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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Huge Thanks Anmol🤗🤗
Aisa hi hota hai pyar me topper ladki ka dhyan lagna band ho gaya hai 😆
Accha aisa hai kya🤣
Will update soon😳
Thanks Again❤️


Aisa hai toh nhi but Maine bhouton ko dekha hai barbad hote hue 🤣
Waiting for update please update it 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Niha0606

kab thak milegi
but bahuth lambi honi chahiye i am not saying it ...i am warning you😆


Accha okay warning hai😆 okay then lambi update
Isi hafte possibly😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Aisa hai toh nhi but Maine bhouton ko dekha hai barbad hote hue 🤣
Waiting for update please update it 😳


Oh🤣🤣
will update in this week possibly😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Big Thanks Tani😳😳
Err..yeah thoda chota tha
Feeling great that you enjoyed it🤗
Will write and post next part soon😊

Yh cz generally main tumhara story update aaram se read krne k lie I sit..cz dy r amzng to I read it aaram se time leke but dis time Vo Itna jldi khtm ho gya..unlike ur other updates..
But Dats ok..I' won't mind if I update it soon mw
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wishing a Happy and Prosperous Diwali everyone!!! 🥳🥳

Now😆, mere exams hai 5th Nov se so I'll be busy on it🤓... exams over hone k baad hi update de paungi next 😊and abhi ye rahi Diwali k shubh avsar par lambi update and read whenever you get time...a big thanks🤗❤️

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NiBir SS: Let's Football !

Chapter4

As Nisha was busy taking out and putting on her helmet I utilized the chance to thank God for fulfilling my wish.

"Tu ye kya karta hai?" I heard Nisha and I opened my eyes looking at her.

"What?" I asked displaying as if I did nothing.

"Ye upar dekh ke kya badbadaata rehta hai?" She chuckled.

"Maine kaha kiya?" I denied.

"Jhoota! Baith ab!"

I smiled sheepishly and sat behind her.
I directed her the way to my house and we reached.
I pressed the door bell and the door opened with my younger sister bearing a confused look.

"Aap abhi?" She glanced at her wrist watch.

"Yahi khade khade batau?" I asked annoyed.

"Permission maang rahe ho meri?" She showed her teeth.

I kept my hands over my waist raising my brow. She giggled and beckoned us inside.

She then brought water for us and we three sat on sofa.

"Nisha ye meri behen Jwala"

"Hi Jwala" Nisha beamed.

"Aur Jwalu ye Nisha hai"

"I know" Jwala grinned.

I glared at her slightly leaning back.

"I...I know because you addressed her so naa" Jwala said cheekily and offered water to Nisha.

Phew! She didn't let the secret out. Hehe she can also juggle with the words like me. Muaah Jwalu!
I recollected our morning conversation before she left for her school.

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Jwala spoke "Aapki aur Nisha di ki chemistry k liye mai apni chemistry ka balidaan kyu du?"
I spoke irritated "Jwalu kesi behen hai tu yaar"
"Apne bade bhai pe gayi hu" she crossed her hands.
"Devi kya chahiye Prasad me aapko?"
She uttered excitedly "Permission for Shimla picnic from mom-dad"
"Usko chodke" I narrowed my eyes.
"Aap hi padhlo phir chemistry unse"
"Arey yaar! Ye kaisi zid hai Jwalu?"
"Okay I'll try" I said half heartedly.
"Yay! Thankyou thankyou" she hugged me.
"Magar I'm not guaranteeing they'll agree"
"Arey aap to manaa loge, mera aashirwaad aapke saath hai" she broke the hug.
"Vijayibhavah" she grinned showing me her palm.
I folded my hands to her and smirked "Dhanya hai aap maate"
"Accha vese bhabi dikhti kaisi hai? Photo to dikhao ek please please"
"Mere saamne to bol diya, Nisha k saamne mat bolna bhabi varna my love story would end before even kicking off"
"Ohkay" she chuckled "Photo?"
"Kya photo? Saakshat darshan karegi naa jab vo tere,tab khud hi dekh lena"
"Plsch nai photo dikhao"
"Accha ye le"
I took out my mobile and showed her Nisha's photo which was clicked by Kirti. She was happily talking to Kirti at that time. It reached to me via Ritiesh.
"She's lovely!" Jwala said.
"Aakhir choice kiski hai?" I raised my collar.
She laughed.
"Oye has kyu rahi hai?"
"Ye sochke ki agar unhone manaa kar dia to"
I tickled her stomach "Kabhi kuch shubh bhi bol liya kar"
"Arey-o-kya-bhaiya-o-thi..thik" though convulsed she managed to speak in between my tickles to her.
I stopped "Sun ab...acche se behave karna uske saamne samjhi"

