Thread #1: Aafato'n k parindey 'IshaqZaade' Chapters 1 -11

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Disclaimer: This FF is the work of Chashmish786 aka Jasmene! I'm just posting on her behalf!

I've made some changes for example in my ff chakor is a little stylish because she lives in a city...She goes to college too...She is not all time serious mahaan but actually a little childish and fun loving jolly girl who in need of time becomes very mature...

Arjun and bhagya are shown in their bedroom where bhagya is packing some stuff and arjun is reading some files...

Bhagya: Apko nahi lagta hume chakor ko akele nahi bhejna chahiye...Bachi hai woh abhi kitna bachpana hai usme abhi..
Arjun: Bhagya tumhe uska bachpana nazar ata hai uski maturity nahi ? Woh bachpana karti hai magar sahi waqt aney par kisi shatir insaan se zyada samajhdaari bhi dikhati hai...

Chakor is shown running on tracks her hairs are flowing in air her face has determination and her feet are flying in air... every step she takes a memory of her past comes in her mind...
( her entering haveli for the first time...bhaiyyaji caging her in a cage ... bhaiiyaji killing her ishwar mausa ji ..Bhaiyyaji killing her sister chunni...Bhaiyyaji making her sister imli a bandhua...)
The more she gets these flashbacks the more she runs fast...

Chakor comes home She's wearing jeans and a short pink kurti with yellow and pink scarf around her neck have a high pony tail...
Bhagya: Chakor kaha thi tum aaj tum mumbai jaa rahi ho aur ghar par nahi thi sara din mujhe tumhare sath time bitana tha ...
Chakor: Bhagya di Come'on mei 10 saal se apkey sath hun aur yeh waada karti hun k apne maqsad me jald hi kamyaab hone k baad firse hum sab ek family k jese rahyenge..

Arjun comes there and seriously asks chakor is she ready to take a first step of hr journey ?

Chakor replies that she was born ready ..

( Chakor goes to Mumbai and wins a race no one knows about her and no one ever saw her face...and now she is preparing for Delhi marathon )

In Azaadgunj police station...Some goons are beating a police officer and someone is sitting on chair wearing police uniform and cap he has a newspaper in hand there's a news about marathon runner 501 with a picture of Chakor while running but her face is not visible properly because her hair is covering her face mostly and only her eyes are visible light brown eyes)

The person sitting on chair is Suraj who is continuously looking at the picture...

Shikhu: Suraj babu aap kabse is tasveer ko kahey dekhe jaa rahe ho ?

Suraj: Tasveer dekhne ka maza tab ata hai jab chehra chupa na ho magar iss tasveer me dekh iss 501 ki aankhein dekh...dekh kar saaf pata chalta hai kisi baaghi ki ankhein hain itni aag hai inme ufff...

Shikhu: aag par humka toh nahi dikhat hai...

Suraj: tujhe dikhegi bhi nahi kyunke aankho ki aag dekhne k liye dill me aag honi chahiye ( and smirks )

Police officer: chote malik humka chorh diyo hum aagey se kuch nahi kahenge

( Suraj goes to him and cuts his tongue as shown in serial ) then wears his jacket looks at himself in mirror and then looks at the picture of marathon runner 501 and leaves from there...

Precap : chakor's gives statement against bhaiyyaji in front of media...Suraj sees this news on TV...Imli kidnaps Chakor ...Chakor and Suraj come face to face after 10 year..


Sorry this if this chapter was not interesting I had to start it from the beginning so that it can be easy for you guys to accept the changes I've made...I will post an interesting episode tomorrow InshaAllah with SuKor scenes..But please do comment and share your thoughts and sorry for the mistakes..

Love Jasmene 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jasmene Namita u both r amazing awesomw and fab as compared to ur work dear
It was awesome I loved it a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Jasmene, wonderful work. Looking forward to more updates from you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its supercool.pls continue .this forum has lack of ffs .looking fwd to see next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazy4AzMa

Jasmene Namita u both r amazing awesomw and fab as compared to ur work dear
It was awesome I loved it a lot

Thank you so much for your lovely comment I will try my best not to disappoint anyone 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

@Jasmene, wonderful work. Looking forward to more updates from you.


Thank you so much nami di not only for your lovely comment but for your help too .. And I'm glad tha you'll be the first person reading my ff everyday 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashu..

Its supercool.pls continue .this forum has lack of ffs .looking fwd to see next chapter


Thank you !
I know right...So less SuKor ff's but no worries I will try my best for thiss ff and InshaAllah in fututre we will have loads of SuKor ffs 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chasmish ji your writing is very good. It took some time to ready because my hindi is weak but keep at it.

Looking forward to it.

👏😆😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks to Namita di for helping and posting :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@jasmine:Beautifully written. ...Nice start...plz update regular and make it lengthy with loads of sukor sceans. .

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