new os wrong call.... right girl last part updated

hey guys thinking to write an os based on one of the telugu movies with little changes , hope you like it here is the prologue tell me if you like i will update the story by tomorrow.

prologue

maan saw a girl in one of his friend's wedding and lost his heart to her and later got her number to know her more and started talking to her and became very close and emotionally connected towards her, what happens when the girl he saw and the girl he talks to are different?

hope you guys like it, dont know if there is any story with this concept if it is there do let me know.

Part 1 - page 5

Part 2- page 9

Part 3 - page 14

Part 4 - page 18

hi poojitha

Interesting ...can't wait to see which girl is geet the girl on phone or girl which he saw so update soon

Hey Pooja ...
Liked the concept ...
Write soon ...
I guess the girl with whom Maan talks on phone is geet. ... Am I right ??
Thanks for the pm

Interesting OS so it seems maan is in love but he dosent know there r two girls who might look the same but r so diff from eachother update soon

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Interesting OS so it seems maan is in love but he dosent know there r two girls who might look the same but r so diff from eachother update soon

interesting concept.I liked movie based ffs very much.which movie is this?Is it an OS?Means oly one part?Oh no...
plz give a title to this story

guys how's the title wrong call...Right girl

Congrats on the OS! thanks 4 da pm! Fab concept! Please continue! will b waiting 4 update

Interesting prologue
Eagerly waiting to read it