"Hmm dulhe raja" she chortled.
I smirked " aur sach me koi doubt ho to puch lena, 96 the uske twelfth me"
"Ha"
"Chal phir shaam ko milte hai"
"Magar mujhe ye to batao ki aapko kab mood hua unko apni biwi banane ka?" She flashed her eyebrows.
"9th me hai, jab college jaane lagegi naa tab bata dunga" I patted her cheek.
"Kya bhaiya...aap to aisa keh rahe ho jaise mai bacchi hu"
"Ha hai, pyaari si golu molu si bacchi" I pulled her cheeks.
And she started to pull my cheeks. Soon our daily competition began and ended with both of us massaging our cheeks laughing madly.
"Kabir! Why are you chatting with her? She'll get late! Jwalu jaldi jao varna phirse bus choot jayegi tumhaari" my mother chided.
I controlled my laughter and Jwalu left giggling.
"Tumhe college jaana hai ya nahi? Ready ho jaake! Hey Bhagwaan kya kare hum is ladke ka!" my mother spoke touching her forehead.
"Shaadi kara do" Jwala peeped.
"Ruk!"and since I portrayed to catch her, she ran away.
I giggled standing there.
My mother hit my head from backside "Chup kar! Sach me shaadi karwa denge hum varna"
"Mom!" I groaned.
"To kuch galat nahi kaha Jwala ne, Sharmaji ki biwi bhi tum par line maarti hai aur tum ho ki shaadi se dur bhaag rahe ho" she said displeased.

"Kya??? Kaunse Sharmaji ki biwi?" I was shocked out of my wits.

"Kause Sharmaji ki biwi puch rahe ho? Kitni Sharmaji ki biwiya tum par line maarti hai?"

"Oho mom!"

"What?"

"Mom aisa kuch nai hai...aap pata nai kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nai aa raha"

"Tumhari shaadi k baare me keh rahe hai hum"

"Mai late ho raha hu...I'm going bye love you" and I spun.

"Jab bhi shaadi ka kehte hai to bhaagne lagte ho"

I turned again to clarify, "Aisa kuch nahi hai ab aapko kaise samjhau?"

"Kabir tum ladki se hi shaadi karoge naa?"

"Mom!!!" I exclaimed with bulged eyes.

"Arey matlab...tumhare age ki ladki..." she spoke awkwardly.

I flared my nostrils,"Nai, Sharmaji ki biwi se"

"Kabir!" she lashed my arm hard.

"Ah! Mom! Kaise questions puch rahe ho aap?"

"To ladkiyo se le ke auntiyon tak tumhare peeche hai aur tum ho k pata nahi kis duniya me rehte ho" she spoke with a frown.

I chuckled and side hugged her, "Ladkiyaa Kabir k peeche bhaagti hai, Kabir ladkiyo k peeche nahi bhaagta"

"To ladko k peeche bhaagte ho tum?" she sulked.

"Ha" I affirmed.

"Kya?"

"Chill mom! Football me!"

"Uff ye ladka! Kabir tumhari profile matrimonial site pe daalni hai to shaam ko football practise cancel karo aur meri help karo...abhi se daalenge tabhi to koi acchi ladki milegi"

I mumbled to myself, "Ladki to mil gayi hai bas usko pataana baaki hai"

"Kya baaki hai?"

"vo...vo...err...meri book!haan...vo reh gayi room me, usko rakhna baaki hai, phir college nikal raha"

Without a second's delay I strode to my room.

"Phew!" I fell on my bed.

Lying on the bed, I turned my face towards the mirror of my almira and couldn't stop laughing at myself.

I delightfully spoke to my reflection," Soch Kabir, kitne log tere peeche pade hai... log? Ladkiya matlab...ladke bhi hai kya? Baap re!"

I swiftly raised myself up and stood in front of mirror, "Haa yaar hu to mai handsome... magar in looks ka kya achar daalu? Bhagwaan Nisha ko aaj mai apne ghar laa raha hu mai...kuch kamal dikhao naa yaar apna"

"Kabir! Room me so gaye kya?" I heard my mother's shout.

