Thread #1: Aafato'n k parindey 'IshaqZaade' Chapters 1 -11 - Page 8

suddenly kasturi looked t chakor and said..bachua ee rang toh tere maathey se thik tarha'n nahi utra hai...dekh aisa lagat hai sindhoor lagaya hai ( laughs )

Chakor felt like she got a mini heart attack after listening to what her maai said...because she know who'd applied this...

Chakor : N..Nahi maa woh yeh toh..aaj holi thi na toh bass wohi rang hai..

Kasturi : haan haan hum janat hain itna q pareshan howat hai ? ahaw bachua tu jaisey kal imlu ko lai thi ghr waisey aaj bhi le aa na...

Chakor knew that if she goes to bring imli she has to go to haveli...but she decided that she is not afraid of anyone so she will go to haveli...

Chakor was standing at the haveli gate...she opened it and entered in haveli where she asked wtachman about imli...he told her that she's working in storeroom ...
Chakor saw suraj and his friends sitting in garden so she stealthily tried to go to store room but someone blocked her way...it was non other than suraj..

Suraj : Bandhua billi phir se haveli ? Tum ek kaam kyon nahi karti..apna boriya bistra utha kar yaha'n hi settle kyon nahi ho jati...?? hume lagta hai tumhe kuch ziada hi passand hai haveli ( laughs )

Chakor : Ghalat fehmi hai tumhari k mujhey yeh haveli passand hai...mein yaha'n apni behan ko lene ai hun ...hato mere samne se..

Suraj : Imli kahi'n nahi jayegi..woh kaam kar rahi hai..

Chakor : Itni rat ho gai hai jo kaam karwana hoga subha karwa lena...

Suraj : achaw thik hai jaa or poochle usi se k woh jayegi tere saath yaa nahi jaa jaa...

Chakor goes to imli and asks her to come with her but suraj signs imli to say no..so imli refuses after trying several types and getting insulted by imli chakor gets angry and decides to leave...suraj smirked while she was leaving...she was about to go to the main gate but someone by mistake threw little color in her direction due to which she gets a cough attack...suraj saw her coughing badly but as confused about what to do..he was about to go and get water for her but stopped himself when he saw his friend rakesh pffering chakor thandai..

Rakhesh : Am really sorry ghalti se apki tararf rang aa gaya..aap yeh thandai pi lijiye..

Chakor : ( Coughs ) nahi hum thik ( coughs ) thik hain..thank you

Rakesh: dekhiye aap ko khaansi ho rahi hai or waisey bhi yeh bhaang nahi sirf thandai hai..

chakor's cough was getting worse so she drinks the thandai while rakesh was smirking ...

after drinking thandai which was actually bhaang rakesha took glass from her hand..

Chakor : thank you
rakesha : its all my pleasure miss chakor..
chakor : aap mujhe jante hain ( feels a little dizzy )
rakesh : apko kon nahi janta hai..

chakor was getting dizzy and stumbled a little so rakesh kept her hand on her shoulder which she jerked away...

chakor : mujhe..mujhe abb ( she was seeing two rakhesh ) mujhe ghr chalna ...stumbles again and rakesh holds her shoulders again ...

Rakesh : aiyye mein apko chorh deta hun ghar...

( Suraj was witnessing all this and knew where the story was going )

chakor : trying to remove his hands but failed...nahi me ...me khud chali jaungi...

Rakesha nahi aiyye aap mere sath...and drags her...out and asks her to sit in his car whoch was parked a little away from main gate...

Chakor was losing her senses and agreed to sit in his car...he opened the door she was about to sit when someone shut the door ...she looked back and saw someone familiar ...

Rakesh : arrey suraj yeh kia kar rahey ho..

Suraj : yeh toh hum poochne aye hain...tum kia kar rahey ho..

Rakesh: Arrey Suraj samjha karo na...waisey bhi tumhe bhi toh iss se problem hai ...toh main...( he could't complete the his sentence because of the punch he got in the face from Suraj )

Rakesh : yeh kia ..kia kar rahey ho suraj ...apne dost par haath utha rahey ho...

Chakor lost her senses completely and said...Haaawww dosht ko maaaraaa...

Suraj holds chakor's arm and pulls her to his side and gives another punch to rakesh and asks him to leave...and raksh leaves from there eyeing chakor while suraj comes in front of her giving rakesh a deadly death glare...

Suraj then turns to chakor holds her hand and asks her to come with him...

Chakor :; arreeyy naai...chorho meraa hatth...mujhe nai jana tumm ...tumhare shaath...I don't trusht you suwaj babu...

Suraj : jiskey saath nahi jana chahiye tha uskey sath toh barey maze se jaa rahi thi..abb chalo mere sath tumhe ghar chorh kar aau..

Chakor : Parr tum q chorhoge mujhe ghar ?? you hate me...haww tum mujhe bhi waisey maroghey na jaisey abhi uskho maaraaa ?? henawww

Suraj : fikar matt karo tum...suraj rajvanshi ko bekhabar maut dena passand nahi...saza toh tumhe milegi lekin jab tum poore hosh me hogi ta k har baat yaad karwa sakein tumhe..abb chalo..

He drags her to his jeep and makes her sit in it too...while driving she was talking non sense continuously ...his jeep suddenly stopped due to which she was about to bump her head on jeep but he kept his hand on her forehead and saved her from getting hurt...

Chakor : Hahahaha Tumhari khataraa kharaab ho gai...

Suraj : humari jeep ko khatara matt kaho...niche utro paidal chalna parega waisey bhi tumhara ghr kuch hi door hai...they started to walk but chakor was feeling dizzy ...she was about to fall but suraj holds her..his one arm was around her waist while the other one was holding her shoulder...chakor was completely unconscious in suraj's arm..he was looking at her when suddenly he saw the little red color that was still on her forehead and remembered how he applied he the red color..

When I said update fast I wasn't expecting it to be this fast but no one's complaining so 😆

*Edited*

Aloo I'm telling you now, your FF is geting famous, I'm actually wondering why didn't they use this story instead, but it's okay I guess I prefer the serial one too 😆.. Anyways, coming back to the chapter:

She felt his touch 😳😆

And her maan pei sindoor laga hai, so Suraj and Chakor are officially married in the eyes of fans now 😆😉. And yesss, at least here we get to see d old mirchi wala Suraj, loved how he just punched that guy and how he dragged her and go, he was like an angry boyfriend 😆

All in all an awesome update Chashmish keep up the good work 😃👏

Lovely update. Ek aur ehsaan kar gaya Suraj babu!

Thank you so much..😃

Suraj ko kia huva hai yeh toh usey bhi nahi pata...😆

I've sent 2 chapters 2 namita di already...Whenever she gets time she will post it...

Hi...Sahas right...Thank you so much for taking out your time to read my "nacheez si story " 😆 and posting lovely comments... Well No one knows if suraj really is a gentleman or not for now ... you will get to read 50 shades of suraj in my story #Lamejoke sorry 😆

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