recap : suraj asks chakor for a kiss if she loses the challenge...Chakor gets caught by Suraj in haveli at night...
morning at Chakor's house...
Chakor was practicing shooting regularly but only managed to shoot things that were steady and big she was't able to shoot moving things...Imli was getting more frustrated than Chakor which confused Chakor but she decided to ignore it for now...
at haveli :
Suraj on phone : Par papa aisey kaisey ho sakta hai ?
Kn: par war hum aapko baad main batayenge pehle jo kaam kaha hai aap woh kariye...
Suraj: thyik hai papa aap kehtey hain toh hum...( he was in middle of talking when kn hung up the call )
Suraj called someone and asked him not to come tonight ...
in evening...at Chakor's house
Chakor was getting ready she was wearing black palazzo with dark orange long kurti with black embroidery on neck line and her favorite scarf draped around her neck and open hairs...she was praying to her daak baba...she took her maai's blessings and left for fare...
Imli,Suraj,Shikhu and Suraj's other goons were already present at the fair suraj was selecting gun when he saw Chakor coming...he put his gun down and goes to Chakor..
Suraj : Barbaad karney k aur bhi tarikey the ay dost...
Na janey tuney apne husn ko hi hathyaar kyon bnaya...
Chakor looked at him angrily and was about to go when he holds her hand and says...
Suraj : thik hai wah wah nahi karni matt kar magar ek baat sunti jaa...tujhe kal bhi kaha tha humne ke agar tu khud haar maan le toh sabke samne teri beizzati nahi hogi haar kar or na hi badnaam hogi hume sabke saamne kiss kar k...tujhe aakhri baar mauqa dete hain haar maan le...(comnes close to her ear and whispers ) aisy jagah le jayenge jaha'n koi dekh na paaye...
this made chakor more angry and she pushed him back and said..
chakor : abb mein tumse kuch kehti hun...short main kahungi...khud par confidence hona samajhdari hoti hai magar over confidence ko bewakoofi kehte hain suraj narayan rajvanshi...
after sometime shikhu announces the game and rules..
Shikhu : Nishaney baazi ki iss prtyogita ( competition ) maa 3 parhaav (rounds) hui hai..pehle maa ee maze pe rakha saib ko nishana lagana hai...dusre maa uu bottle ko hum ghumai dein hain or usi ghoomti bottle par nishana lagana hai..or tee ( he was cut off by suraj who asked him to shut up and let the game begin )
Suraj ; chal ladies first...laga nishana
Chakor thinks of the children and aims at apple and shoot...and the bullet hits the apple...
Chakor gets happy and looks at Imli who also smiles in return but when Suraj looks at her she fakes getting upset...
Suraj : chal abb humari baari he aims at apple and shoots...but nothing comes out of the gun because it was empty...he gets shocked ...
Imli remembers how she exchanged his gun with an empty one when he left his gun on table to go to Chakor...
Suraj gets angry and shouts at his men to bring the bullets...
Chakor : kaha tha na maine over confidence...
Suraj ; chhupp warna...
Shikhu announces the scores : Chakor : 1 Suraj babu : z zz 0
now Shikhu comes and spins the bottle and Chakor aims at it...and shoots...but she misses it and gets sad while Suraj smirks and looks at her and shoots without even looking at the bottle (because he was looking at Chakor ) and the bottle breaks into pieces...everyone claps for him while Chakor and Imli stands there frowned ...
Suraj : abb bol kuch keh rahi thi ?
Chakor : ziada khush matt ho abhi ek round baaki hai..
Shikhu : chakor : 1 suraj babu : 1
abb aakhri prh...( Suraj calls him and he goes to Suraj and Suraj whispers something in his ears Chakor did't notice that because she was busy boosting up her confidence for the sake of the children and now her dignity too...)
Shikhu : aakhri parhaav maa oo asmaan main urh rahey panchi par nishana lagana hai...
this shocked both Chakor and imli to death...Chakor looked at Suraj and said
Chakor : yeh kia bol raha hai aakhri round me toh unn rassi se latke matko'n par nishana lagana tha na..
