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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
<font color="#990000">happy dusshera 🤗
</font>...aur tweetie ne khoob taareef ki h is os ki
mene abhi padha nahi h par i wud want to read 😉
jald hi padh lungi
aur riddhu ka version mene padha tha ...jo ki bohat accha tha 👍🏼
abhi ek aur accha version padhna baaki ❤️

Happy Dushera again 🤗
wud want, u have 2 😈 atleast Oct main toh tujhe chutiyan hain OS toh pad le 😆

Han Riddhu mujhe 1 emo deke gayi hai 😆 pta nahi who Res hai ya uska comnt 😆

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

A beautiful story of love and friendship

Loved reading it to the core

A perfect title, beautifully describing the feelings of asya

In love with the whole plot and the beautiful ending

Was definitely a treat to read

😊

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: jas91
Hello guys😆

me back again 2 torture u wid another OS🤣

1st of all Wish u all a very Happy Dushera🥳.. May it takes all d negativity away from our lives😊

Now moving on yes i said last week yeh OS bhi post ho jayegi but what 2 do😳 my fvrt Jodi went 2 Swiss in d show I m watching these days so i was busy doing chit chat in that forum😆 Saturday ko toh hamne jamke ranting ki🤣 oops we r going off topic😆... Han toh point is i was busy there so couldn't post it soyyi again😛

this time i won't do much bak bak (ok bestu😳... side note- waise why r u upset😕 another side note- main bak bak nahi karti toh itni lambi updts/OS nahi milti😎 1 more side note- Main dil se likhti hun jismain time lagta hai & as u said tu dimag se likhti hai so tera updt jaldi ready ho jata hai😆... par see mera wale main jasbaat ka tadka thoda jyada hota hai na🤣 )

what d helll i m still doing Bak bak🤪 ok sorry folks aaj time bhi kam hai & i made up my mind 2 post it so chalo lets do it not wasting anymore time

Wait its dedication time🥳 just cuz i want 2 nothing spcl😳

1st toh is forum ki sabse cutest Riddhi (Riddhu my piglet i miss u🤗 last pura week i waited 4 u ki tu aye & main post karun but tu aayi nahi ab meko tere bina post karna pading😔)... Apparently she got 2 know i m penning this OS cuz she also penned 1 OS on d same song😆 & i vomited that i m also penning on same song tabse she was constantly asking ki jaldi finish karo & when i finally finished yeh khud gayab ho gyi🤣 Par Riddhu sachi u'r a amazing task master🤗 sirf tu hi hai jo mujhse kaam karwa sakti hai😉 see i finished this OS pehle jabki d updts which i started penning b4 it woh main pore kar hi nahi paati🥱 tu unke liye bhi mere piche padegi tabhi shayad woh bhi pure hon😆... gosh maine kitni bak bak kar di😲

2nd Tehsu yeh humari 2nd in command hai after Riddhu its her jo mujhse har baar updt ka puchti hai 😆 I love u Tehsu.. no we all love u🤗

3rd Muskaan cuz she asked me if i could write an OS on this song😆 Dear it was already done bas banner baaki tha & than Riddhi ki presence😳 so ur wish is fulfilled chahe by default hi sahi😆

Lastly a spcl mention 2 mera Bestu jo jane kyun bina baat muh phulake beith gayi 😆 come back chup chap mar khayegi warna😆 Love u 🤗 tera pehla spot gya ab gayab hone ka yahi result hota hai🤣

PS - I give u guys permission agar next 2 days main maine Humnawa updt nahi ki mera sar phood dena🤣

Chalo at last scroll down 2 read 😆

I am glad that you fulfilled my request chahe by default hi sahi😆

It really was a treat to read this flawless work😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: jas91

yeh sare emos mere hone chahiye tere nahi 😆 😆

who bhi kya din the jab 1 res ke liye yahan mahabharat hua karti thi 🤔

aww cuckoo
😆 wo din bhi wapas lautke aayenge meri jaan 🤗

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jas91

Happy Dushera again 🤗
wud want, u have 2 😈 atleast Oct main toh tujhe chutiyan hain OS toh pad le 😆

Han Riddhu mujhe 1 emo deke gayi hai 😆 pta nahi who Res hai ya uska comnt 😆

haha pakka cuckoo...terio ye ek cheez to padhungi hi sahi me before going 😉😉
riddhu ka emo 🤣 dekha mene...she must have loved it so much that she is speechless😳😳😳 wapas aayegi review likhne i guess😆

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jas91
Res 4 Bestu, Allo (iss baar comnt nahi kiya toh tu dekh😈), Suri (I'm angry wid u mere threads se nadarad), Janna (I'll make u read this 1 too🤣), Depu, Aishu (kahan gayab hai tu🤔) Anopama, Juhi, Mayur, Binnu, Sumi

Samay ke abhav ki wajah se i might have missed few names so Res 4 all u too😛

Thank You for the RES Jas...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Very Good and Well written Part Jas..

I actually love this song...and iske upar yeh OS was Amazing..

Enjoyed reading this part..

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Angry hoke b res krne k liye 🤗 Padh liya mene 😉 what a brilliant update cuckoo ❤️ mene inne din kya mahino baad tera likha kuch padha 😃 i was like wah meri cuckoo itna acha likhti h 😆 At first i was like pehle se hi sad start n painful asad i thought pkd teri bestu nd spicie are rubbing off on u ki tu bhi maje leke likhing ye sad parts 😆 😎 bt the whole os wend beautifully n sensibly ahead was well written nd well thought ek kosten h wo ye k with whom zoya was talking over the phn in jewellry shop jb asad overheard her? Aur one more thing is last tak aate aate na jb asad confessd mene socha hi tha ki dialouges ache the maza aya padhne me aur tune niche esa kyu likha ki u r nt gud at writing them? Pagl i lovd the dialougs specially at end. Beautiful ending and saw asad as a true friend here ❤️ simply lovd it ❤️ mai keh rh hu ye jo tune naam rkha Ehsaan meko bilkul pasand nh aya *aroda sahb ki style me* 🤣 started with crackers of pain nd ended with crackers of love, ths os made me love the song more now. So i say . . . . . . . . . . . .L O L lol 😆 🤣 nh i wantd to say WOWIE KA ZOWIE.. nd I LOVE U 🤗

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jas91
Res 4 Bestu, Allo (iss baar comnt nahi kiya toh tu dekh😈), Suri (I'm angry wid u mere threads se nadarad), Janna (I'll make u read this 1 too🤣), Depu, Aishu (kahan gayab hai tu🤔) Anopama, Juhi, Mayur, Binnu, Sumi

Samay ke abhav ki wajah se i might have missed few names so Res 4 all u too😛

thanks for the res😆

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Jaana ki Jaana, tumne toh mujhe speechless hi kar diya 👏
i expected something romantic because i was in a romantic mood 😉😆
and when i started reading : "the love of his life is marrying someone else."
and this is me to that for u JAs !😡
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bechara mera Asad pardes chala gaya to let Zoya live in peace with her husband jo kamina nikla !🤬
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and then Asad seeing her again, lekin i didn't understand voh phone kis se baat kar rahi thi ?😆
then a big thank u Nikhat nahi toh yeh dono idiots ek dusre ko avoid karete rehte 🥱😆😆
finally i just loved the reunion and Zoya saying Qubool Hai
i loved loved loved this Os, i personally loved it more than the other one😆 once i got past the fact that it wasn't romantic, i loved it even more and was in mood to just keep reading 😳
thank u so much Jaana ki Jaana for thiss beautiful OS ! i just loved it !! 🤗
but than the OS, i love u ! mwah !!❤️

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