Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nita,

You'll know about the characters more as few more chapters are updated.
I'm working on chapter 2 already. I'll take a break from December 15 for 20 days.will update as much as I can.Then I'll write
Hopefully be regular. Thanks for your encouragement gave me a push to make this concept come out in light.

Rockingbhardwaj , thank you dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start. Will wait for the updates.
Veena.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Veena, thanks for your response.

Chapter 2 is coming.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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l'm very sad. The show is going off air. kind of feeling empty. I'll try to post the updates as soon as I can. Once off air , less people will visit the forum. It'll be ignored. so here's chapter 2

Chapter 2



IGI airport, Delhi


Swara grabbed a chair close to her team. They had checked in the airport few minutes before.It was a team of ten,including a doctor who brought his spouse. There were a cardiac surgeon,a plastic surgeon,a neurosurgeon and some trainee residents from different hospitals. A young resident was trying to flirt with Swara for a while .

'Hi! I'm Vineet Ahuja. So you're the famous beauty with brain I heard about! Your college mate Nikhil and Misha boasted a lot about your shining career. But Alas! They couldn't praise your grace and charm enough,my lady!'

Swara was getting irritated. She was too tired to shut up that nutter, dimwit, stupid Vineet. Abhi uncle (out of hospital strict Dr Mathur is her doting Abhi uncle) saved her.

"Swara beta, can you get me some coffee and a sandwich for me?And Dr Ahuja, would you mind watching my laptop bag while I freshen up?"

They both got up quickly from there.

'Thanks uncle. That brainless moron was eating up my brain. Woh doctor kaise bana?' she whispered.

'Any time! After all I have a gorgeous daughter. Ladkon ka paltan to vagana parega! Take as much time as you can!' Abhi muttered while chuckling.

Poor Vineet looked seriously disappointed!

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Swara was having dinner while thinking about the troubles she faced till airport.

There was a sudden blast and blackout in her home. Moreover the flashlight and the candles were missing. Not to mention the extra chores she had to to as her caretaker aunty went home suddenly to meet her ill sister.

A teen aged boy from the local shop came to her rescue luckily . Not only did he fix the fuse box but also sent his sister to help her to finish her chores.

Then on the way the car just stopped abruptly. Driver uncle tried a lot, but it was useless.She sent the car to a garage but didn't get any transport for a long time until a family gave her lift.

Even Abhi uncle faced problems too.His instrument bag was missing which was needed for the procedures. He asked the supplier, panicking they can't give it such a short time. But they said, fortunately someone has ordered them but hadn't received yet. Uncle requested that person who agreed without a fuss and wished good luck for the venture.

'Hi! May I join?'a voice asked.

'Not again!' Swara exclaimed in her mind. She looked up and gave the speaker a polite smile, 'Mr Oberoi, you're here? How?' She sounded a bit astonished.

'Sanskar! Call me Sanskar. You're not a professional now.'he knotted his brows.

'That's not the answer to my question!' she was slightly annoyed now.

'Chill girl! I have a flight to catch, simple! Swara, do you get possessed outside hospital? Gosh you're being a live wire!' Sanskar exclaimed

' Don't call me by first name, Mr Oberoi! DR BOSE! Nothing else!' She was fuming.

'Oh so haughty and obsessed with your profession!' he taunted

Now Swara was a bit embarrassed. Her anger simmered a little, ' Okay you can call me Miss Bose. By the way where are going? '

'You're younger than me. And you're not my PA. So no way I'm going to call you that.' Swara protested, but he continued, 'And my destination is supposed to be Budapest, SWARA!'

'Are you following us by any chance, Mr Oberoi?!...' Swara was about to shoot few more piercing questions but couldn't, as Sanskar had shut her mouth by his left hand. Her hazel brown eyes were wide and red with anger, somehow bewildered. Sanskar slowly said looking at her eyes, 'I have a very nice name... Sanskar. Why don't you call me by that? And calm down! Too much anger is not good for someone's heart.' and he smirked.

Swara jerked his hand away, after freezing for a while. She got up abruptly and proceeded towards the coffee shop. What the hell! He's a stranger for God's sake! How dare he breach her personal boundary!He acted too friendly, called her "Swara", demanded to be called by first name... and ...and he FREAKING TOUCHED HER MOUTH!!!

Her train no no jet plane of thoughts came to halt. Someone pulled her hand. IT WAS HIM! That Oberoi!

'NOW WHAT???', she barked. Sanskar smiled sheepishly.

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From a distance someone was keeping eyes on the girl. He was a bit puzzled as he couldn't hear properly what's going on between her and the newly joined young man. If he could remember properly he noticed him in Sanjeevni today.He had a magnificent black bike. To be frank he recalled his face only for his stunning ride. It was unique one in the hospital compound.

Who is he ? The target's secret boyfriend? It seems so. He joined the same table, smiled at her. She was angry with him. He touched her. Then when she left, held her hand and apologised by folding his hands. She was not satisfied may be and left to her team.

