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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Awesome chapter.
Nyc concept
Kabir loves nisha anf misses her...
Pls jaldi update karo

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone 😊 I read your comments and am really grateful you all appreciated. My net is slow so I'm unable to reply individually. I would surely reply once it gains speed. I hope you understand 😊 and I'm straightaway posting new chapter. I'm posting it in subparts for the same reason. Thanks so much all😳🤗❤️
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NiBir SS: Let's Football !

Chapter5/Epilogue (I'm unable to decide so kindly tell me whether to go on or stop here😆)

Part A

After so long, I had returned back to my city. I had exams following as timetable was out when I was enjoying my cousin Naina's wedding. It was Kirti who called me and informed me regarding the same. I just wanted to kill the person in-charge who made my mood off with sudden declaration of exams. Though it wasn't an impossible task but definitely a difficult one to revise what I had studied and practice well as I was short of time. Sitting on studying table against a glowing lamp, I was taking coffee sips to keep myself awake at least till midnight. I don't know when did I fall asleep but I came to know that I did fell in slumber because the highly buzzing mobile woke me up.

"H...hullo..m" I picked up in sleep.

"Zinda ho?" I heard Kabir and shot up my head.

I fumed,"What do you mean?"

He chortled "Chalo accha hai ab jaag gayi lagta hai"

"I'll kill you Kabir some day" I spoke irked.

"That day would never come"

"You meet me next and I'll surely kill you!"

"Ek kaam kar tape record kar le 'I'll kill you' ka, baar baar bolne ki energy save ho jaegi" he jeered.

"I'll-Argh!"

He chuckled "Dekh phir bolne waali thi! Vese tu so rahi thi kya?"

"Tu mujhse mil, tere haath pair naa tod du to naam badal dungi apna!" I challenged.

"Satkeli"

"Kya??"

"Tera naya naam" he laughed.

"Pitega tu...bohot bura pitega...aur teri photo pe maala chadva k rahungi mai ab!"

He chuckled "teri poori ho gayi kya padhai jo so rahi thi?"

I looked at the clock to know the time. It was 11:30 PM. Great!

"Kabir exam hai kal apna. Khud nai so raha ho to dusro pe reham kar dia kar" I frowned.

He sighed "jhooti"

I raised my voice "Stop it now kabir! Kya jhooti ha?"

He giggled and this was the limit. I cut the call and switched off my mobile slamming it on the table.

"Gadha kahinka! I'll kill him!" I voiced my anger.

I took some breaths staring at the clock and then revised a unit more from the book on which I was sleeping earlier. Then, since it struck 1PM, I closed the books and kept them aside. I zipped my college bag after placing some required things like id card, water bottle, box and admit card. I turned off the lamp but then realized that the entire room turned dark and I had to sway my hands while walking unable to see anything. And my heart thumped out of my chest when my fingertips brushed against someone. And in no time, my back hit a wall and my mouth was clamped. Before I could further react, I heard "Shh...it's me Kabir"

Kabir? Yeah it's his voice! He's in my room at this time!?!

And he withdrew his hand.

"I'll kill you ka bhajan gaa k khud hi dar gyi"he laughed.

I remained quiet.

His laugh faded.

"Bol na chup kyu hai?"He asked.

I still didn't utter anything.

His voice reflected fright "T...tu Ni..nishaah h...hi haina?"

"Nai uska bhoot hai"I said irritated.

"Phew! Tera hi bhoot hai" he said in a relax tone.

I hit his arm"Tu yaha kya kar raha hai! Aur tu yaha aaya kaise?"

"Chal k"he smirked.

"Kabbir!" I kicked him.

"Ouch! Chilla kyu rahi hai? Koi jaag jaega!"

I maintained my voice level "Accha hai koi jagega to! Papa maar daalenge tujhe!"

"Shh yaar"

"Tujhe n-" and my mouth was sealed again by him.

"Chup ek dum chup samjhi! Mai yaha tujhe kuch bataane aaya hu. Meri baat ho gayi to chala jaunga. Magar naa andhere me tera haseen chehra nai dikh raha, light to on karde phir sab batata hu" he said and lifted his hand off.

