SwaSan OS: Repayment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!!😃

Unres-

Shit shit shit buddy!! I just forgot about this one!! Exams you know!🤢 Apologies, but I'll unres NOW!!
This has to be one of my dream OS Lanny!😃 Sanskaar in full too action, ekdum dho-ing Sahil would be such a treat to my eye-sore!! Ahhh

Afterall Sanskaar Maheshwari ke kayi rang hain, and he can fight all odds so who the mouse, is this Sahil! And imagining VK here, the way he would kick and punch Anuj, and that Hippo, would be lying lazily...hahaha!! You made my day better with this imagination!

Swara cares the least about Sahil!! For the first time, I like Behna Pyaar!! SwaraGini is better than Hippoji and Kunwari Kanya!😆 Just loved the OS Lanny, and come up with another one, pretty soon!
Sorry for the delays
Sakshi!

P.S. You'd asked me how my hand is right? Well, yeah it's pretty good now!! I'm actually a hospital...so I get injured now and then!😆 Thanks for asking!
Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Shruthi ..Res ... Will Unres soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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e humar bhains ki pooch hai...🤣 ( res In kissanwa style)

unres first of all a huge thanks for hurting that good for nothing cockroach...he deserves each punch and many more kicks... 😡

laksh watching sanskar and ragini planning and ragini calling sanskar was brilliant...🤣

jahil ko banana tha hero bana wo bada sa zero as u said assholes like him r really predictable..swara telling kissan to be a man was hilarious...! but I loved the part when swara went away leaving sahil for ragini...poor fellow( not really) thik se victim bhi na ban paya.🤣

devil behind Armani suit I loved this one...! yes he won't be able to survive meeting him😉 and those kicks...aahahaa...whenever I see him I want to kick him right there...😈 it felt so good reading that...

I so want these things to take place in the show...awesome story buddy...( sorry don't know your name.😳)
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Shruti 😊
Wonderful Story 😛
My wish to beat Sahil is fulfilled 😛
It's a dream come true for me 😳😆
Keep writing more, thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey.
This is awesome. That jahil thing need this treatment. Huh!!! Wish i could see something like this in serial. A payback is much needed thing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shrutii this was fantastic!!🤗
I sooo loved the goons beating Sahil to pulp.😆 Serves him right !!
Poor Lucky caught between his biwi and bhai ki plotting. The plan was amazing though.

And kissanwa oh my gosh. His dialogues were so awesome.
And Swara asking him to man up🤣

My favorite was the last bit where our Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari referred to himself as the 'devil behind the armani' *sigh*
Indeed he is. I love the scheming plotting doer Sanskar so much more than the I'll just wait patiently for my wife to remember me Sanskar.

I love this os.
Made me so happy that Sahil got kicked in his 'ahem' bits. Lol😆

Thank you so much for the pm.
Love
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res Lanny 😊
Will un res on both your OS's tomorrow. 🤗

Un Res

Hey Lanny 🤗🤗

This one was so refreshingly fun, and such a hilarious take on how Kissan/ Sanskaar could deal with that block of deadwood!

Loved the wary memories Lakshya had of the past, when his smart cousin and smart wife (then friend) had allied with each other. 😆 How he slightly shuddered at the memory, but now was so proud of their planning capabilities. 😆 I feel Lakshya has become much more mature, and less impulsive and fickle than he used to be. But innately he is rather a simple bloke, thinking out battle plans and strategic takeouts aren't his forte--not at all!! He would rather be a person who carries out plans devised by his brilliant cousin and smart wife. 😆

Loved the description of Sanskaar & Ragini as master and acolyte! And Ragini calling Sanskaar "Jeeju" was super cute. 😊 I really like the Sanskaar---Ragini friendship, and would like to see this bonding in future. This Jeeju--Saali/ Jeth--Devrani/Dosti bond should really rock! I know this sounds rude perhaps, but these two have the brains out of the 4 main leads. 😆 😉

If only the CVs had shown a genuine, well thought out redemption track for Ragini, also addressing those horrendous fake molestation allegations she leveled against Sunny. Now this is one more opportunity they have. Do you think they'll make use of it?

So Kissan goes to the park with full swag. And what a super plan that was. Hiring goons to chase him, acting as if they would beat him to pulp any minute. Poor Kissan takes refuge behind sherni Swara. 😆 🤣 And Sahil, pretending to Lord Greystoke (AKA Tarzan of the Apes! 😛 😆) jumps in to beat the goons up!! Man, I am so thrilled they beat him to a pulp...so the kneecaps were broken huh? 😈

Swara's reactions at receiving the call from home---Ragini tripped down the stairs!! Stomach was hurting her, and she needed Swara to go with her to the hospital!! Pyar for behna trumps fraandship with Mr Wood anytime...and off runs Swara, after assuring Kissan that he was not to blame. Sigh...😳 Swara felt touched at his puppy dog expressions and cutely guilty pout huh?

Sahil recognized Sanskaar was Kisan huh? He could not have guessed it himself---where does that bloke have the brains...He must have probably seen Sunny putting on his getup or something? 😆

Kissan kicking Sahil in the stomach and then further below...🤣 That's the principle of natural selection at work---defective genes should not be passed on. I hope Sunny/ Kissan has made Sahil incapable of ever fathering kids with any unfortunate dame. 😆 🤣

Sanskaar as the Devil behind the crisp Armani suits 👏👏 He certainly is devilishly handsome 😳 That phrase reminded me, somehow, of the film " The Devil wears Prada" 😆 So for Sunny, we could have "The Devil wears Armani" huh? 😉Or do we term him "The Knight in Shining Armani"? 😆😉

So off goes Kissan, to discard that atrocious wig, and return home in his usual suave, dapper Sunny boy avatar. 😳 (Though I liked the Dhina Dhin Dha chorus, I must admit, I prefer Sunny Boy's BG. What do you say? 😆)

Lovely work yaar. Had a nice laugh with this one, and a lot of sadistic pleasure too!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mindblowing😆
kissan and sanskar rock sahil in shocks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res 😊
Unres:

Heya Shruti!

When I read the title I thought it would be something along the lines of Swara getting her memories back and Sanskaar asking her to pay in a very, very *ahem* naughty manner. 😛

But no issues AT ALL!! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading how Sanskaar has extracted his payment. I loved this whole OS so so much. If it was possible to not look mad, then I would be screaming at my screen shouting thoda aur maaro, thoda aur maaro! 😉😆

Thank you for bring a smile on my face. Loved the OS to the core.❤️ Wishing CVs take a hint soon.

Love,
V 😊
Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago

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