"Nai mom! bas nikal raha hu college k liye"


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A click of fingers brought me back to present.
"Kaha kho gaye bhaiya?" Jwalu teased me flashing her eyes to Nisha.
"Tu kya baithi hai? Doubts the naa chemistry me? Nisha time nikaal k aayi hai especially for you, time khoti mat kar yaha"
"Haa ha pata hai" she faced Nisha"aap mere saath chalo kamre me"
Nisha nodded and went with her.

I went in the kitchen to draw out some snacks and moved towards Jwala's room.
"Nahi Jwalu, ye equation abhi bhi balanced nahi hai, dekh Sulfur LHS aur RHS pe same nai hai" I heard Nisha explaining something as I neared the girls.
"Sulfur ko goli maaro pehle ye lo kuch kha lo" I smirked placing the tray.
"Ha Nishu bro, pehle kuch kha lete hai"
"What?" I questioned shocked.
"What?" Nisha and Jwala asked simultaneously.
"What did you call her?" I asked Jwala.
"Nishu bro" she answered smiling.
"Mujhe to bro kabhi bolte nai bana zindagi me" I fumed at Jwala.
Both the girls laughed at me. Great! Yahi bacha tha bas ab!
I picked some wafers and pushed it inside Jwalu's mouth making her shut.
She furrowed her brows chewing it while Nisha sweetly fed her more.
I sat in front grabbing a stool "Aur doubts clear hue idiot?"
"She's far more intelligent than you idiot"Nisha scolded me.
Jwala entangled her hand in Nisha's affectionately while I bore a sullen face.
"Lagta hai kahi se jalne ki boo aa rahi hai " jwala uttered.
"Isse"Nisha giggled after pointing me.
"Huh!" I grasped a sport magazine and lied on stomach on the bed.
Nisha and Jwala continued with their chemistry subject. But it seemed to me that this subject was fixing their chemistry instead of me and Nisha. Flop idea!
I closed the magazine and glimpsed the duo with my chin resting on my palm with the help of my elbow.
"Bye Kabir" Nisha spoke swaying her hand in front of my eyes.
What? Bye? Time flew or what? God!
"Kya?" I raised myself up in hurry.
"She said bye" Jwala stated.
I ignored Jwala and accompanied her till her scooty.
"Thanks so so much Nisha" I smiled.
"It's okay Kabir, your sister is really sharp. She quickly grasped the concepts"she smiled.

I muttered "pehle se pata hoga to kisi ko bhi easily aa jayega"
"Kya putputaaya tu?"
"Kya bola?" I chortled.
"Ha to tera muh soundlessly hilte rehta hai" she gestured the same with her fingers.
She added"Putputaana kehte hai use"
I laughed "Invented a new term?"
"Don't change the topic! Kya bol raha tha tu?"
"Curious eh?"
"Kabir bol!"
Her phone rang relieving me. She picked up the call.
"Hello"
"Wrong no."
She cut the call.
Wrong number? Thoda aur der nahi bol sakta tha gadha...Nisha bhul jaati...Ab phir mujhe kuch karna padega.
Before she could speak I said " Nisha mai chod du ghar tujhe? "
"Nai, 5:30 hi ho raha hai, mai chali jaungi. Vese bhi tu kya chal k vaapas aayega? "
"Erm ha"
"Pagal hai tu bye"
I chuckled "bye"
She left and I turned to go inside. There was Jwala smiling wide.
"Mai chod du" she mocked my words.
"Nishu bro ki chamchi!" I ran to her who ran inside.
After some pakdam pakdai she spoke panting "Bas... aur nai"and fell on the sofa.
I sat next to her encircling my hand over her neck"Footballer ki behen hoke itne jaldi thak gayi?"
She nodded innocently.
I chuckled "Teri picnic ki baat kar dunga mom dad se"
She smiled looking at me"You're the best bade bhaiya"
"Bro to bola nahi...ab maska maar rahi hai" I left her and leant back my head on sofa closing my eyes.
"You want to be called bro?" Jwala enquired.
"Ha" I demanded.
"Thik hai, keh dungi mai miss intelligent se ki abse aapko bro kehke bulaaye" she giggled.
"Jwalu ki bacchi!"
She ran away.

My parents returned home at the evening.

"Kabir chalo tumhara biodata daal dete hai baitho" my father began.

"Dad aap bhi kya mom ki tarah chaalu ho gaye...I'm in my twenties" I spoke.

"Kaun keh raha hai abhi shaadi karo Kabir...but site pe daalne me kya harz hai?"

