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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
The last line was so expected.. neha sounds so irritated just like asha... waiting for the next part... I'm glad Rahul realises that no one is against him...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes Ria in some situations you need diplomacy. You cannot be outspoken
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Chapter 9- Teaching Diplomacy Aakash, Priya, Asha along with their extended gang member Mridul was assembled at Asha's place. " Now Aakash the ball is in your court. We have to handle it sensitively. For that you need to have diplomatic approach" told Priya " Exactly Priya. But we need to know what all are the real issues of Rahul so that he can prepare some diplomatic response for the face off." told Asha
" Asha there are 2 problems in major. First is that of Neha. From what Aakash told Rahul understood that Neha is uncomfortable with him. Just uncomfortable. Also this fellow gave the impression that Rahul is not giving enough time for him to spend with Neha. He is too possessive. Second he declared Rahul and Priya as a couple. He didn't tell Rahul has to be cautious in dealing with Priya so that no gossips are created. So the real intention of both his accusations has to come out " told Mridul
" Did you hear Aakash" told Neha. " You are going to write the responses you are planning. We are going to see it. Yes we know it might not go as per the script. But still till I don't see what you will talk I wont fix the date" told Neha
" Ok girls now don't create a scene. I will write and give everything in a day. Read "
Next day they again met and checked through Aakash's responses. Mridul and Priya made several corrections. Asha and Neha were standing by. They felt Mridul and Priya are the best to do task. Finally they gave the corrected sheet to Aakash.
Neha was not even satisfied by it. She made Aakash speak those things so that the right emotions will go out. After making Aakash rehearse his lines for 2 more days, Neha called and fixed the date of their face off that Friday
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally things are coming to the high point... will Rahul misunderstand aakash? Or will they turn out to be stronger than before...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Chapter 8:
I really like this 😳
Rahul accepted Neha's request. i can't wait to see how the talk will happen 😉

Chapter 9:
They taught him diplomacy 🤣
Aakash probably should learn it 😉 It will help with future as well.
Making him rehearse and all is too funny 😆😆

But now we have reached the point which would decide whether the friendship will be remade or broken!
Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Shrutha what will u do when someone has messed up a single convo so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Shrutha what will u do when someone has messed up a single convo so much

I get why you did it. But the entire scenario is a little too familiar to me 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10-The Meeting
They had choosen the open auditorium at the back of the college for the meeting of Aakash and Rahul. It was an abandoned auditorium and rarely people came by that side
When Rahul and Aakash came they were not looking at each other. The 3 girls looked at each other tensed. They were not sure how it was going to go
Rahul told Neha told him Aakash wanted to clarify something hence he had come for the meeting.
Yes Rahul. Told Aakash see I wanted to tell you that you should not be pampering Neha too much, she is a grown up girl and she needs
Before he could complete Rahul cut in " Aakash so you will pamper her, you think she likes your pampering only. You can take her for lunch. You can buy gifts the way you want but when I do it ..
" Listen Rahul my relation with Neha and your relation with Neha are different. So there will be difference in the way we both deal with her. You cant compare your pampering..
Aakash yes whatever you do is right but whatever I do it has problems. Neha has problems. Priya will get into problems
Soon the boys lost their cool and got into heated arguments. Asha tried to intervene in between. But there was no respite to their fight. They accused each other like mad. Rahul told Aakash wanted Neha for himself and Aakash told the way he was behaving with Priya the whole college is gossiping on their affair.
Rahul accused Aakash of meddling into other's affairs unnecessarily and Aakash gave equally back telling Rahul was too possessive about relations.
The girls looked on as their script was going haywire and the fight was going from bad to worse to ugly.
Finally Rahul caught Aakash by collar and Aakash caught hold of Rahul's shirt.
" Enough " hearing a shout and exaseperated cry Aakash and Rahul looked startled towards the direction of sound. It was Neha who was looking angry and distraught.
Guys cut me into 2 pieces. You keep one piece Rahul and you keep one piece Aakash. Then be happy that you got your piece of bone. " She broke down crying
" You both don't deserve Neha " shouted Asha. You will fight for knowing who gets the maximum share of her time. Guys Neha is not a material or property which you guys can use the way you want. She is a human. What do you want. A zombie Neha or laughing, joking ,playful full of life Neha. Decide what do you want and then fight. "
" Rahul realize that if there is some gossiping around us it is more bad for me than you, try to understand if there is any truth in what Aakash tells. Aakash don't shout always, don't justify always. Please see the fault lines in yourself before shouting at others" told Priya.
Asha caught Priya's hand. " Come Priya let us go. Let these guys cut Neha as that is what they want. They wont listen. Priya looked at her startled and she winked
" Yes Asha after all their ego is more important, who will win is more important to them than Neha " told Priya.
They started to walk from the auditorium. Neha got up " Girls where are you going. I am also coming with you. If they want to fight, let them fight. If they don't understand their position in my life and just want to prove a point, it is better I leave both of them"
Rahul and Aakash were desperate now as the 3 girls started walking. They ran and stood in front of them
" Listen" they told together. " We will solve this issue. We promise we will solve this. But please, please don't go. Give us some time . We need all 3 of u. We will sort this out" both Rahul and Aakash were speaking in unison now.
" Then sort it out first and when you are finished come to the juice shop. We will be waiting there" told Priya smiling
Rahul and Aakash also smiled. When they turned to discuss it felt like there was nothing to discuss. They knew they needed Neha. They knew they needed both their friends Asha and Priya. It was simply impossible without them.
Aakash put his arm over Rahul's shoulders " Come Rahul, I guess we both know we are fault. Let us not discuss much"
" Yes Aakash let us go to juice shop. Also we need to plan. Next week is mine and Asha's b'days and we need to give joint treat to our batch"
" Exactly that is what even I was thinking of" told Neha as the 5 friends walked together towards the juice shop
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
This is so sweet ⭐️
The reunion that was to happen happened.
The five friends are friends again.
Men and their ego 😆😆
So Neha was their deciding factor, as I guessed. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Thanks Srutha. Yes Neha is the deciding factor. Also this story was written in 2 hrs for a competition with the theme given just 30 mins before.

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