NiBirSS: Let's Football! Chap5 Updated(2 Dec) - Page 12

Originally posted by: TASYAM

Awesome story...
loved it...
the way you described it was hilarious
love the way you described emotions of nisha and kabir in each parts and sub-parts...
there nok-jhoks and khit-pits were cute and notorious
and the moments u shown from cafe to nisha's room were enjoyable and adorable
the bus scene was OMG!!! what was that
seriously i was laughing well done
confession was sweet
the way kabir was irritating nisha was fab

cont. very very soon plz
and i think u should complete the story i mean jab tab tak story mai ek wow factor rhe and people enjoy to read...
and right now i want to u to cont. it and the way u want u can as at present i feel story incomplete...

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

@bold I agree
@red Actually I thought the story's pace is so slow that's y...
@green I can understand...saare university waale ek hi jese hote hai
Thankyou so much Anmol🤗❤️
Mujhe laga nahi tha ki kisiko jyada pasand aayega ye update🤔 cz i did paced up things
Okay I'll continue😳
@blue definitely😉
Thanks again <3

Originally posted by: mkjr

it was too good plzz give a epilogue

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

👏

Nisha's feelings for Kabir and Kabir's feelings for her was so well portrayed. Yr i cant think of anything except their confession. i want nisha to say ILU to kabir.

Jwala should also get a chance to dance in his brother's wedding yr.

Shaadi mat kara bhale hi abhi but i want a proper confession.

Kabir and nisha both should confess. kabir ne toh kar diya but nisha also should do. kabir is waiting for her and so she should understand her feelings soon.

And i really loved their Night meeting. 😳

Mammiji ka timing bahut kharab hai. 🤢

Really felt Kabir's dialogues.

Update karo jaldi.

Originally posted by: Niha0606

update karo😡

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res 😊

Itne sare parts ...😃 I'll try to read it soon 😊

Unress

Sabse pehle bada wala sorry mai yaha res daal k bhool gayi😆 that's the reason mai kisi b post pe res nai karti coz I forget it 😛 I just read and comment 😊 chalo now let's come to the point kahi mai phir na bhool jau such a bhullakad I'm getting these days😆

Read all the parts together... superb ... loved it ... paper postpone hogaya aur nisha ko pata hi nai chala😆 kabir is just so cute ... the confession how he just directly told her abt his feelings and no compromise 😆 superb parts ... aur iska epilogue do plzz😃