"Ha vohi to hum bhi keh rahe hai" my mother supported my father.

Finding no suitable reason to deny, I nodded. Soon, my profile on matrimonial site was updated.

"Iska koi fayda nai hai" Jwala came and sat on the armrest of sofa opposite to me where my dad was sitting.

"Matlab?" my dad questioned her.

"Matlab ki bhaiya to ladki-"

"Ladkiyo se shaadi karne me abhi interest nahi" I cut her in between stressing my words eyeing her.

She gradually displayed a big evil grin while I got confused.

"Mom! Dad! Bhaiya ko pyaar ho gaya hai inse!" Jwala announced with Nisha's photo on her mobile.

"Kya?" My parents shouted astonished.

My pupils flared wide and next I buried my face in my palms. I don't want any slap yaar!

"Yeh kya hai Jwala?" my mother questioned.

"Jwala se kya puch rahi hai aap ? In saahabzaade se puchiye!"

I peeped through the gap of my fingers.

"Kyo football k saath saath ye sab kab se shuru kar dia Kabir?"

I dropped my hands and gave a sheepish look, "Dad vo erm actually"

Jwala interrupted"actually unka naam Nisha hai, bhaiya ke college me hi padhti hain vo, aur bhaiya unke peeche pade hai" she spoke in a go and giggled thereafter. I gave a deadly stare to her.

"Use mat ghooro, idhar dekh k baat karo"

"Thank God!" My mother exclaimed relieved.

"Ye ladka us bechaari ladki k peeche pada hai aur aap Bhagwaan ka shukriya ada kar rahi hai?" my father asked suprised.

"Hum to isliye keh rahe hai kyunki ladki k peeche hi hai" my mother said.

I hit my palm on my head.

I sighed," Mom dad... I...I love Nisha...I admit"

My mother smiled and Jwala clapped excitedly.

"What about her?" my dad transformed his eyes into a line waiting for my answer.

"I...I d..don't know" I stammered.

He shook his head "Football ka national game hai next week...uspe dhyaan do...aur phir bhi dhyaan naa lag paye to college ki book utha lena"

I blinked not able to understand to present what face.

He next got up, tapped my shoulder lightly and left.
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My first national football match! That too in my city! It was same city,same stadium, same ground...but new coach, new teammates, new feelings...

All my school friends, college friends, neighbours, relatives, acquaintances, Jwalu's friends, my family friends, my guru coach, my football friends...all had gathered to watch me play and of course to cheer. It seemed to me that nearly three-fourths of the spectators who would be present for our team were for my look out. It also appeared to me as if my whole college had reached here. I was excited and nervous at the same time.

I was taking a look where the audience seated chatting when my captain patted my back, "It's going to be superb dude! Smile!"

I acknowledged his stance, "Thanks captain"

"Arey match hasn't begun yet Kabir...call me by my name" he smiled.

"Erm okay Shaheer" I smiled back.

"Great! And since it's your first national match, all the very best! And stay cool!" he side hugged me.

"You're simply awesome" I chuckled reciprocating the hug.

"I know" he winked.

I left for the field along with the team after the discussion of strategy.

I glimpsed at the sky for God's blessings, turned my eyes towards my family waved at them and stepped ahead with focusing on the game. I lately realized that many people had waved back at me and not only my family but I had then moved on concentrating on the game.

As we assembled in a line, the opponent team also entered in high spirits. National anthem was played for both the teams. After the toss, the referee blew the whistle and the match started.

The match was evenly played by the both the teams in first half. I had tried hard but failed to score any goal. Shaheer, our captain was confident enough speaking that we could still control the game and our team energetically reached at the dedicated positioning in the second half which commenced.

At the beginning, players were racing the fields trying for goal and the football just tasted the entire ground. Arjun(my team) threw a diagonal pass and ball arched to Parth(my team). He then dived the ball to the net but it rebounded due to a hit at the bar. Grasping the ball, Shaheer showed some intelligent touches and soon, I got the ball, sweating badly under the glaring sun.

Despite stubborn resistance, I tried to pierce through the defense net and thought to strike the ball when I found myself striking the ground with a shooting pain in my ankle. I heard the crowd roar and tasted a thick substance only to realize it was blood out of my lips. I turned my head to the scoreboard and saw the opponent up by one again leading them two points ahead. I hit my fist putting a dent on the soil and disappointedly started raising myself when Arjun along with others came to me.

"You alright?" Arjun asked looking at Shaheer distantly who was arguing with the referee.

