Thread #1: Aafato'n k parindey 'IshaqZaade' Chapters 1 -11 - Page 3

Aafato'n ke parindey ishaqzaade chapter 3..

Chakor and Kn comes face to face after 10 years ( Everything happens just like in serial )

After Kn gav his statment infront of media he left angrily and there were only suraj and chakor standing on the door when chakor was about to leave suraj held her hand and said..

Suraj : Jab papa ne tumhare galey par chaaqu rakha toh hum toh darr gaye they k teekhi mirchi chakhne se pehle hi katt jayegi...

Chakor : Tumhe mere liye darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ..yeh tikhi mirchi 7 saal ki umar se Tumhare baap se larti aa rahi hai..

Suraj : Parr abb zara sambhal kar rehna na banhua billi..woh kia hai na abb tu 7 saal ki bachi nahi hai or nahi main 10 saal ka chota bacha ( winks )

Chakor walks off angrily...

Chakor goes to basti meets her parents and sleeps on her mother's lap..In the night chakor wear her track suit ( black tights and wight long shirt ..Not her usual track suit ) and goes out..

While running she reaches near river and a flashback comes in her mind...that whenever she was sad or happy she comes to this place the river bank and sit on the highest rock ( which was quite higher ) flash back ends...and she goes to sit on the same rock she rest her head on another rock and looked at the full moon...

THIS IS AMAZING ESP THIS LINE🤣 - Suraj : Chorh dete hath magar aadat se majboor hain...kyunke suraj rajvanshi ek baar kisi ka haath thaam le toh use chorta nahi hai..

Love how you make this more chatpti an teekhi 😆😆😉

My Hindi is a little weak and took some time to read it but you write amazing well and what a cliff hanger to stop at Chashmish. 👏👏

Im waiting for the next update eagerly

@thanks to Nami Di for posting

Originally posted by: sukiya123

THIS IS AMAZING ESP THIS LINE🤣 - Suraj : Chorh dete hath magar aadat se majboor hain...kyunke suraj rajvanshi ek baar kisi ka haath thaam le toh use chorta nahi hai..

Love how you make this more chatpti an teekhi 😆😆😉

My Hindi is a little weak and took some time to read it but you write amazing well and what a cliff hanger to stop at Chashmish. 👏👏

Im waiting for the next update eagerly

@thanks to Nami Di for posting

Thank you so much for your kind and wonderful words dear...I was feeling so terrible for not being able to explain that cliff scene correctly so sorry about that 😭😒...
Thanks again I will try to update next part as soon as possible..
Love-Jasmene

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Another superb update Jasmene!!

First thing first..A huge thank you nami di for posting this 😊...
And thank you for your lovely comment but I know that I'm a terrible writer and I've done so many mistakes in the update but you still liked it and I'm glad about that so Thank you so much ...🤗

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT Chashmish ❤️😃

@nami di: thank you for posting it 😃

Originally posted by: _YmBrYnE_

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT Chashmish ❤️😃

I seriously loved this chapter a lot 😃 especially the last part where Suraj and Chakor respectively was thinking about each other.. Hope to see more of SuKor's scene in the next update..

And the scene near the lake one was also superb der.. Keep writing please and looking forward for the next update 😃

Originally posted by: Chashmish786

Thank you so much for your lovely comment 😳
I'm really happy that you liked the cliff scene because I was not able to explain it and I feel terrible about it ... sorry for bad writing..
And of course there'll be awesome sukor scenes in future Because this is a SuKor fan fiction you know😆
#Achasorry #Lame joke
😆

Yet another awesome update...thank u dear...sukor remembering each other...hmm..interesting. ..plz update the next part soon...

Recap : Chakor meets her parents after 10 years..Chakor and Suraj's argument on cliff ..Suraj saves Chakor from faliing and she accidentally hugs him...

Chakor calls aditya and asks if everything is ready ?
Aditya : yess chakor everything is ready ..tum fikar matt karo poora media waha'n majood hoga kn k khilaaf gawahi sunney k liye...

Chakor : Mujhe poorey media ki koi fikar nahi aditya bass yahi dua hai k maa officer k samney kn k khilaaf bina darey bayaan de dein...

( Chakor's mother was threatened by Imli and she changes her statement at the last moment to everyone's shock specially chakor's .. The officers gives a clean chit to kn and leaves...Chakor was standing there with teary eyes looking at her mother when someone snapped their fingers to get Chakor's attention )

Kn : Ayy larki dkh liya...dekh liya na tuny humse panga lene ka anjaam...

Chakor still has tears in her eyes but she angrily replies : Abhi yeh kahaani anjaam ko nahi pohnchi kamalnarayan rajvanshi...Suna nahi tumne k kahaani tab khatam hoti hai jab sab thik ho jaye or jab tak tum jail ki salaakho'n k pechey nahi chale jate yeh kahaani khatam nahi hogi..

Suraj gets angry and says : Ayy bakwaas band kar apni ...Jaisey tere afsar chale gaye hain na waisey kuch dino me yeh media bhi chala jayega or phit tu hogi or hum bass...
Kn : arey bass kijiye suraj pehle hi bechari ko apni hi maa ne dhoka de diya ap matt dantiye..( laughs )

( Kn and suraj leaves while chakor looks at them leaving with teary eyes and remembers how her mother betrayed her ...she then looks at her mother who wwas coming to her but chakor did not wantd to talk to her so she ran away )

Chakor came back before evening and was upset with her mother but after her mother's explanation she forgave her and decided that she cannot trust anyone now...She was tossing and turning in her room when she realized that she did't meet Vivaan ..she suddenly got up and wore white chiffon plazzo and printed blue short kurti with her favorite scarf ( pink and yellow colored ) in her bag took Vivaan's gift to and put it in her bag too and left from house after informing kasturi )

Chakor meets Vivaan but he refused to recognize her and throws the paints brought by her and Chakor leaves from there upset...All this was being witnessed by Suraj who immediately came down and blocked Chakor's way ...

