AarYa OS: Beauty in Ugly

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved this story.
Sadly this is the story of so many woman/girls. The men in their lives that are supposed to protect them become their abusers. Not only stepfathers, fathers, teachers etc. They become easy prey in the hands in sadistic predators.

In this story at least Aarti had the presence of mind to fight back and then to run. She was brave enough to leave even when she had no where to go.

She lost so many people at such a young age. And then when she finally thought she would have a family it went pear shaped. Her stepfather was a adulterer and an abuser. And regrettably she only had him at the tender age of 17. And in his drunken state he wanted to do the unthinkable.

i can totally understand Aarti's fears where it comes to Palak. She too started out in life on the back foot, being abandoned. her only transgression probably was her gender. And clearly Aarti would be passionately protective of her. And I am with her on this. As a mother you should be extremely vigilant as who you let into your children's lives.

A good mother will always set aside her own happiness for that of her children, but fortunately not everyone out there is out to harm you. And Yash was one of those good people. And he loved her and was shattered because of her lack of trust in him. I loved that he didn't abandon Palak even when the relationship between him and Aarti broke.

I think his commitment won her over. She even felt possessive over his love for her family. And finally love won out. She gave him her full commitment and trust. She surrendered to their love agreed to marry him.


Thanls for tackling a real and sensitive issue. Life is not always a fairy tale and events of things in your past tend to shape your future and attitude towards life. But the in the end you get to choose whether you want to dwell in the past or move on, forgive and forget and start anew.

Most of all Loved the happy ending as usual.

Edited by B-onesie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited!

Honey-Bee took most of the words out of my mouth, well hand in this case... I'll try though...

What a sad life Aarti led. A life that is sadly a reality for so many girls. Girls who are abused by the very people that ought to protect them. Unlike Aarti most of them never escape from it, also, unlike Aarti most of them do not have a Yash or a Shoba in their corner...

Coming to this particular story: Aarti lost so much at such a young age. She struggled to belong and she had none to call her own as she lost her near and dear ones.

She got exposed to the ugly side of life when that vile scumbag wanted to rape her. She managed to escape but found the beauty of life in the form of Shoba, now she belonged again. Then she saw the ugly side of life when she found Palak in that dustbin, poor little soul who was treated like garbage for being born a girl. The beaty in that was that she made the little one her own, raised her to be confident and secure in her love.

Life showed her its ultimate beauty when she found her true love. Out of fear she tried to push him away but he stayed. He continued loving both her and her family. She realized that he was different, his love was genuine, he was there to stay. He loved her despite the ugly even when she bared her pain. He loved the beauty that she embodied. She was a woman of strength and courage, one who overcame so much!

Loved it VD! It was so heartfelt and emotional! ❤️
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS. Your title is very apt ' Beauty in Ugly' ! Aarti finally found a 'beautiful life ' after an earlier ulgliness in life! Thanks .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Incredible piece, Jhily! Aarti's past invited an invisible onion to my house. Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chikcyy

Incredible piece, Jhily! Aarti's past invited an invisible onion to my house. Loved it!


😆 I loved it..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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made me giggle too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS. I loved the way Yash was able to get her to open up to him so he can understand her reasoning for her stance. Loved that he proved her wrong and I was glad she chose to be the one to propose. Great job as always.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS. The title is very appropriate. Two sides of the coin, and through Yas's love and understanding she is able to embrace the beautiful life that awaits her after her ugly experience. Beautifully written. Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow new os thnk u dear 😊😛

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