IshRa OS: An old knot (June 28) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nafnaf

Nidoo that was an absolutely amazing OS!!!

You made it come alive - it felt as if I was in the room taking part!!!
From both points of views - terrific!!!

Both having the same thoughts!!
I love it when Ishita thinks about his one-liners and how the best ones were kept for her only!!! which she loved

The way he admitted his neck was hurting because he fell asleep looking at her!!! So she feels that he still loves her a little!!

When she caressed his beard and forehead thinking the he is asleep but he was not and now he also thinks that she loves him a little!!!

But both think that not enough to build a life on!!😭

I love it when Adi comes in and asks her to massage his head and their conversation - Raman watching all this not believing that this was the same person who used to hate her and now he is the reflection of her upbringing!!!

And then Ruhi who has been watching Ishita and Adi also eventually comes in when Adi invites her in and sits next to Adi and they start a pillow fight which results in both of them hugging Ishita to protect them from each other and Pihu joins in as well. Raman then captures this moment so that he has something to look at when this fantasy is over and Ishita leaves!!!
I wish he had joined them but Ishra's look for each other conveyed a lot but neither willing to voice it!!

Fantastic OS - I loved it - more like this please - more happiness as Ishra have endured enough sadness please!!!🤗❤️

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!


The idea was to bring forth a happy family moment, that is usually a routine occurrence in normal households, but for them, even routine is special because they haven't been together as they should have been 😊

Thank you so much Nafisha 🤗 Your comments are always so detailed and so encouraging. Please keep sharing them on each fic 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Nidoo.. I m speechless.. no words to describe how much I loved this OS.. silent tears.. after long time I shared tears while reading OS.. very very long time.. 😆.. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_5

Nidoo.. I m speechless.. no words to describe how much I loved this OS.. silent tears.. after long time I shared tears while reading OS.. very very long time.. 😆.. thanks for pm.


The best thing for a writer is to invoke emotions in the reader. So in a way, I'm glad you cried 😆
Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: QueSeraSera

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Nids this was so beautifully written and woven into the timeline of the show. I loved how you wrote this little slice of life scene here - such a casual scene and yet so high on emotions. A mother and her children having a normal moment in the middle of their disjointed life which suddenly bursts to vibrancy and is filled with colors and laughter and beauty the moment the siblings behave the way they are supposed to as per their age, as siblings should - the father watching from afar the snapshot of a picture perfect life as a part of the scene and yet not interferring between the mother and the children, not because he is afraid to sully the moment or anything but because he gets to cherish it as a witness which in itself is a thing of beauty and joy to him - to watch all his children happy and in the arms of their mother, the woman who is the love of his life, the woman who made his house a home again and then their eyes meet and it is in this unspoken conversation their eyes communicate how this is everything they had wanted and should have had always and is nothing that they have or can even dare dream off for in the future as well.

Scarred by the past, scared of the future...unable to live in the present.

This was beautiful


@bold - You summed it up beautifully Aani 👏 👏

It hurts to see that such a seemingly normal moment would become so emotional for these 5 people because of the cards they have been dealt with. It is difficult as it is, and when the children latch on to the mother who's unable to be a mother, all that the father can do is just be a witness of such joy 😳

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Aani 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U r unbelievable Nidoo..
Seriously no words to praise this..👏
They r haunted by their past scars, scared of their future & couldn't enjoy their present..
How I wish this happens in this crap fest called YHM...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaa1202

U r unbelievable Nidoo..

Seriously no words to praise this..👏
They r haunted by their past scars, scared of their future & couldn't enjoy their present..
How I wish this happens in this crap fest called YHM...😳


Thank you so much Kaarthik 😳
Don't we all wish the same? 😭 You've been MIA for sometime, YHM get to you? 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just so beautiful brought tears to my eyes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Just so beautiful brought tears to my eyes


I'm glad you liked it so much... Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Fantastic

Thanks 4 The PM


Thank you so much 😳

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