I gritted my teeth surpassing him and somehow managed to switch on the lamp kept at studying table.

"Teri naa mai shakal bigaad dungi phir mere chehre pe comment kia to" I stated.

He grinned "thik hai bigaad dena"

I glared at him.

He spoke"vese electricity ki kami hai kya tere ghar pe jo ye lamp lagaaya hai? Tubelight kya show piece hai?"

"Tu mudde pe aa samjha! Yaha kyu aaya hai? Aur aaya kaise? Chal k mat bolna phirse!"

He smiled "okay, mai naa darwaaze se aaya" he giggled.

I shrugged my shoulders.

"Ruk tu Maa ko jagaati hu, phir aj tera aakhiri din" I swiveled.

"Din nai raat" he smirked stopping me holding my hand.

"I'll seriously kill you Kabir" I spoke annoyed.

"Arey mujhe laga tha tune record kar liya hoga ye ab tak, nai kia?haww"


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part B

He continued "Poore khaandaan ne kya supari le rakhi hai mujhe maarne ki? Kabhi papa kabhi maa kabhi tu; decide kar le ki kaun marega mujhe"
"Mujhe samajh nai aa raha mai itni der se tujhe jhel kyu rahi hu" I realised a valid point.
"Ye to kuch nai zindagi bhar jhelna hai" he smiled.
"Kabir I'm serious... why have you come? Don't you think it's wrong doing?"
He sighed "Apne dil ki baat bolne me kya burai hai, kya mai ye jaan sakta hu?"
"Kabir...tu...erm...kya kehna chahta hai? " I asked.
"Nisha pehle mujhe ek vaada chahiye tujse" he requested.
"Kya?"
He opened his palm in front of me"haath rakh aur vaada kar ki mere dil ki baat sunne k baad mujhe yaha se shanti se vaapas jaane degi"
"Aisa kyu?" I asked apprehensivly.
"Vaada kar pehle phir bataunga naa sab"
"Vaada" I placed my palm on his.
He smiled.
"Hmm to mai naa pipe se chad k upar aya. Luckily teri balcony ka darwaaza khula tha to andar aa gaya phir jo room ki light 1 bje khuli mile matlab vo tera room. Mai tere room me aane hi vaala tha ki tune andhera kar dia phir aage ka to tujhe pata hi hai"
"Kya?? Tu paagal hai Kabir! Gir jaata to fracture ho jaata aur kahi chor samjh k tujhe peet dete to!"
"Ab 'I'll kill you' ka kya hua haa ?" He smirked.
"Kabir tujhe mazaak sujh raha hai? Dekh ab 1:30 hone waale hai...aur tu to mujhse phone pe baat kar raha tha naa phir yaha?"
"Voi to! Tune off kar dia mobile apna to mujhe yaha aana pada"
"To! Tu bakwaas kar raha tha phone pe!"
I added with a frown"Kabir kal exam hai apni...we should sleep. Go back to your house. Mujhe itna pareshan nahi kia kisine yaar"
"Mai pareshan thodi karne aaya tha"
"To kya mai khush dikh rahi hu?" I asked keeping my hands on my waist.
