Thread #1: Aafato'n k parindey 'IshaqZaade' Chapters 1 -11 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 11
Another great update by you chashmish ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ and I'm so sorry for being late to comment ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alooo I'm becoming your fan just for the dialogues alone, like seriously how do you come up with these ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
"hud par confidence hona samajhdari hoti hai magar over confidence ko bewakoofi kehte hain suraj narayan rajvanshi..."
It's a common phrase but I just liked when you used the dialogue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And seriously, killing bird for competition, not very good Suraj babu you know Chakor's weakness and you used it really well and Chakor cried ๐Ÿ˜ญ.. Ohhh my poor little baby, Suraj is a badass here I must say ๐Ÿ˜ณ.. But no complaints cause I know you'll definitely justify all the characters in the story..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 12
Kasturi surprised me in this update๐Ÿ˜ฒ.. she slapped Imli, arey yeh tappar toh pehle karni chaiye thi paar koi bath nehi, ab jo kar diya na so it's okay ๐Ÿ˜†..

Chakor was feeling pain in her head she opened her eyes and her vision was blurred ...But when she got back her sense completely her heart skipped a beat because she realized that she's in suraj's room and is on his bed and the blurred image she saw was none other than suraj's who was sitting on the sofa that was easy to look at from bed ( I make no sense here i guess )

Trust me you made complete sense to me ๐Ÿ˜†, and I like the way you write every detail on how Suraj's warm spreads on Chakor and how her heart skip a beat when Suraj is there.. It shows they are connected in a way ๐Ÿ˜ณ...
I'm actually glad in a way that Suraj did not kiss her, at least not under this circumstances ๐Ÿ˜Š...
And girl power-man, I absolutely LOVEDDD Chakor's comeback for Suraj's comment.. It showed how strong she was and I really love it ๐Ÿ‘.. Kudos to you aloo for giving us the strong Chakor โญ๏ธ

Andd we got to see a glimpse of Suraj's hurtful past.. Now we know why he has a fear of losing, can't believe that even Tejaswini abused him ๐Ÿ˜ก.. Please do write more about Suraj's past so and hopefully Chakor will be there listening to what happened to him when he was young ๐Ÿ˜Š

A word of advice here aloo, don't beat yourself too much here, you are doing a fantastic job as a writer and you should keep doing so okay.. samjhi tum? Good ๐Ÿ˜†
Now off to the second thread to post my comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Here you go Jasmene!!!

Thank you so much nami di...
You are awesome...

Edited by Chashmish786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Since Alooo didn't post it I'll do it behalf of her ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Sweet. Good thinking Neha.


๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ dhankyou nami di
now need to tell aloo to post this link in her 2nd thread ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 8 years ago
First part of Jasmene's FF!

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