't matter if others believe it or not. You have surely found an admirer in me.
I want to highlight a few lines from your own story which really touched me.
''She is taking in long breaths of fresh air and enjoying the moment with closed eyes.. She exclaimed in her mind" Mujhe Pata hai Kunj tum Hamesha mere sath ho mere aas pass Ho.. Mai tumhe Mehsus kar Sakti hu.. In Tazi Thandi Hawaome Jo hamesha mujhe Gudgudati Hai.. In flowers me Jinki Khushbu Mere dil ko Khila deti hai.. Us smile me Jo tumhare bareme sochte hi apne aap mere chehre pe aajati hai.. In panchiyo ki awaz me jaise tum mujhe pukar rahe ho.. Un lamho me Jo hamne sath bitae hai.. Hamari yaado me hamari baato me..Tum Yahi Ho Kunj..!!Tum Mujhe chod kee kahi Ja hi ni sakte..Chaho bhi to b ni..!! Tum Yuhi hamesha Mera Khayal Rakhte rahoge.. Hamesha..!! "---👏👏
Also you couldn't have been more right when you said, ''its much easier to weep and sob on your loved one's death but it is lot more difficult to smile and go on.. U need a voluminous amount of inspiration courage and motivation for this..''
<font color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">How true is that👏-- life stops for no one..you have to becourageousenough to embrace it with whatever comes your way, and THIS story is the living example of that! Very inspiring!</font>
You are an awesome writer and would love to see more of your work!
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
Shiv Shakti