"Ha dekh to apne aap ko aaine me... itni khush hai ki ab naachne lagegi" he chuckled.
I sulked and removed one of my slippers.
He quickly said "Fine!fine! Mai bas dil ki baat bol du phir chala jaunga phir tu acche se so jaana okay baccha" he caressed my hairs.
I pushed away his hands"Kabir mai abhi kuch sunne k mood me nai hu" I shoved him"tu jaa"
"Arey arey ruk" he stood firm.
"Nisha please meri baat Sunle ek baar phir pucca chala jaunga"he added.
I sighed and then asked reluctantly "Kabir tu ye dil ki baat dil ki baat aisa kyu keh raha hai?"
"Dil ki baat ko dil ki baat hi bolunga naa"
I blinked in dilemma and said after a while "Thik hai...bol"
"Tujhe tera vaada yaad hai naa? "
"Ha...bol"
"Erm vo mai-"
"Vo mai kya?"
He slowly embraced me. I didn't object as somewhere deep I knew what would follow. He kept silence until I hugged him back.
"Nisha, mai abhi Shaadi k chakkar me nai padna chahta... pehle settle hona chahta hu apne career me... abhi to college bhi poora nai hua hai...aur mere kuch chote chote sapne hai football ko lekar unhe pehle poora karna chahta hu"
"Hmm"
"Tere bhi honge naa sapne?"
"Ha bohot saare hai" I agreed as my mind wandered to the dreams I bore since childhood.
He broke the embrace smiling lightly and cupped my face "mere dil ki baat ye hai ki" he spoke softly.
My heartbeats shot up as my lips remained curved up.
"Ki kal ka exam postpone ho gaya hai"
After I registered what he actually said he was clearly seen already suppressing his laughter.
"Kabir!" I started punching him.
"Ow! Ruk bhi jaa meri maa, tere ouch! vaade ka kya hua?"
"Nalaayak! Ye kya behuda mazaak hai!"
"Nai nai, mazaak nai hai ow! ye... site check karle college ki"
I stopped pissed off.
"Ye dekh" he brought his mobile in front of me and what I saw next pissed me more. Kabir is right! Paper postponed! How can they do this overnight!
"Ye mujhe kaise pata nahi chala?" I questioned in bewilderment.
"Kyunki tu oversmart hai naa! Apna phone off karke baithi thi, idiot! Abhi 12:30 ki news hai"
I sighed unhappy.
"Itna kya dukhi ho rahi hai? Aur ab to ehsaan maan mera... mai pareshan nai kar raha tha samjhi! Phone pe bhi ye bataane waala tha ki exam postpone hone waali hai aisa sunne me aya hai"
"To bataaya kyu nai? Itni bakwaas kisliye kari pehle? Aur gadhe hai university waale! "
"Vo to hai" he chuckled.
"To tu ye bataane aaya tha yaha?" I questioned slightly angry.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Part C

