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Posted: 9 years ago
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Quite an intriguing and interesting prologue 👏👏👏. Waiting for the story to unfold 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks 4 da note! will b waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch

Maan:

The only son of khuraana's, son of a big industrialist , but want to prove himself by starting his own business , so currently working under kapoor's . very fun loving and sweet person but can go to any extent to get what he wants.

Geet:

very bubbly and lively girl. princess of her dad. she is the only hire of handa's but never like to say that loud and believes in simplicity.

yash:

one of the friends of maan working with him and always depends on maan to how to patav girls .

sam:

A designer by profession and owns a boutique.

adi:

maan's friend and works with him.

pinky:

adi's wife.

It's adi's wedding and everyone of his friends are present even yash and maan.

friends: maan come-on yar everyone in the batch are settled even that yash has some one in him life, except you who didn't even like a single girl till now.

m: come-on yar because all of you are settled i can't get a girl for myself for that reason right? i want a girl who can capture my attention in the first look itself, she should me all gorgeous and should have the charm to capture MSK's attention.

while everyone expected this kind of answer from maan and didn't stress much and everyone went to have their dinner before the reception party starts and maan got a call and went a side to take the call their he saw a girl with her friends whom he find very attractive and took her pic without any one's notice and thought to ask adi and pinky about her.

maan wishes adi and pinky on the stage and then shows the pic to them.

p: maan bhai she is not my friend but she came with one of my friends Pari, i will ask her about the girl's details.

m: tq so much pinky.

2 days later

pinky calls adi who is in the office to gi ve the details about the girl maan asked about.

p: hello adi, the name of the girl is Sam Sameera

and uska contact no hai 9126123456

a: kya, pinky there is a little disturbance , i think signal problem its 9126126126 right (pinky thinks its because of signal prob he repeated last no's)

p: ha, give it to maan bhai fast, he will be so happy.

on the other side of the city

A girl with her friends go to gym by her car and while getting down the car her phone slips from the bag and falls in the car.

they all after their workouts go to a nearby cafe to have their coffee's.

girl: meera what happend to your boyfriend.

meera: dont even ask yar geet he ditched me.

other girl: what? your's is a long relation right?

g:

girls relation long ho ya short term it depends upon how the couple are?

meera: waise geet what are the qualities you expect in your partner?

g: qualities? hmm... i never gave a thought but i do have a fantasy.

sonali : and what is it?

g: i want a partner who loves me for what i am. He should love me not knowing any of my details including my name and how i look, just should love me for what actually geet is not geet handa.

meera: not possible in todays world yar. kaha milega yesa ladka jo tume bina dheke aur naam bhi na jane pyar kare.

g: that is what i told meer, it's just a fantasy and nothing else.

priya : what if you get someone like that.

g: then i dont want to miss him.

and the girls went to geet's car and started towards their homes.

meera: geet your phone, here missed in your car yar.

g: oh thank god, i thought i lost it.

meera: there's a missed call from an unknown number geet.

g: unknown number? call back karo meer.

meera calls and a guy lifts the phone ( i think you know who's it)

guy: hello.

g: hello who's this?

guy: what? you dont know me? come-on yar try and guess whom you are talking to.

g: what kind of non sense in this?

guy: not non- sense, k i will give you a clue i am one of your batch mates and now its your turn to find me who i am? will give you 24 hrs time try to identify me. bye.

geet and her friends were confused with this strange call and full night without sleeping they called all there friends and batchmates.

m: omg geet we dont even know how the entire night went, whoever it is because of him we get in contact with our friends and got a chance to cherish all the beautiful memories yar, what a lovely night we would never forget in our life. right?

g: (still lost) ya

sonali : but still we couldnt find who he is geet.

g: because he is not our batch mate of friend. he is a complete stranger.

priya: what? geet call him immediately.

g: no girls just wait he will call himself.

meanwhile

yash: maan plz help me yar i am deeply in love with a girl.

m: what should i do.

y: help me to propose her.

m: hmm k ask her to join you for dinner or coffee and i will tell you what to talk.

y: tq so much yar, and what happened to your photo girl.

m: i talked to her yesterday

y: k at least now show the girl.

m: nope i will directly introduce her one day.

what maan don't know is that he was helping his friend with none other than sam.

after some time geet get's the call

meera: geet, its him.

guy: hello.

g: you are not our classmate .

guy: thought you would guess it yesterday itself and moreover if you would ask me your name i would easily got caught.

g: what? you not even know my name?

guy: how would i know if i dont know you.

g: you dont know me ? then why did you call me.

guy: to know you.

geet turned to her friends and

g: tell me whose prank is this?

guy: hello?

g: wait i am not talking to you but my friends. to know who made you to call me.

guy: the the answer is nobody.

g: no way without any one's help i will not get such calls.

sonali: i doubt this call set up is done by you yourself

g: what the hell sonali.

s: see her intellegence girls, if she accuses us then no one will doubt her,

otherwise how can she get her fantasy boyfriend who just love's her without knowing her seeing her or not even knowing her name and just love's her truely for what she is.