The watcher followed her. His companion commented' These women! I tell you, they're tough nut to crack.'

'Hell her relationship status! We should mind our own business. Just keep an eye. Step in if this chirpy loverboy stops her from boarding on the flight.'

They watched the lover boy's face getting sad. They laughed inwardly. Seeing someone sad makes them happy. After all, they're instruments in orchestra of terror. They're Santa Clause who give gifts wrapped with blood. They're black clouds that engulf the earth with fear.

They are the army of tornedo... They are... the tempest...

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Just after the boarding announcement was made...

Someone was having the last minute phone call.

' Hello. What's up?'

'Plan A failed.AK injured. Had to abort the mission midway.'

'DAMN!Will he make it?'

'Don't dream! That dog is going to torture us for many days. So start the Plan B! To be frank failure of plan A is a blessing in disguise. If it works ,advantage will be ours in the long run. Are you ready then?'

' More than ready! Let's start the battle.'his jaws became hard and lips formed a crooked smile.

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Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Dyuti,
Interesting read so far. I enjoy mystery / thriller genre, so do keep updating. It should not make a difference if the show is winding up, if the readers are hooked they will stay with you.

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nyna,

So sweet of u. Next chapter will be the opening to main plot. Chapter 3& 4 is very crucial for the storyline. I'll try to update another chapter tonight. Hope more readers notice it.. hooked or not that I can't tell. I'll be overjoyed if I can do that.Mystery thriller is very tough genre for a novice writer for me. Bloopers will be there. I hope everyone ignore them in the name of creative liberty.

Dyuti
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Dyuti don't be disheartened and yes about the chapter ...it was awesome loved it ...I am becoming a fan of your writing slowly and gradually
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Phew! Chapter 3 is Ready. It was very long for my capacity. FF has started in true sense. Please read and give your kind feedback.

Chapter 3

The CHAOS

Swara was trying to get some sleep. Abhi uncle was talking Dr Sayani Gupta, the plastic surgeon, a very amiable middle aged lady. She was a patron in an acid survivors foundation. Abhi uncle was interested to be a sponsor.

The loud roars and laughters of some men were disturbing Swara's slumber. Some defense personals were sitting there. They were like this since the flight had taken off. It's 40 minutes now and her head was paining. They don't seem like defense people! How loud!'she thought Well they r humans too. Can't be formal all the time na?'

She got up from her seat. She had decided to request them very politely. She walked past the rows and went near them, took a deep breath and said,

Excuse me sir.'

Yes miss?'a man in late thirties with asked. He had hawk like eyes, crooked nose, sharp jawline and thick moustache.A commanding vibe can be sensed around him

umm.. Please pardon for my request.I have a bad headache and trying to sleep. If u don't mind can ur conversation have less... umm.. ,she hesitated

Noise, right? See I told u the passengers are getting pissed by us.' another one in his late twenties spoke up in chiding manner. He had light stubble on his face, short dark hair , well built body . Overall handsome features. He was looking amused and composed at the same time.

Sorry lady, we'll be careful from now. And captain Lakshya, don't order us.I'm the major remember?'The first man spoke again.

Please don't mind.I'm really not feeling well. Thank you for not taking my words to heart.', Swara was ready to go.

The captain got up,'Hi I'm Captain Laksh. Nice to meet and sorry again' he offered his hand for a shake

Swara responded to the formal gesture, And I'm Dr Swara Bose.'

I know.' and within few seconds her body was captive by his iron grip. A cold metal touched her temple. She froze from within. Blaring sound of a Gunshot almost made her ears bleed. What just happened?!!

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A wave of panic rushed through the cabin,soon it was filled with hues, gasps and shrieks. Dr Abhi was shocked and fear clenched his heart. He was petrified to see Swara with a gun pressed to her temple. A gun roared and the commotion turned into pin drop silence. A cabin crew was shot. The children were shushed by mothers. Abhinash could not stop himself. He has been a bachelor all his life.Swara is not only his responsibility. That girl took the place of a daughter in his life.


What's going on? LEAVE HER!!! How can u do that?You are supposed to protect our country! Why are u terrorising the passengers?'
He exclaimed

Swara was struggling after her momentary statue mode. Lakshya was dragging her towards the beginning of first row. He opened his mouth now. Oh Calm down Dr Mathur! As u see we are on mission now! You can feel proud too because you will join us soon! (Notices him moving) Don't dare to move even! Otherwise your doting daughter cum disciple will lose her precious life!'

Meanwhile 10 others with arms taken position. An air hostess returned from cockpit, her hands were raised over her head. She was panting, blood was splattered all over her light blue shirt. One attacker was behind her , pushing the arms barrel on her back and forced to move forward.