"Aur nai to kya? Kal band ka aielan ho raha hai to aise me pata nai kya kya hoga road pe. Tujhe samjhane aaya tha ki miss intelligent apni intelligence naa jhaade check karne college me ki sach me paper postponed hai ki nai"
I moved towards the right of the studying table near the lamp"Tere parents ko pata hai kya tu yaha hai?"
"Intelligent to hai tu magar kya hai naa tere me common sense ki kami hai"
"Kabir tu-"
He stood adjoining me leaning against the wall"Nisha, Jwala ko pata hai ki mai yaha hu"
"Ye galat hai sab Kabir" I averred.
"Kya galat hai? "
"Aise ye chori chupe milna" I told with a frown.
"Aashiq to milte hai aise" he grinned.
"Humare beech koi aashiqui nai hai"
"Nai hai?" He asked in serious tone.
"N...nai" I looked away.
He jerkily pulled me in front of him grasping my arm. The lamp fell down due to my hand hit at it accidentally and with the sound of breaking glass, everything went dark.
I gulped and stammered in a low voice "Ka..Kabir"
With each passing second he came closer to me. I shivered closing my eyes when I felt his breaths as well as his warmth.
"Nai kabir" I urged.
"Nisha, tu intelligent nai duffer hai... Phir bhi pyaar ho gaya tujhse" he spoke huskily.
He then nuzzled his nose to mine steadily.
"Nishu! Nishu!" We got startled hearing my mother.
Her voice intensity increased which meant she was coming near to my room.
Kabir left me and wanted to speak something but I hushed him"shh kuch mat bol"
"Nishu tu thik hai naa?Ye aawaz kaisi thi?Kuch bol kyu nai rahi?" I heard her near.
I reached towards her voice direction"Ma ruko, lamp toot gaya hai...kaanch chub jaenge yaha mat aao."
I held her hand "mai thik hu bilkul okay? So jaao aap aaram se" I shoved her till the entrance.
"Mai saaf kar deti hu, light on kar" she argued.
"Nai maa mai kar lungi aap kyu karoge? Mera room meri zimmedaari. Aur aap phokat ka tension mat lo, mai saaf karke so jaungi"
"Tu so jaa Nishu kal exam hai naa tera? Mai karti hu"
"Exam postpone ho gaya hai maa kal nai hai"
"Kya?"
"Ha aur baaki ki kahani kal savere batati hu abhi aap so jaao mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai...goodnight maa" I kissed her cheek and she left.
I let out a breath relieved and closed the door. I then switched on the tubelight.
"Dekh Kabir-Kabir? "
I scanned my room and he was no where. Means he went out before I closed the door? What if somebody sees him? I took my mobile, opened the door and ran to balcony. I looked down and found him seated on a bike.
"Chh"I called him indirectly.
He looked up and smiled.
I gestured 'what are you still doing here' with my hands.
He gestured' where is your phone'.
I switched on my mobile and showed him.
He phoned called me and I received.
"Jaa ab kabir, bohot raat ho gayi...maa abhi dekh leti tujhe"
"Jawaab chahiye"
"Kaisa jawaab?"
"Nisha itni bholi bhi mat ban yaar please " he spoke annoyed.
I kept quiet.
"Bollywood me chuppi ko haa samjha jaata hai"
"Bollywood kaha se aa gaya?" I flared my nostrils.
"To tu khud hi bol de kya hai tere dil me"
"Mujhe lagta hai ki"
"Ki?"
"Hume abhi dost tak hi rehna chahiye" I uttered hesitantly.
He looked away.
"Please" I urged politely.
He looked towards me"mere liye ye dosti se badhkar hai Nisha... mai saaf saaf bol raha hu. Aur tu bhi saaf saaf bole aisa hi ummeed karta hu okay? And this time, I'll kill you if you try to act diplomatic" he spoke with a straight face.
"What diplomatic yaar? I'm just trying to say that we remain friends. That's it!"
"Friends for lifetime?"He sulked.
"At least for now"
"Aur baad ka kya?"
"Baad ka baadme-"
"Nai! Choose carefully Nisha and if you want some time, mujhe exams k baad bataana. Aur ha exams me ye mat sochti baithna varna mujhe blame karegi ki mere vajah se grades bigad gaye" he uttered in irritation.
"Itna kya attitude dikha raha hai haa? Who are you to order me what to do or not?" I snapped.
"Who am I?" He asked dazed.
He ground his jaws"Listen to me Miss Nisha Gangwal, ye teri faltu ki ego apne jeb me rakh aur ek baat acchi tarah se jaan le. Mai tujhse pyaar karta hu magar ek jhoote rishte me bandhe rehna mujhe manzoor nai."
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Part D (Last subpart)