Suraj : dekh nishane baazi k liye dill pathar hona chahiye or yeh baat tab hi pata chalti hai jab kisi zinda ko maara jaye...shaam ka waqt hai dekh aasman k kitne parinde ghr jaa rhe hain inme se kisi ek ko tu maaar le...ziada se ziada kia hoga ek chota sa parinda marr jayega ...
Chakor : pagal ho gaye ho ? chota hi sahi magar woh ek jaandaar hai...goli lagne par use bhi utni takleef hogi jitni tumhe yaa mujhe hogi...woh kisi ki family ho sakta hai...tumhare jaisa insaan yeh sab nahi samajh sakta...tumhe insaano ko maarne me hichkichahat nahi hoti toh ek parindey...
suraj cuts her in middle and says
suraj ; bhashan na jhaarh...tujhe nishana nahi lagana toh matt laga hum toh lagayenge...he points gun up and shoots and a bird falls down while chakor shuts her eyes...
Suraj looks at her and whispers in her ears...
Suraj : aankh khol k dekh...meri jeet par sab taaliya'n baja rahey hain she opens her eyes and watches everyone clapping for suraj and looks at imli who leaves from there disappointed...after realizing that she's lost the gun in her hands falls down..
suraj : tohh ?? samajh aya k nahi ??
chakor looks at him with teary eyes and was confused ..
suraj : arrey aisye kia dekh rahi hai hum toh woh tere lecture ki baat kar rahey the confidence over confidence blah blah blah...yeh sab koi maaney nahi rakhta agar insaan k paas dimaagh ho to..
chakor gets angry and say : dimaagh nahi isey dhoka kehte hain...last round kuch or tha tumne end par jaan boojh kar cheating ki...kyonke tumhe darr the mujhse haarne ka...
suraj : abb kyon chilla rahi hai ? pehle kaha tha haar maan le...
he comes forward while she takes a step back but he holds her waist and pulls her ...her heart beat was so fast that he could feel it ...he came closer to her ears and again whispered
suraj : Haveli main miltey hain...he said this and left from there with his men while chakor was standing there confused ...
chakor goes to home and informs her maai that she lost...her maai consoles her and asks her to go and sleep but chakor remembers how suraj asked her to come to haveli...she thinks..
chakor : nahi usne dhoka kiya mere saath...main bhi uski koi shart nahi manungi.,...Tit for tat...suraj rajvanshi...and falls asleep..
at haveli : suraj calls imli in his room...
suraj : hum jaante hain ke humari gun khaali kaisey hui thi..
imli was shocked to her death : oo sur...suraj babu oo ham
suraj : oo aaa kuch nahi,...hume laga tha k tu humari wafadaar hai magar nahi apni behan k aney se tere bhi tevar badal gaye..??
imli starts crying ; nahi nahi suraj babu hum ...humka maaf kar dio...hum tohaar wafadaar hi hain..oo toh bass hum...
suraj : acha acha rona band kar...tujhe apni wafadaari sabit karne ka ek mauqa deta hun...
imli : ji suraj babu aap jo kahi ho hum oo kare ko tayyar hain kucho bhi...
suraj : jaa chakor ko abhi isi waqt humare paas le kar aa...
this shocked imli but she thought something and said..
imli wiping her tears : thik hai suraj babu...Hum ...Hum didi ko le kar aai hai tohre paas kisi bhi keemat par...
suraj who was sitting on sofa without looking at imli signed her to go...and thought..
suraj : waqt aa gaya hai k uss thappar or us zakhm ko thandaa kiya jaye...tujhe gusse ki aag me jalaa kar marathon ace runner 501...
The end..
precap : imli comes home with some goons...Chakor refuses to go with her...kasturi slaps imli...imli hits chakor on head and she faints...
That's it guys...I don't know If you guys will believe me or not but I wrote this chapter yesterday and sent it to Nami di but my google page broke down..and history repeats itself and all my work was wasted so I've written this chapter for the 2nd time now...Hope you guys like it...do share your views and do tell me what you liked the most in this chapter...
a big thanks to your 'Nami di" and my angel ...yup that's what I'm gonna call her ...😆
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