(all this is heard by the caller other side who had a smirk)

g: why are even raising that topic now and more over why would i play such pranks on myself with strangers .

meera: that means the caller is a real stranger?

g: hello, so you really dont know my name?

guy: i heard your entire discussion . i really dont know you and it is just yesterday that we both talked. if i called suddenly and asked you to talk to me would you talk?

meera: noways.

guy: that is why i talked like that and made you remember all you sweet memories so that i can gain some impression. and all this trick is just to gain your attention now i will give you my entire bio-data

name: maan and working in kapoor's company as

meera: stop stop dont even reveal any other single detail of yours.

sonali: what?

meera turning towards geet: baby its a miracle, you found a man who dont know you.

meera: maan are you married?

m: nope.

meera: you heard everything right? and dont know our friend right ?

you never saw her right? if yes then let's forget it here.

m: nope i havent seen her (with a mischivious smirk)

In the meanwhile geet open's fb and searches for maan and see's his full data and even saves his photo and signs her friends to see him. and then takes the phone from her friends

g: ok mr. maan i believe you. let's be clear in one thing . like you listened previously this is not for love.

m: hmm k i understand.

g: you already told your name na so we will continue with it but i will not reveal my name.

m: ok then i will call as misty as you have a sweet voice.

an unknown blush crept on geet's cheeks

g: if you have any pics in fb plz delete them.

m: hmm k, but why?

g: because i dont even want my friends to see you.

m: hmm k deleted.

and geet saw all the pics in his page got deleted.

g: k for now bye.

m: bye.

maan (self thought):

seeing the pic in his phone, how can a girl be this innocent and sweet and i thought i should make many plan for you but it was easy to make you fall for me.

it won't fail, will it? hmm i wont let it fail.

in geet's house

priya: geet you are too cunning yar you told him not to see you but you checked his total data base.

g: i told he should not see me and more over i am a girl and should check my own safety right.

and then started their call , chatting with each other and they both got emotionally connected to each other sharing their day-to- day life, likes, dislikes, etc.,

( imagine him as sweet and cool not angry young man )

while yash finally proposes sam and she accepts him.

pre-cape: maan knowing who sam is and realizes him talking to an unknown girl.

hope you guys like it will update the next part asap.

plz do like and comment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
so geet ne maan ko dekh liya but maan dnt know her nd he thought she is sam nd on the other side he is helping yash to make sam his gf nd sam too accepted nd ghey r talking on the phone knowing each other nd precap maan ko jhatka lagne wala hai hehhe waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowow... So much happenings... Bechara maan... Chala tha Sam ka no. Lene mil Gaye usko geet ka... Both are now so comfortable ... And have talk so much... And yash proposed Sam... What will be his reaction... Uff.. Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb part can't wait to see maan reaction after knowing that with whom he is taking is not sam..so please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update so maan saw sam and he liked her in an instant he asked pinky abt her who told she was their bach mate she gave him her no whioch turned out to be geets no as few digits changed meera seeing a miss call from an unknown no called back when maan gave them the puzzle that he was their batchmate and if wanted to know abt him find out themselevs they were curious but they couldnt find him geet knew he was a stranger when maan caleed her back geet told him she dosent know hiim though he told his name geet found him on fb she chjallenged him to find her even without seeing her though geet had seen him on the otherside yash loves sam the girl maan liked he also proposed sam she agreed maan and geet became friends and maan dont even know he was talking to the wriong giorl
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update ...
loved the character sketches
adi ne wrong number note kiya
but number bhale hi galat ho ladki toh sahi hai na ? 😉
maan khud hi khud pe pair pe kulhari mar di Sam and yash ko set karwake 😛
and geet ki fantasy bhi puri ho rehi hai
can't wait for next
continue soon
thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting update. Maan saw sam in the wedding of Adi and Pinki and got attracted towards her. He asked about her from Pinki. After two days Pinki gave him Sam's phone number on phone. Due to disturbance in line he wrote wrong number. This is Geet Handa number who is only heir of Handa Industries. They started talking.
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Amazing. So maan saw.Sam in ADI's marriage.event. he asked her no. From pinky but unknowingly she gave wrong no. To him . maan talked with geet who wants a man who loves her without knowing her looks and her wealth. Maneet come very close in few days while talking through phone.whereas yash proposed Sam and she also accepted his proposal. Now waiting for the maan's reaction when he will come to know about wrong no. Story.

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