Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Awesome chappy loved ur chappy ...the story is getting interesting wid each chapter...and yesss dyuti I m bengali...and my real name moumita...,.



Moumita,
I love u dear for your constant support and compliments for this FF.
I'll definitely try get beter for u ppl's sake. 😃 😳

Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Something really amazing dear, fine not doctor then... May be armg officer or some agents etc
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sanskar is security related like detective, police ,some anti terrorist force or he himself is terrorist the way terrorist are obeying him that is suspicious what is he terrorist or security force ??

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Dyuti..dear...
Again awesome chapter...swaragini characters entering one by one...now ragini...quite interesting..loving swasan nokh jhok..in such tense situation...im soo much enjoying this thriller journey...

Update soon...

Talia...

P.s...my name is quite uncommon.too like yours..n..it means fortunate...or lucky...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Another lovely update Dyuti dearest.. This FF is really captivating and interesting.. You are doing an amazing job with the updates dear.. I am loving it... Sanskaar is making me so curious I love it.. Swara was being the level headed one.. And ragini is there too.. Everything is intriguing dear.. Can't wait to read the next one

Love

Nita


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sushma98999

Something really amazing dear, fine not doctor then... May be armg officer or some agents etc



I hope you'll like Sanskar's characterisation
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanya17

Sanskar is security related like detective, police ,some anti terrorist force or he himself is terrorist the way terrorist are obeying him that is suspicious what is he terrorist or security force ??

Update soon



Hi Sanya,
Nice to meet u. Thanks for reading my FF. IT means a lot. Hope to get to know you better.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Another lovely update Dyuti dearest.. This FF is really captivating and interesting.. You are doing an amazing job with the updates dear.. I am loving it... Sanskaar is making me so curious I love it.. Swara was being the level headed one.. And ragini is there too.. Everything is intriguing dear.. Can't wait to read the next one

Love

Nita




Nita dear,
I appreciate your detailed response. For a rookie writer like me, this type discussion helps me to grow as a writer. As I didn't gave a character sketch, it's important to know what is your perception of them. I'll try to describe all the facets of their personality as the plot unveils. Raglak even if not main, they are very instrumental in thisFF.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting dyuti and the fact you are not keeping us waiting is yet another interesting fact. Thanks for the fast updates and the PMs.
Veena
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Dyuthi

Such an engaging read it wasšŸ‘

I love the twist of Sanskaar not being the Dr.Oberoi ..šŸ‘.Its good Ragini made an entry ..I guess she is with laksh.I am loving equation between Swara and Sanskaar.
The flow and Narration is super smooth ..ā­ļø

Love
Lucky


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