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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

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Dear Shru,

First things first - I am extremely sorry for the delay in unres'ing. I do not even have an excuse, so will not even try giving one. Please forgive me!

I so loved this tale of befitting revenge, if I may call that.

Sanskaar and Ragini are indeed Master and acolyte and poor spectator, Lakshya. He has a right to be proud of them now, though I slightly object to the use of word 'evil gleam', it should be a mischievous sparkle or an impish glint - any plan involving the downfall of deadwood is absolutely angelic and heavenly.😈

Oh yes, Sahil is so going to regret meeting Kissan.😃

Sanskaar truly had his steely resolve tested when he had to watch that creepy deadwood make eyes at Swara. But then if he stepped in how would deadwood play hero. He should have continued to play dead, but then some people never learn, he wanted to appear smart but turned to be only a smartass - a rather smarting one after the goons finished with him. And in perfect sync , Swara is called home to Ragini, who is perfecting her look of being in pain.

I so loved the angry Sanskaar, the brazen confidence he exudes when he informs deadwood that the dirty game he tried to play was completely over. And the kick to the nuts - cherry on the cake (oops - sorry for the imagery)

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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bones123

@bones123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hahahahhaha Shruti

Loveddd it !!!

First off the Lucky boy watching from the sidelines made me giggle...his wife and brother are definitely a formidable duo...and as always Swara and himself and now Sahil stand no chance...

That scum deserves this totally and more !! Your Kissanwa continues to remain super endearing but your Sanskar is haiii...Kaatil !!! I've missed this avatar of Sunny boy on th show...he needs to return to that...and soon...

Seashore needs to be reminded of his place and Sanskaar needs to be the one that does it...reading the new spoiler it's like omgaad will this just be return of Swara's Khooni and banshee days ? Seriously it's like they were inspired by hold the door only !! Please God when the reveal happens let her also giv the loser a slap !!

I hope you'll write another instalment with the final reveal and how she accepts what S/K means to her and what the psycho ends up as :P !! Maybe he'll be a good match with pareee

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Amazing os finally sahil got what he deserved...

How apt was sanskaar plan...loved the end part were you mentioned you have seen sanskaar the husband and not. ..etc...It was the perfect way to end the o's...

So happy to see the sharp guy back...

Loved it...

Raz

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hi Shruti dear,
So awesome OS!!👏 Loved Sanskar, Laksh and Ragini's plan.😉 Sanskar as Kissan. Haahaa!! So funny.😆 Loved Sanskar and Sahil face off.😉 Sahil ka toh popat ho gaya. Unn gundo ne toh usska band baja diya...!! My wish to beat that mental is fulfilled.😆 Loved this OS dear. And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Helee
e humar bhains ki pooch hai...🤣 ( res In kissanwa style)

unres first of all a huge thanks for hurting that good for nothing cockroach...he deserves each punch and many more kicks... 😡

laksh watching sanskar and ragini planning and ragini calling sanskar was brilliant...🤣

jahil ko banana tha hero bana wo bada sa zero as u said assholes like him r really predictable..swara telling kissan to be a man was hilarious...! but I loved the part when swara went away leaving sahil for ragini...poor fellow( not really) thik se victim bhi na ban paya.🤣

devil behind Armani suit I loved this one...! yes he won't be able to survive meeting him😉 and those kicks...aahahaa...whenever I see him I want to kick him right there...😈 it felt so good reading that...

I so want these things to take place in the show...awesome story buddy...( sorry don't know your name.😳)

Sanskaar & Ragini plotting together had been one of my favourite things in this show. They were just so brilliant And its high time she called him Jiju at least once right?😉😳

Ragini bulaaye aur Swara na jaaye aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta hai?😆 Usko toh jana hi tha😆 Ragini Swara ka fehla fyaar jo hai 🤣

I am Shruti & thanks for the lovely comment😳

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Apudeep
Hello Shruti 😊
Wonderful Story 😛
My wish to beat Sahil is fulfilled 😛
It's a dream come true for me 😳😆
Keep writing more, thanks 😃

Thanks Aparna

Ya I think it is everyone's dream to see Sanskaar beat the shit out of Sahil. I want a full blown action sequence between these two with Swara cheering for Sanskaar😆

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Kiara.25
Hey.
This is awesome. That jahil thing need this treatment. Huh!!! Wish i could see something like this in serial. A payback is much needed thing.

Thanks Kiara😳 Yep the man is asking for it😡

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
Shrutii this was fantastic!!🤗

I sooo loved the goons beating Sahil to pulp.😆 Serves him right !!
Poor Lucky caught between his biwi and bhai ki plotting. The plan was amazing though.

And kissanwa oh my gosh. His dialogues were so awesome.
And Swara asking him to man up🤣

My favorite was the last bit where our Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari referred to himself as the 'devil behind the armani' *sigh*
Indeed he is. I love the scheming plotting doer Sanskar so much more than the I'll just wait patiently for my wife to remember me Sanskar.

I love this os.
Made me so happy that Sahil got kicked in his 'ahem' bits. Lol😆

Thank you so much for the pm.
Love
Nandini

Thanks Nandini 🤗

I do miss that devilish Sanskaar as well! I am so tired of seeing him cry now I need the old Sanskaar back who would have said "door se Sahil, meri biwi se baat kar rahe ho!"

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sia08
mindblowing😆
kissan and sanskar rock sahil in shocks

Thanks Sia😳

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: bones123
Hahahahhaha Shruti
Loveddd it !!!

First off the Lucky boy watching from the sidelines made me giggle...his wife and brother are definitely a formidable duo...and as always Swara and himself and now Sahil stand no chance...

That scum deserves this totally and more !! Your Kissanwa continues to remain super endearing but your Sanskar is haiii...Kaatil !!! I've missed this avatar of Sunny boy on th show...he needs to return to that...and soon...

Seashore needs to be reminded of his place and Sanskaar needs to be the one that does it...reading the new spoiler it's like omgaad will this just be return of Swara's Khooni and banshee days ? Seriously it's like they were inspired by hold the door only !! Please God when the reveal happens let her also giv the loser a slap !!

I hope you'll write another instalment with the final reveal and how she accepts what S/K means to her and what the psycho ends up as :P !! Maybe he'll be a good match with pareee

I miss the dashing devilish avtaar of Sanskaar too! The one who would have said "door se Sahil, meri biwi se baat kar rahe ho" with that kaatilana smirk of his

Hold the door 🤣

I don't think Kisan being Sanskaar will be revealed so early. They have put in a lot of effort behind Varun 🤔 look😆 Kuch din to rahega ye look! I think after Pari gets to know of Ragini's lie & Sahil gets to know of Kisan's lie the two losers will join hands against the sisters😊 I so want to see this track end with Adarsh divorcing Pari. Iss show mein kisi ko toh apni galti ki saza mile😡

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