SwaSan OS: Repayment - Page 5

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shru,

First things first - I am extremely sorry for the delay in unres'ing. I do not even have an excuse, so will not even try giving one. Please forgive me! (There is no need for sorries! Its completely OK xoxox)

I so loved this tale of befitting revenge, if I may call that.

Sanskaar and Ragini are indeed Master and acolyte and poor spectator, Lakshya. He has a right to be proud of them now, though I slightly object to the use of word 'evil gleam', it should be a mischievous sparkle or an impish glint - any plan involving the downfall of deadwood is absolutely angelic and heavenly.😈 (Impish glint it is then😈😆)

Oh yes, Sahil is so going to regret meeting Kissan.😃

Sanskaar truly had his steely resolve tested when he had to watch that creepy deadwood make eyes at Swara. But then if he stepped in how would deadwood play hero. He should have continued to play dead, but then some people never learn, he wanted to appear smart but turned to be only a smartass - a rather smarting one after the goons finished with him. And in perfect sync , Swara is called home to Ragini, who is perfecting her look of being in pain. (I really want Sanskaar to play it smart with that *beep beep*. Destroy him in one swell swoop! Idiots like him are predictable to the core & hence fooling him shouldnt be so difficult)

I so loved the angry Sanskaar, the brazen confidence he exudes when he informs deadwood that the dirty game he tried to play was completely over. And the kick to the nuts - cherry on the cake (oops - sorry for the imagery) (😆😆😆)

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: SmartSal

Omg! Awesome, Shru! SanRag's plan was brilliant! It's so like Ragini to take advantage of predictibility, coz that's how she did practically everything in her baddie days. The part regarding Swara abondoning MH (mental hospital) for Rago-🤣. She must have gotten an actual stomach ache , along with Sanskaar, from laughing when they planned this.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Wohooo! Just pure wow. This one has so many feels that pulls me deeper and deeper in to it. Firstly Mr. Wood tasted his own medicine, and this time got beaten black and blue for real! (That is my dream ever since he hit Sunny with that rod! I want Sunny to pound him to a pulp...preferably in front of his mom & Swara)

The next is Ragini and Sanskar planning. And Lakshya wondering was this how these two planned the last time? But he is right, when these two get together there is that can stop them. (SanGini as co conspirators were mind blowing😳 Bahot saare villains aaye aur gaye, but no one can reach their level of perfection!)

And for Swara, Ragini comes before Sahil in any context. And Ragini would make sure she doesn't return to check if Kissan actually took him to the hospital or not. (Yes yes Ragz is after all Swara's fehla fyaar 🤣 Sunny ka number mushkil se ata hai, sahil ka toh no chance 🤣 And yeah Ragz can be relied upon to keep Swara super busy😆)

But the best part...actually there are two. First one is Kissan hiding behind Swara...my imagination made a vivid image of this scene. And it was...🤣 It really made my day. ( I can so imagine Kisan doing a huge drama of being scared of goons & hiding behind her 🤣 I also chuckled while writing the 'be a man" dialogue😆)

Then the next was Sanskar and Sahil confrontation at the end. The vibes of that conversation are awesome. Indeed I'm sure he won't last the meeting...Sanskar is deadly in his devil mode. (How I wish we get that deadly devil back in this track)

All in all, this was a wonderful treat after a tiresome day, if the track would be anything like this, I'm sure the TRP would blast off the ceilings. (Thank you so much Saku 🤗)

Love,

Sakura

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

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Shit shit shit buddy!! I just forgot about this one!! Exams you know!🤢 Apologies, but I'll unres NOW!! (There is no need to aplologize. Its completely OK 🤗)
This has to be one of my dream OS Lanny!😃 Sanskaar in full too action, ekdum dho-ing Sahil would be such a treat to my eye-sore!! Ahhh (Seriously yaar! I want an action sequence between Sanskaar & Sahil...though better choreographed that the SanLak one plz😆)

Afterall Sanskaar Maheshwari ke kayi rang hain, and he can fight all odds so who the mouse, is this Sahil! And imagining VK here, the way he would kick and punch Anuj, and that Hippo, would be lying lazily...hahaha!! You made my day better with this imagination! (shh shh shh Sahil yaar. he kicked Sahil😛😆)

Swara cares the least about Sahil!! For the first time, I like Behna Pyaar!! SwaraGini is better than Hippoji and Kunwari Kanya!😆 Just loved the OS Lanny, and come up with another one, pretty soon! (Yes Ragz ke samne Swara ko kabhi kuch dikha hai, ye kal ka aya chokra kaha dikhne wala tha 🤣 Even Sunny knows that now isilie Ragz is the bait😆)
Sorry for the delays
Sakshi!

P.S. You'd asked me how my hand is right? Well, yeah it's pretty good now!! I'm actually a hospital...so I get injured now and then!😆 Thanks for asking! (take care dear!)

