TwiNj OS : ' TU JAHA MAI WAHA..!!' {Real Story also Updated} - Page 3

Riya there r somethings which is illogical but true. Even i know a story like it and still cant believe it but still something like it happened in my family too. Ilogical but true and real. In fact we had double deaths and triple deaths too but its unbelievable.

Riyaa,I am numb in pain dear.

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg..Riya..

It was sooo heart touching..

U made me sooo emotional😭😭

Aft kunj death twinkle living with his memories..

Preggy twinkle...

It was sooo touching..

My god...plz.write more..happy wala.too..

Hey Lavs ..
Thank u so much dear..
I felt the emotions myself before writing..
Yes I will write more..
Next one will be happy wala..

Originally posted by: sa86

Riya, this OS has the capability of pushing someone into emotional land.

Still now i am lost in it's essence.It's make me cry when Bebe interact with Twinkle after her morning walk,This time i just realised what actually happened.

You penned the inner emotion of Twinkle so beautifully that I have no words to praise it.

& I would love to know the real stories what you knew.

Once Again claps for u buddy.👏

P.S.-I love the title of OS.It made me to drive into it.

Aww thank u so much Aditi.. 🤗
I just wanted to create a little suspense in start only to break the news with shock at the end..😆
I hope I was succeeded in doing DAT..

Honestly I couldn't come up with any better Title.. M really pathetic at titles..😆

Thanks again for reading and loving it..

Originally posted by: SweetSau

God resss

</div><div>I'm still in bed aur maine yeh story padh li and it made me cry.

I'll unress after a while.

But I loved it

Love

Sayli

Hey sayli..

I just hope u liked it.. Will be waiting for u to unress.. 😛

Originally posted by: tikit

Riya this was to senti and emotional but beautiful.

The small things like twinkle in garden kunj comes there and twinkles knows its him.

At dining table kunj twinkles small banter.

In room twinkle kunj sleeping together. Aww all these were so beautiful.

Then bebe twinkle convo was really nice and finally bebe leela seeing twinkle cry alone in their room and leela bebe cry too was good.

Riya that garland thing nd twinkle talking to kunj's pic was so emotional. But i loved twinj nokjhok and thats the essence of twinj. Pregnant twinkle was so cute. Yes its true sometime when u r missing someone u may feel them in cool breeze that ur soulmate is there.

U were saying of some real stories tell us na.

Riya this was not long in fact it was short but ya u described it really well. I told u that i knew ur os would be amazing.

You r an amazing writer and i hope u know it.

Waiting for more os's, ss's and ff's from u. Update secret admirer soon. Love ya.

Btw nice title wherever twinkle went she felt kunj's presence and thats tu jahaan thats twinkle main wahaan kunj. Thanks for pm.

Omg eshu.. First of all thank u for such long comment.. It gave me all the happiness and joy..😆
I guess u were the only who was knowing since start that m writing a sad story..
U won't believe I thought of around 15-20,scenes out of which these were the best.. I also wanted to write a gurudwara scene but then already it was getting lengthy so I dropped the idea..

Aww thank u so very much dear..
I myself cried lot while writing this one..

Ur appreciations compel me to write like this.. Writer is incomplete without readers..

I love the title too..

I will now start working on secret admirer as u wished for..

Thanks again for reading and appreciating..

Love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

How

Doc...

I don't know what to say. ...

I haven't read the story yet...

But comments scared me...&

I m crying before reading it...

If anything happens to me after readin the story it's ur fault...

& Real story?

Omg Shavs u didn't read the story and read comments..

U destroyed the suspense😆
First read the story then we will cry together..

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Res

Riya i'll be back soon

Yo m waiting for u to unress..
Athira i would love to no ur reactions..😆

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

This is amazing Riya
I truly loved reading it
starting and middle part was so cute
but the part where Twinkle enlighten Diya in front of Kunj's Photo just made me cry ...and Twinkle lines to describe Kunj's presence after his death was so touchy 😭😭
i really want to know about the real story
let us know about it

Thank u so much Shrishti..
Ohh glad u pointed that out.. I thought those parts can be little boring..
Tbh honest it took me 2hrs to come up with those lines and emotions..
But guess hardworking is paid off..
Glad u guys liked it..
Ohh the real story is updated.. Check out..

Thanks for the appreciation.. It means a lot to me..

@Riya aft reading the real story..