New Asya OS ~ Ae Dil Hai Mushkil ~

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Dedication post:

That was unexpected!

Thank u sooo much!! 🤗

Cutest 😳

Main toh yahi par thi.. 😃

Chalo but U finally posted! 😛

Piglet that ya paglet 😆

Ha main meri story ke alawa sab stories update karwa sakti hu...😎

Thank u so much phirse!!!

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: jas91
Res 4 Bestu, Allo (iss baar comnt nahi kiya toh tu dekh😈), Suri (I'm angry wid u mere threads se nadarad), Janna (I'll make u read this 1 too🤣), Depu, Aishu (kahan gayab hai tu🤔) Anopama, Juhi, Mayur, Binnu, Sumi

Samay ke abhav ki wajah se i might have missed few names so Res 4 all u too😛

Thanks for the res😃

Beautiful and well written 👏

It's my favorite song

Edited by --Sumi-- - 8 years ago

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Update Time :

I loved the start...

Meko aise dramatic bohat pasand hai 😛

Aur Ithe ta band Baja ta baraat...

Par nice start

Mujhe bilkul tension nahi thi k milenge ya sad ending...I know you

😉

Ha curiousity thi kaise...

That friendship part when he finally dares to meet her was so cute.

Ha thoda description kam laga mujhe but. Vo meri problem hai.

Vo jab he scolds her uska husband ehsaan...mujhe laga hi tha that esa kuch hoga aage...😛

But mujhe Asad k POV padhne me uske emotions padhne me bohat zyada maza aarahi thi!

While reading I was listening Ae Dil Hai Mushkil ke songs hi sun rahi thi...n vo perfect feel arahi thi!👏

Humare Os kaafi same hogaye

1. Ek me shaadi hogayi ek me hone wali thi

2. Asad dono me hi paaise kamane jaata hai 😆

3. Happy ending 😆

I liked Rubina and Asad wala part

That reminded me of SS from dhadkan...especially that part jaha that ye purane kapde pehnkar...😃..pata nahi suddenly that image flashed...

But Zoya baat kisse karrahi thi?😕

Nikhat kinda played Cupid!!

😳

Ye pale blue polish aapko chahiye thi na?🤣

Sachi sachi bolna

Meko to peach chahiye abhi 😆

Miscommunication is always the cause of misunderstandings and misinterpretations

Had they conversed once..yeh inni badi problem nahi hoti

However contact karne ka zariya aur himmat bhi honi chahiye thi

I would like to thank Nikhat and Haider...the cupids!

Inki vajah se milgaye dono

I loved the last conversation

Utterly cute

Bohattt pyaari thi

Ha beech ka part thoda rushed laga

N ek do scenes aur hote to ...

But lovely

Really mast tha!

P.s ka p.s ab itni bhi buri nahi thi mere OS k ending! And nahi aapki...

Chalo really good!!

Liked it !

Again thankie mankie for the dedication!!!

Meko bohat accha laga!

Lovely work

Write more

And meko pm karna mat bhulna

Take care!!

Sorry for late comments!

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

A really beautiful version of AsYa lovestory.

Awesome. Full of real life situations and feelings.. Well described. I felt as if I am watching it.

Just loved it.

Thank you for this.

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

hiii jash darling...
how r u dear??
os was super duper..
totally loved it..
muje ehsaan se koi problem nahi h ;) kyunki bcoz of him asya got another chance...
come with another story soon ;)