"Isliye humaare rishte ko naam mil jaye jald to accha hoga. Ya to humara rishta pyaar ka hoga ya teri taraf se dosti ka,kyunki mai to tujhse pyaar karta hu? no doubt, but I'll try hard to restrict myself to friendship" he said in a go, totally dissociated,not looking at me.
He sighed "bye aur ab direct exams k baad baat karenge" and he cut the call. He started his bike and zoomed off.
I lowered my head sadly not able to understand what to do.
"Iske paas bike hai to bus se kyu aata hai?" A thought dawned on me.
"Uff Nisha! Ab ye kyu soch rahi hai? Kitna tension de gaya ye vo soch!"
"Kaun tension de gaya?" My father enquired.
I gulped as my father came and stood beside me.
"Aur tu 2:30 baje kya kar rahi hai yaha?"
"Papa vo actually- par aap kya kar rahe ho is time?"
"Meri to pyaas se neend khul gyi phir tujhe badbadaate suna. Sab theek hai naa Nishu? So jaa varna paper likhte time neend aayegi"
I sighed declaring again "tomorrow's exam postponed"
"Oh, to tu gussa nikaal rahi hai badbadaakar" he chuckled.
I smiled "nai papa...mai to bas sone hi jaa rahi hu...goodnight"
"Goodnight"
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All exams were over and as said I was standing in front of Kabir and he was glaring at me. We were standing behind the nets at football field of the college. There was no one as people went to celebrate in joy of ending of exams and even though Kabir's angry but I trusted him undoubtedly. We have passed some amazing time in these months and I knew he would never harm me.
"Err...kya hua Kabir?" I enquired sheepishly.
"Tujhe kya aadat hai sar khaane ki dusro ka? You know it well why we're here"
"Tu gusse me bada handsome dikta hai...angry young man" I pulled his cheek.
"Really? Mujhe bhi tu rote hue badi cute dikti hai" he retorted.
I frowned "Kabir ab bas bhi kar naa aur kitni naaraazgi?"
He smiled ruefully "jisse pyaar karte hai usi se naaraazgi bhi hoti hai"
"Mai nai jaanti kabir ki mai tujhse pyaar karti hu ya nahi...par Shaadi mere parents k decision k saath hi hogi ye jaanti hu"
"Shaadi ka kaun keh raha hai Nisha? Pehle hi bataya tha tujhe ki mai abhi Shaadi k chakkar me nai padna chahta"
"To tujhe live in relationship chahiye?"
"Nahi Nisha vo sab door ki baatein hai...boyfriend girlfriend naam ki bhi to cheez hoti hai ki nai?"
"To gf bf bankar kya aisa teer maar lenge hum jo abhi nahi kar sakte?"
"Nisha yaar"
"Nai bata naa tu! Tujhe kya karna hai aisa?" I fumed.
He looked away.
I made him face me clutching his cheeks "Bataa naa ab"
He brought my hands down " har baar tere muh se sunna chahta hu ki tu sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai...bas itna ho jaega gf bf banne k baad...I guess dost aisa nai kehte ek dusre ko"
I eased down stooping my head.
"Mujhe pata hai ki shaayad tere liye ye difficult ho raha hai...par I promise Nisha tu jis din bol degi ki Kabir break up. I'll never show you my face after that. But please ek chance to de"
He brought my face up with his index finger.
"Bol Nisha"
I smiled giving in"okay"
His lips went up in a big bright smile "thanks"
"Kitna ghatiya sharmaata hai tu" I spoke.
He glared at me while I giggled. He then joined me giggling.
"But Mr. Khiladi I believe you only play football"
"If I even try to play on other matters I'm sure you'll" and he flashed his eyebrows hinting me to complete.
"I'll kill you" I chuckled.
"Ab to record kar hi le tu ise, bohot kaam aayega aage" he chortled.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
I'm unable to send pms at present kyunki messenger ka page hi nahi open ho paa raha😒
Will do tomorrow or in near future when internet gains its speed back😊
Whoever reaches here by their own I'm thanking in advance 😳
Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg so so so cute update 😳 😳 😳
Phir se nisha ka POV yeppee I loved it.. You know what I always love nisha POV. 😳 as being a girl we understand girl point of view more.
From start I feel like I had missed many things 😕 as I found nibir are more closer to each other 😃
Then exams yaar 😭😭 meri bhi halat kharb hai mere stupid university ke management se 😭😭 I'll tell you soon why...??
Nisha was trying to study and our great kabir was irritating her at that I also feel annoy with him 😕 you know kuch log hote hi pareshan karne ke liye.. Mere dost bhi kam nhi hai bhout pareshan karte hai exam ke time 😔
Nisha did best thing closing her phone 👍🏼
Kabir came in her room 😲
Then their moment were cute 😳😳
Mujhe bhi bhout darr lag raha tha nisha ke liye kahi sach me koi aa na jaye and when her father was behind her I thought bas ab toh gayi ye ladki 😆😆
Humara kabir ziddi ho gaya 😆😆
Honestly I feel irritated with his stubbornness as nisha was continuously trying to avoid that topic but he was very Ziddi.. But loved it when he said "tu breakup bolegi toh kabhi apna shakl nhi dikhaunga" I loved it deep meaning that how much he loves her 😳
Yaar mujhe bhi jaana hai kabir bus se kyun travel karta hai

And at last who told you that this whold be Last part ?? Mujhe kam se kam 30 to 40 parts chahiye hi chahiye and I said at least 30 to 40 parts or jayada ka likhne ka Mann ho toh likh Sakti ho😉
I want say one more thing kabir and nisha ka confession bhout jaldi ho gaya.. I want some their getting colse to each other chapters like their budding love 😳
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
awwwsooo lovely sweet updates👏thanku neeru🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update
aww .. this was so cute. nibir n mishri are goals seriously😳
confession was awesome 😳
please please do continue😳😳

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