new os wrong call.... right girl last part updated

poojitha96

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey guys thinking to write an os based on one of the telugu movies with little changes , hope you like it here is the prologue tell me if you like i will update the story by tomorrow.

prologue

maan saw a girl in one of his friend's wedding and lost his heart to her and later got her number to know her more and started talking to her and became very close and emotionally connected towards her, what happens when the girl he saw and the girl he talks to are different?

hope you guys like it, dont know if there is any story with this concept if it is there do let me know.

Part 1 - page 5

Part 2- page 9

Part 3 - page 14

Part 4 - page 18

Edited by poojitha96 - 9 years ago

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi poojitha

its interesting plot ...

waiting for the updates ...

thanks

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Akku

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting ...can't wait to see which girl is geet the girl on phone or girl which he saw so update soon

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Pooja ...
Liked the concept ...
Write soon ...
I guess the girl with whom Maan talks on phone is geet. ... Am I right ??
Thanks for the pm

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting OS so it seems maan is in love but he dosent know there r two girls who might look the same but r so diff from eachother update soon

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poojitha96

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Interesting OS so it seems maan is in love but he dosent know there r two girls who might look the same but r so diff from eachother update soon

no yar actually he got the number of the wrong girl