Chakor : Kya hai ???? ( angrily )
Suraj : Yeh toh tum btaogi ..Aakhir tum aadhi raat me humarey ghar k samne khari ho ...
Chakor : Mein tumhe kuch bhi btana zaroori nahi samjhti..
Suraj : Arrey vivaan ne tumhe pehhanney se inkaar kar diya toh tu uska gussa hum par kyon nikaal rhi hai ?
Chakor : Tumpar chillaney k liye mujhe kisi or par gussa hone ki zaroorat nahi..Tum kn no 2 ho toh tum par gussa hona toh banta hai na..
Suraj : Acha chal yeh sab chorh or yeh bta k humare liye kia laai ??
Chakor confusingly looked at him...

Suraj : arrey aisey kia dekh rhi hai..humari bandhua billi shehar se sabke liye kuch na kuch l;ai hai magar apne suraj babu ko bhool gai ??

Chakor : Pehli bat toh yeh k na me Tumhari bandyhua billi hun ur na hi tum mere koi Apne ho...aur dusri baat main tumhey kaisey bhool sakti hun suraj ?? ( Smirking )

Suraj : Achaw toh iska matlab hyumare liye bhi gift hai ?? Magar hume kahi'n nazar toh nahi aa raha ?? Ohh achaw samajh gaye hum..You naughty girl ( winks )

Chakor looks at him confused while he starts coming closer to her she was taking steps back and he was moving forward...she was stopped by a pillar behind her when she tried to leave from side Suraj kept his both hands on each side of the pillar and blocked her way ..

Chakor : Hato suraj jane do mujhe...( angrily )
Suraj : arrey aisey kaisey janey dein humara gift toh de pehle...( moves forward to kiss her but chakor pushes him back and angrily says ...

Chakor : Tumhara tohfaa tumhe kal subha mill jayega sabke saamne bass tum raat bhar smile karne ki practice krte rehna woh kia hai na shayad kal mushkil hogi sabki samne smile krne main...says chakor smilingly and leaves from there ..

Suraj was still standing there and angrily thought in his mind : Jabb dekho junglee billi ki tarha panja maarney ko tayyar rehti hai pata nai kal konsa naya zakhm dene wali hai...

Morning...
Out side haveli...

"Chakor was present there with all media persons when kn and Suraj came down she happily announced that kn is going to dig 10 wells in the village that too with his own money..this shocked Suraj and kn and Suraj remembered Chakor's gift ..Kn was shocked but to keep his image clean he faked happiness and agreed on doing so and left from there...All media persons also left..Chakor was looking at Vivaan's room's window when Suraj came from behind and held her arm tightly and dragged her to a storeroom while Chakor was continuously trying to get free from his clutches...but failed every time ..he threw her on the mattress Chakor looked at him shocked + angrily ..

Chakor : Yeh kia batmeezi hai suraj ?

Suraj coming near to chakor while she trying to get back...: Woh sab kya tha jo abhi bahar kiya tuny ?

Chakor : woh tumhare or tumhare baap k liye ek chota sa tohfaa tha..sunn liya abb hato mere raaste se...she stood up and tried too leave when suraj again held her arm and pinned her to wall...

Suraj : hum achi tarha se samajh rahey hain k tu kia karne ki koshish kir rhi hai..par ek baat kaan khol kar sun le yeh jiss media k ball par tu itna uchal rhi hai na ek baar woh yaha'n se chala jaye fir tujhe aiosy maut denge k poore azzadgunj me humare papa ki taraf ankh utha kr dekhne wala koi ni hoga..

Chakor : karo koshish tumhe jitni karni hai magar mein tumhari in dhamkiyo se darne wali nahi hun...She pushes suraj and leaves from there while suraj watches her leaving...both were angry ..

When Chakor was leaving from store room, she was adjusting her dupatta which was spoiled due to Suraj dragging her and Imli saw her leaving from store room and adjusting her dupatta then she saw Suraj coming out of store room and she ran to Suraj ..

Imli in crying voice : aap yaha'n they ?

Suraj : angrily" Nahi chaand par they ..

Imli : nahi humra matlab tha oo didi abhi...
She could not complete her sentence because of the death glare she got from suraj..

Suraj : Tu humari naukar hai wohi reh or baki logo k sath hum kia krtey hain yeh tujhe poochne ki zaroorat nahi...tu jaa or pata kar k raat ko purane jungle k raste se jo humara truck ane wala hai sharaab ka woh kab tak ayega...

Imli : thik hai suraj babu humka maaf mari diyo hum abhi jaa kr pata lagatey hain she leaves...

Suraj : hume abb jo bhi karna hai saavdhani se karna hoga woh bandhua billi ghayal sherni bani hui hai jabse afsar ne papa ko clean chit diya hai...

On the other Chakor was checking some files when she thought..
Humey Imli ki baatein sunney se pata chal gaya hai k aaj raat kuch karne waley hain yeh log purane jungle me ...Magar suraj rajjvanshi tumhey mein itni asaani se abb koi ghair kanooni kaam nahi karney doongi...

( Both Chakor and Suraj were thinking about each other angrily )

The end..

Pre-cap : Suraj and Chakor argue in jungle ...Suraj walk to her in anger and removes her dupatta and throws it away..Chakor slaps Suraj..

Here you go..I got some awesome reviews yesterday and I was really happy so decided to make you guys happy to with a quick update...Please forgive me for the mistakes and enjoy the update...Do comment and tell me how are you liking my story ?

Love...Jasmene😊