"Yeah" I spoke wiping my blood off.

Shaheer then hurried to us with a face of fury and patted our backs, "We'll spell danger!"

Arjun grinned and I nodded.

Brian(opponent team) moved with the ball gracefully and in impressive speed. With a gasp of wonder, I saw Arjun display his skill when he thwarted the opponent gaining the possession of the ball. He passed the ball to Sanskar(our team) who netted past the goal keeper after his solo run. Our team high-fived and looked quite hopeful as the match started to take a turn in our favour.

There were only five minutes left and both the teams wanted to regain the lead thus attacks continued. In a dramatic suddenness, the ball landed near our goalkeeper due to a cannon drive. Our goalkeeper, Ayaan, failed their attempt in a diving save. Then a shot by Vishal led the ball in Shaheer's hands.

The spectators hooted when Shaheer served past a defender, pushed the ball to his left towards Vishal who lashed it straight to me. I glanced towards time and Only 15 seconds left! This time I successfully moved forward and ran and ran as quick as I ever can. Next, I flicked the ball next over the goal keeper. And my knees went slack with what I registered next and my knees struck the ground.

GOAL! The crowd went wild with their loud hoots,thunderous cheers and standing ovations. FIRST NATIONAL GAME! AND MY FIRST GOAL! But what matters is...OUR TEAM WON! WE won!

My lips gradually spread wide in the process to believe what just happened.

"You were lethal man!" the opponent goal keeper ruffled my hair and surpassed me as my teammates started with their leaps on me in joy.

The audience went crazy as our team was announced the winner and Shaheer, our captain who had scored a hat-trick in first half as player of the match.

"Congratulations...How are you feeling?" the reporter questioned Shaheer.

"Thanks and I feel happy as I always do" He gave a witty reply.

After a short conversation with him at the stage, the reporter asked, "What about your new player Kabir?"

I chuckled and specifically my audience roared in elation at my mention.

Shaheer answered, "Our last goal that led us to victory was his first...and I think...the film of this hero has just begun"

Arjun elbowed me on the flattery of Shaheer. I blushed shaking my head.

The reporting got over with handshaking and I noticed that everybody has started to leave; my smiling teammates going back the dressing room with light chats; some people removing the stage; I glanced towards my family and my guru. I could not clearly see them but could recognize they were talking to each other as well with the surrounding people happily.

I looked at the sky and thanked God.

I was just about to leave the dressing room, when Arjun called me, "Kabir, you are lucky enough to score a winning goal in your first match"

"Thanks Arjun, I too feel the same" I chuckled.

"Hmm...Bye...will catch you later" Arjun left picking up his phone as his mobile buzzed.

"Bye"

Bidding bye to the team I hurried to my family and friends at the stadium. As I appeared, everybody came forward to wish me and told me that they really enjoyed the match. I merrily responded to the wishes and blessings. My friends even hit me in the name of patting...their way of pulling my leg. I was standing in the center of my friend circle.

"Party kab de raha hai?" Riteish poked me.

"Kiski party huh? Selection ki de to chuka! Ab kya har goal pe party deta phiru?"

"Accha har goal pe party milegi" Kirti laughed.

"Tu to bas time aur venue bata de" Sameer poured.

"Arey hat!" I flared my nostrils.

"Dekha kese keh raha hai, janaab ab national player kya ban gaye to apne dosto ko bhul gaya" Arun said.

"Dost k naam par loot lo haina!" I chuckled.

"Chal baad me de dena party nikalte hai ab" Riteish jibed.

I smiled bidding adieu to them, "Thanks for coming and cheering"

"Thanks nai party chahiye" I heard Sameer and shook my head in disbelief.

Soon, the stadium went empty and my father patted my head, "Congratulations"

"Thanks dad" I embraced him. Jwala jumped on me from back in ectasy "Bhaiya congo" making me to almost fall on my father.

"Arey thanks Jwalu" I nuzzled to her nose on mine.

"Congratulations Kabir" My mother patted my shoulder.

"Your blessings mom" I hugged her.

"Ab aapka mel milap ho gaya ho to chalte hai varna stadium band ho jaega" Jwala uttered.

"Ha naa chalte hai"

We were leaving the stadium when a thought crossed my mind and I turned. I looked everywhere my eyes could reach and sighed.

"Chalo bhaiya yaar" Jwalu dragged me.

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It was 11PM but a single thought was revolving in my head. Everybody came, cheered for me, wished me, but Nisha?