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res Lanny 😊

Will un res on both your OS's tomorrow. 🤗

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Hey Lanny 🤗🤗

This one was so refreshingly fun, and such a hilarious take on how Kissan/ Sanskaar could deal with that block of deadwood!

Loved the wary memories Lakshya had of the past, when his smart cousin and smart wife (then friend) had allied with each other. 😆 How he slightly shuddered at the memory, but now was so proud of their planning capabilities. 😆 I feel Lakshya has become much more mature, and less impulsive and fickle than he used to be. (Laksh has definitely changed for the better) But innately he is rather a simple bloke, thinking out battle plans and strategic takeouts aren't his forte--not at all!! He would rather be a person who carries out plans devised by his brilliant cousin and smart wife. 😆 (Ya, totally! A follower, not a leader. Lets leave that to the masters😉)

Loved the description of Sanskaar & Ragini as master and acolyte! And Ragini calling Sanskaar "Jeeju" was super cute. 😊 I really like the Sanskaar---Ragini friendship, and would like to see this bonding in future. This Jeeju--Saali/ Jeth--Devrani/Dosti bond should really rock! I know this sounds rude perhaps, but these two have the brains out of the 4 main leads. 😆 😉 (nothing rude about it Viji. Fact is fact 😛 Ye baat toh main episode 1 se bol rahi hoon😆)

If only the CVs had shown a genuine, well thought out redemption track for Ragini, also addressing those horrendous fake molestation allegations she leveled against Sunny. Now this is one more opportunity they have. Do you think they'll make use of it? (no they wont! Because any & every new entry is more important than the leads & their character development)

So Kissan goes to the park with full swag. And what a super plan that was. Hiring goons to chase him, acting as if they would beat him to pulp any minute. Poor Kissan takes refuge behind sherni Swara. 😆 🤣 And Sahil, pretending to Lord Greystoke (AKA Tarzan of the Apes! 😛 😆) (Sahil is like Ursula's bf from George of the Jungle😛 irritating, annoying, foolish...and everything else)jumps in to beat the goons up!! Man, I am so thrilled they beat him to a pulp...so the kneecaps were broken huh? 😈

Swara's reactions at receiving the call from home (pehle pyaar ka bulawa tha wo 🤣)---Ragini tripped down the stairs!! Stomach was hurting her, and she needed Swara to go with her to the hospital!! Pyar for behna trumps fraandship with Mr Wood anytime...and off runs Swara, after assuring Kissan that he was not to blame. Sigh...😳 Swara felt touched at his puppy dog expressions and cutely guilty pout huh?

Sahil recognized Sanskaar was Kisan huh? He could not have guessed it himself---where does that bloke have the brains...He must have probably seen Sunny putting on his getup or something? 😆 (Arey atm ONLY sahil has brains yaar! Didn't you see in today's episode how ONLY sahil could make out that an entire f**king orchestra is singing the song...so Kisan cannot be singing it. Baki even suro ki devi couldnt make it out 🤣 This show reaches new lows daily!)

Kissan kicking Sahil in the stomach and then further below...🤣 That's the principle of natural selection at work---defective genes should not be passed on. I hope Sunny/ Kissan has made Sahil incapable of ever fathering kids with any unfortunate dame. 😆 🤣

Sanskaar as the Devil behind the crisp Armani suits 👏👏 He certainly is devilishly handsome 😳 That phrase reminded me, somehow, of the film " The Devil wears Prada" 😆 So for Sunny, we could have "The Devil wears Armani" huh? 😉Or do we term him "The Knight in Shining Armani"? 😆😉 (I like "The Devil wears Armani" so much!!!😳)

So off goes Kissan, to discard that atrocious wig, and return home in his usual suave, dapper Sunny boy avatar. 😳 (Though I liked the Dhina Dhin Dha chorus, I must admit, I prefer Sunny Boy's BG. What do you say? 😆) (Yes Sunny's BG over a thousand other tunes!!!)

Lovely work yaar. Had a nice laugh with this one, and a lot of sadistic pleasure too! (Thanks xoxoxox)

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: BookWormV

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Heya Shruti!

When I read the title I thought it would be something along the lines of Swara getting her memories back and Sanskaar asking her to pay in a very, very *ahem* naughty manner. 😛 (Oh wow! That would be something nice as well ❤️)

But no issues AT ALL!! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading how Sanskaar has extracted his payment. I loved this whole OS so so much. If it was possible to not look mad, then I would be screaming at my screen shouting thoda aur maaro, thoda aur maaro! 😉😆

Thank you for bring a smile on my face. Loved the OS to the core.❤️ Wishing CVs take a hint soon. (The CVs I have zero hope from, hence have to make do with reading & writing such stuff😆)

Love,

V 😊

Originally posted by: bones123

pssst...are you writing the part that goes along with this...her getting her memory back :P