Best Friends- Chapter 10updated page 8 final part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys this will be a short story maybe max 15 parts. A story happening in present times
Prologue
Prologue
Asha got out from the train and she waved to Aakash and walked with Priyanka while their another batchmate Rahul walked in opposite direction.
Asha looked at Priyanka and from the look Priya knew talks with Aakash has put her in a big dilemma
" What did he say" asked Priyanka
" It is not what he say Priya, it is what Neha will do and how are we suppose to tell Neha that she will have to choose"
" Choose, choose what " asked Priyanka startled
" Between her brother and her love " told Asha grimly and looked at Priya who was equally startled
" Neha cannot do that, you didn't tell him" Look on Asha's face told Priya in the 5 hr journey Asha had battled out with Aakash to see things from Neha's perspective
"What did Rahul say" asked Asha breaking the silence
" He talks about everything under the sun, except what ails him. I tried " told Priyanka
Their conversation was cut short by their respective fathers who had come to pick them . Asha and Priya waved each other promising to call as soon as they reached home. As Asha sat in the car Aakash's voice boomed " If me and Rahul part ways who will Neha choose" . She closed her eyes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !! One more story in line...
Super... 😛 😛
Will read and cmt abt it 😳
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Interesting prologue..
waiting for the story to continue..
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Hemaji this is short, nothing complex, 😆😆
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We are fighting for the no. 1 spot shruthi 🤣
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Where in Hall of Fame😆😆


haan 😆 i was first in the morning but you were first in the afternoon 😭 ye main kadaapi hone nahi dungi 🤣
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Yay another story from u. What was the inspiration for this? What made u write this all of a sudden? This isn't one of the 4 stories u had in mind from 12th na?
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Originally posted by: daydreamers


haan 😆 i was first in the morning but you were first in the afternoon 😭 ye main kadaapi hone nahi dungi 🤣


😆 if this means we get more stories lage raho😉
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Originally posted by: JRia

Yay another story from u. What was the inspiration for this? What made u write this all of a sudden? This isn't one of the 4 stories u had in mind from 12th na?


@bold to rank first 😛 😆


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Unres
Me likey 😆
I can't wait to see what suspense you are creating Shruthi 😉

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