I took out her photo in my mobile.

"Tu kyu nahi aayi Nisha?" I asked to the photo.

"Aur naahi call kiya!"

"Mujhse naaraz hai kya?"

I had not picked any of her calls yesterday as I was busy practicing for my game. I had left an SMS to her that I was currently busy but hadn't received any reply.

"Mai karu kya call?" I pondered.

"Magar ek sms to kar hi sakti thi naa tu!"

I sighed and kept my mobile aside covering myself with a duvet lying down.

"Treat kab de rahe hai aap? Ek chocolate pakda di bas! Aisa koi karta hai kya?" Jwalu came inside my room.

"Goodnight Jwala" I spoke annoyed.

She sat beside my head and I glared at her.

"Khatarnaak mood me lag rahe ho aap"

"Mai bohot thak gaya hu Jwala...so jaa..goodnight"

"Joke pe joke mare ja rahe ho?"

"Isme kya hai joke?" I tightened my jaws raising my voice.

"Calm down bro! Just calm down..."

I shrugged my shoulders as she deliberately called me bro hinting Nisha.

"Nisha di k bare me soch rahe ho haina?" she inquired politely.

"Ha yaar" I suspired and removed the duvet sitting beside her.

"Vo aayi thi...mujhe dikhi thi" Jwala smiled in assurance.

"Kya? Kab? Aur mujhse kyu nahi mili? Tu pehle kyu nahi boli? Nisha ne mujhe wish kyu nahi kiya? Par agar aayi hi thi to-"

Jwala cut me in, "Offo bhaiya! Vo mujhe kaise pata hoga? Aap khud puch lo unse... aur ha phir mood thik ho jaaye to acchi si treat chahiye kal mujhe" she left.

I smiled wide and dialed her. I frowned next as my call dropped. I called again and this time a recorded voice notified me of the call being busy. I was taken aback as the language was Marathi. Nisha is in Maharashtra??

I dialed again and she picked up this time.

"Congo yaar"

"Tu Maharashtra me hai?"

"Hmm...Pune jaa rahi hu...train me hu"

"Kya???"

"Ha" she chortled.

"Tu mujhse kyu nahi mili?" I pouted.

"Tujhse milti to train choot jaati"

"Vaha ghoomne jaa rahi hai?"

"Nai,mere cousin ki shaadi me"

"Oh, tune match dekha naa, kaisa laga mai" I beamed.

"Huh kya?"

"k...kaisa laga match?"

"Match accha tha, exciting tha, magar yaar mujhe goals k alaawa zyada kuch samajh nahi aaya" she chuckled.

I laughed, "Mera goal to samajh aaya naa?"

"Tera to shaandar tha"

"thanks"

"Hmm...chal rakhti hu...iske pehle ki network loss ho jaye"

"Yeah...miss you"

"Kya kaha?"

"m...miss call the kal tere...mai utha nahi paaya tha, practise me magn tha"

"Accha, koi baat nahi..maine yahi bataane k liye kiya tha call ki mai Pune jaa rahi hu"

"Ohk"

"Hmm bye"

"bye happy journey"

"thanks" and she disconnected the call.

I lay back on bed and smiled to myself "Kabir, kaise katenge din Nisha k bina yaar"

I looked at her photo and kissed my mobile blushing and slept peacefully.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Amazing update 👏👏
From start to end I loved it 😳❤️
Kabir k kabir ki bhen bhi k 😆
Loved convo between jawla and kabir 😆
And kabir's convo with his mom was best part of the update 🤣
Kahan chemistry judh gayi bechara kabir
Football match 😆mujhe bhi goal ke alwa kuch smajh nhi aaya and kabir made his team won 😃
Aww poor kabir ab nisha ke bina kaise rahega kuch din 😆
Update soon 😛
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
arjun ka koyi chakkar hai kya...😛mujhe iasa hi lag rahi hai
abbb nisha achaanak pune 😕
thanku for lamba update
Happy diwali😊
all the best for ur exams👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Unresed and all the best for your exams🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
awesome update...
loved jwala in this...😳
jwalu teasing kabir...😉
nisha jwalu i mean nanad bhabhi ka jodi is superb😆
and kabir's mom soo hilarious...🤣
kabir's first goal😃

all the best for ur exams...
Edited by angelanju - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Awesome update ... kabir already in love with her 😆kabir won the national level match ... already started missing nisha ... cousins wedding ... thode din ki duri😉 waiting for next update
All the best for exams😊

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