Best Friends- Chapter 10updated page 8 final part - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the 2nd part but it is too short to even register. Please provide an extension soon dear. What is it with Rahul and why did he plunk in exams?
please don't kill the cat. be merciful and provide the next part real soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next part you will get Rahul's problem Jaya. It is nothing complex as I said in the beginning. It is a silly thing, but the story is about how such silly, small small things when not communicated the right point create MU and then becomes a big issue
This story does not have any complex issue like Seven Vows 😃. It is very simple
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loving this new part... The realisation of Aakash has happened and soon even others will follow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this.
Update soon 😃
I want to know what Rahul's problem is. Soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3- The Brother Love and Friendly Love
Rahul looked through the photos in his mobile. There were many photos of him and Neha. So many selfies. But it has been close to 3 or 4 months since he has taken any photos with her. He simply couldn't understand why Neha will feel uncomfortable with him. Obviously the problem was Aakash, he wants more time with her so he wants to alienate Neha from him. So he and Asha would have conspired to make Neha feel he is doing to much for her.
Otherwise what was wrong with what he was doing. Neha was his sister. What is the problem everyday evening he took her to juice shop or the eatery near college. What is the problem if every week he gave her gifts in the form of cards and soft toys. What is the problem if he daily send her poetries entirely dedicated to her. Why wouldn't a sister feel happy being pampered like this. Afterall his Reshma had loved all this. Then why wont Neha. Aakash was simply jealous
And if that is not enough Aakash had to poke his head into his and Priya's relation. He is telling the college is talking that they are gf-bf. Really if he sits near Priya during tour, if he dedicates a song for her, talks to her mostly during train journeys does that becomes love. If that is the case Aakash should be two timing. He roams with Neha in the college and in the train he is more or less always with Asha.
The problem with Aakash is his ego. His superiority complex. Else would he have told it during exams. He intentionally wanted to undermine. Show him as a poor performer in academics also. Let Neha roam with Aakash. She will understand what kind of a jerk Aakash is. Then he will see how much her brother cares for her. She will understand how much Asha have brainwashed her towards Aakash.
He had seen her pushing away Asha and Aakash to a different boat when they were in Hoganaikal for their 3rd year tour. It is just the beginning. She will move away from them if he stays aloof. He moved to bed and pulled the blanket
Priyanka came out of the bathroom. She had the night bath absent mindedly. If only she had not listened to Rahul's side of story alone and had decided to talk to Asha or Neha early. She had believed Aakash was spreading gossips, till during one of their journeys Asha explained to her Aakash or Asha or Neha were not spreading gossips. They were just trying to protect her and Rahul from gossips, which was going around in college. They said Rahul's behavior with her is making people talk all sort of non sense and they had taken great pains during 3rd year to ensure it doesn't come out openly. She had to admit also. Asha had many times purposefully shared seat with Rahul. She had chided Rahul wont he dedicate a song to her. Neha had dragged away Rahul during boat ride leaving Priyanka with Asha. They had covered up. And now to ensure Rahul opens up to them, especially to Aakash was her task. And she found it very hard. Because Rahul was too sensitive and any topic that touches him emotionally his eyes will get teary. Like Asha even she didn't know how to talk to sensitive guys. Anyways tomorrow she and Asha will plan something. She switched on the fan and dried her hair
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Posted: 9 years ago
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God this guy Rahul is too possessive or we can call obsessive about his brotherly love for Neha. Really it will be an huge task on hand for both Asha & Priya to make him understand the reality. Because he feels he has all the right on his sister, he feels insecure that Akash will create distance between him and his sister, so he is trying hard to create misunderstanding between Ashok & Neha. But seriously he need counseling. Hope his friends help him out in getting him realize his mistake and bring him and Ashok together.

Seems Neha is more inclined towards Rahul as he has lost his own sister and she doesn't want him to feel that void again and so she is finding it difficult to balancer the scale between her love for brother and partner.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rahul is like saas of serials.. waiting for the next part to know the plan of asha and priyanka to solve the problem of dealing with an over sensitive brother
Edited by JRia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Ria please don't compare Rahul to a saas of TV soap. He is not that bad. 😆😆
@jaya yes the problem is possessiveness and an inability to understand other's POV. In nutshell it is not a big deal. But if you ignore it, it will blow up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Typical possessiveness huh?
I like this 😉
I can't wait to see how things are going to change for all of them 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4- Priya- Asha Chat Asha and Priya were at Ovens their favourite pastry shop. After giving orders Asha turned to Priya
" Priya I thought the whole night. There is only way this issue can be solved. Open confrontation between Rahul and Aakash with 3 of us as witnesses" told Asha
" Yes Asha even I felt that way. There is no point playing this hide and seek. Now Aakash had known from Mridul what Rahul felt about his frank talk, you know from Aakash, I hear half from Rahul, half from you. Neha less said the better. But the point is how will we make them agree for this"
" Aakash you will leave it to me. It doesn't matter what I have to do. Request, plea, shout or ask him to get lost I will make him agree. Rahul you have to "
As they were talking Asha's phone rang. It was Aakash. She took " Think of the devil and Aakash even if someone put something on your head you are gonna live 100 years. We were just discussing you "
" I know you will be discussing me only. See did you think about my question. What will Neha do"
" Aakash keep your phone or the next words you hear you will keep it. What Neha will do or wont do we have 5 hrs to discuss tomorrow in the train. For the time being give me and Priya some peace to close this thing" she cut the phone and turned to Priya
" Asha I knew Rahul would be my responsibility. I had expected it. That's why I asked you to go with Aakash in evening train so that I can talk to Rahul, try to make him see Neha's position"
" But Priya be careful. We don't want you also in his antagonist list. As at this point I know both me and Aakash are in his black book"
" Asha I have another suggestion. Next week it is your's and Rahul's b'day right. You both celebrated it together last year. In the train I will try to chalk out the plan for celebrating the b'day together. Chances are that he might deny. If he denies then I can question. And use that opening to get through him"
" Excellent idea Priya. If he agrees we will corner him for the b'day celebrations. We will try to get Sudha , Mridul and Preeti's help also. We will make him feel Neha's pain torn between him and Aakash during the celebration"
" Superb Asha. So either way we get Rahul to talk to Aakash"
The girls felt confident they can solve the issue. Sudha, Preeti and Mridul were their extended gang who had information on this cold war. Rahul's and Asha's b'day were just 2 day apart, but since their friend group was more or less same they gave a grand treat together to the entire gang.
This time it was going to be special. They paid the bill, said good bye, both were feeling upbeat

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