Sanskar was silent till now. He stood up to say something, but the attacker (who spoke to Swara first and called himself Major) Shouted

EVERYBODY SIT! IF ANYONE TRY TO ACT SMART, WE'LL FIRE GUNS WILDLY. THAT LADY WILL DIE...'

Abhi and Sanskar shouted "Nooo!!' at the same time. Abhinash was flabbergasted looking at the the unknown youngman.In the meantime Sanskar tried to assure
Ok we're all sitting down. Please don't harm Swara. What do you want?

Major leaned against the Cabin door and revealed,
Silence please (dramatically)! Hostages should speak only he is asked. We, the so called army troop hijacked this aircraft. So this flight isn't going to Budapest. Your Pilots are knocked down, I'm afraid. Our colleagues are kindly doing the duty in exchange. ( someone broke in tears and wailed) Don't be panicked please. We'll allow everyone to leave... except...' he paused and came near Avinash

Dr Mathur, my pleasure to meet u! You and Dr Bose are joining us. You have patient to treat. A very important patient.'

Avinash looked perplexed, you could meet us in my Hospital. Why did you hijack a plane?'

Major smirked,' because neither our patient, nor we are fond of law and order! To be frank, we create anarchy. Our patient is a celebrity in planning that. He needs solidarity from the people and their kind, whose identity we faked used to bring this huge amount of arms in a plane."

Swara was terrified now. The situation couldn't be worse. Terrorists in disguise have captured the aircraft. She and Abhinash are supposed to go with them to treat their leader. Those who destroy life of thousands, snatches peace of millions, they don't deserve to be saved. Even if Abhinash and she do that, there's no way they'll be released. Fate of prisoner for life or worse, death. She cursed herself. She looked at Avinash and sensed, he was thinking in the same line.

I'm not going to treat any terrorist! Not at cost! NOT ME!!NOT SWARA!!'Avinash refused. He can't let Swara in that hell and he can't indirectly help to endanger many lives.

The fake major was furious.Sanskar closed his eyes in despair. Sudden tension filled the air. Swara was dragged roughly, this time by major. Lakshya followed them.

Major continued in a grim voice,'Listen Dr Avinash Mathur! If you don't cooperate with me, U'll see my worst. I'll count from 1 to 10. Say Yes or I'll shoot her. 1..2...3..4...5...6...7..8..9...10 (shot fired)'


"ABHI UNCLE!!!"

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Swara was filled with grief and tears. Abhi uncle had suddenly charged on the major. The latter missed the target , the bullet hit Abhi's heart instead of Swara.

Abhinash was in pain but smiling,' Your mission is failed.. I'm dying (Swara whimpered) so no one is going to save your nasty patient! Goodbye beta. You're the best person, ...best daughter and (his expression became soft)...best trainee(beamed with pride) I've ever seen.' his breathing was ragged and soon ceased completely...

Swara was in anguish and cried out loudly. Her heart was filled with burning hatred...
You killed my mentor ... My Abhi Uncle... No my Father... I hate you!!! Your filthy mission will be failed too!your patient will DIE!'

NO!! Mission WON'T fail! He doesn't have that much time!' Major ran his fingers though his hair.' YOU! What did Mathur say before dying? You're the best trainee he ever had! You'll come with us!'

NEVER!!!'

I'll kill one by one passengers here if you refuse. U watched that I can. Which one first? This cute little girl? Or the pregnant lady over there? You can't be so selfish, can you?'

FINE!!' Swara look defeated, wiped her tears I'll come with you.' Major gave winning laugh..

Please I'll come with you too. I can't leave her alone with you.' all eyes go towards the pleading voice

Mr Oberoi stop it! Are you out of your mind?'Swara couldn't take it more

Swara I know you don't want your Sanskar in danger. But I love you. I can't leave my beloved alone. Ma papa ko keya jabab Dungi?Maine unki hone wale bahu ko is hal me chod ke aaya?'

Major got irritated what nonsense? I'm not going to take any extra burden. And you never (looking at the person who followed) informed about him?'

Yes he is her lover. He met her today in hospital, then had a fight in airport. He was trying to convince her.'

Sanskar spoke again,'Swara met me in London while visiting her family. We had a long distance relationship. Recently we decided to marry. See I'm an anaesthetist. So..'

Major thought for few seconds
"Fine. You can come. And Lakshya make arrangements for releasing others. Prepare to land in alternate area.'

Swara glared at Sanskar. Then her eyes went towards Abhinash and her eyes filled with tears again. Sanskar looked at her.

Some emotions stirred within him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear
Amazing if frankly speaking coming to serial plot, I don't like the illogical crap they show, sometimes I tried to watch but a period of time my interest vanished.
But no doubhts ff are amazing which give many clear and logical view, no doubt amazing ff is yours

Sushma
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dyuti dear...very nice name...
Read all 3 chapters together..n they were quite amazing...thrilling n full of suspense...i so enjoyed it alot...looking forward for next...update soonn...

Talia

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