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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
awesome totally new concept
maan thought it's sam and unknowingly
he help his friend to meet sam
geet saw maan pics in fb
waiting fr next pt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
fantastic...
jise bnana tha sangni wo to bn gai bhabhi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
fab part
maan talking to geet thinking her to be sam...wat vl b his reaction after knowing her real identity...cant wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will update the next part by today evening
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For those who want to see the video of original movie song of both hero and heroine talking to each other.

https://youtu.be/Sn9KIVfS0R0

Part 2

Maan with the help of his friend get the address of his misty and moves towards the house.

In the meanwhile geet's mom and dad return from their hometown along with her cousin Naina who is very close to her.

Evening

geet tells her dad about her love

geet's dad (gd): wow geet what a story, till now all thse kind of stories are seen only in novels. and till when are you planning to play hide and seek love.

Listening to the father- daughter convo naina was shocked

n: omg... what kind of father and daughter are you two, A father is drinking in front of his daughter and the daughter is telling about her love as if it is some general story.

listening to her both of the laughed

gd: You know naina when there is daughter like Geet then any father will be like me, she never tried to use my name or influence always strived hard and made her own name.

g: but dad know i will need the help of your influence.

gd: If you told me first i would not have wasted one compliment na geet. anyway what it is?

g: i want to get a job in maan's company after 1 week dad.

gd: 1 week?

g:who... uski birthday hai after 1 week.

gd: I thought you will ask me after 3 days as your birthday present.

and there continued their convo

Here maan reached geet's house and saw a watchman near the gate and showed the pic of sam to him asking if she lives here.

watchman: who is she? and why she will live in this house?

m: oh k may be they would have changed their house. tq for the info.,

after 3 days

Its geet's birthday and all of her friends and family members wished her except maan. she felt very low as he didnt wished her.

while thinking about him she received his call

m: hey geet, can you come to hill park as I arranged an event here, plz i would love it if my friend see it.

g: sorry maan there are lots of guests here and its my important day.

m: I dont know how important this day is to you but to me its very important geet plz.

g: hmm k, i will be there in half an hour.

m: k bye.

later geet along with her cousin Naina went to hill park and swa maan standing near the entrance and hid herself in the car

g: why am I hiding myself, he dont know me right?

n: what if he identifies you?

g: then for sure he is dead.

both of them went into the park passing maan but he didn't recognized her.

The whole park was illuminated with different lights and geet connected her Bluetooth to her ears so that he cant identify her while talking.

m: misty where are you.

g: i am already inside the park now show me your event fast, i should go home.

m(self thought) : when did she reach i was here waiting for her.

maan called someone and lights went off and geet was observing every move of maan and there was the surprise

geet was overwhelmed seeing it

g: I thought you forgot maan.

m: Friends never forget. we're friends till we reach next level right? (teasingly)

geet smiled with a blush listening to him.

g: but really your event thought is superb maan.

m: tq. but tell me I thing misty where are you going to meet me?

g: within 3 days I will be in front of you to say 3 magical words maan.

m: misty really you will come in front of me within 3 days?

g: yes maan.

Maan was so happy and gave a big party to his friends and while going home he saw yash and sam together hugging each other.

m(self-thought) : why is my misty hugging this yash? how do they know each other? am i hallucinating because of over drinking.

next day he talked to yash and asked him to show his gf's pic where he showed sam's pic and maan was hell angry and annoyed and told him that she is the one he love and she is his gf and went from there.

maan called his misty without thinking anything

m:hello

g: hello maan (with sad tone)

m:why are you sounding low did anyone called you and scolded you?

g: what ? I am watching titanic movie.

m: oh is it I believe you geet( sarcastically )

and blabbered all the rubbish

g: maan are you drunk ?

m: every one are drunk?

g: I didn't expect you to call me like this when you are drunk and blabber all the rubbish maan.

m: who lives according to expectations, misty? don't talk like a chaste women.

g:shut up maan.(with tears in her eyes)

and cut his call.

m: misty... misty uff phone cut kardiya isne.

maan called yash and told him to meet him at sam's boutique and cut his call.

m: yash why did you brought us to our office.

y: maan dont you know sam's boutique is here ?

m:what?

yash and maan entered sam's boutique and seeing yash sam is really irritated as they had a huge fight last night.

maan was so happy seeing sam in front of him.

after a silence of few min

m: ok, i will break this silence.

misty, i am your maan.

s: (with a confused look) huh...

m: now dont act like you dont know me

s: when I dont know you how will i act?

y: the same way you are acting now.

s: I thought you would realize your mu but you are impossible yash. i made a big mistake to love you.

yash being angry on sam went away.

m: dont worry misty ours is true love , chahe jitne bhi yash ke jaise log aye hame alag nai karsakte.

s: just shut up. who are you? and who is misty?

m: oh come-on ab tho jyada ho gaya , we daily talk with each other for hours na misty that you cant deny right?

s: acha we talk with each other?

m: ha .

s:tho call me now.

maan call the no and to his utter shock

g: phone rako maan bahut bad mood mein hoon and i dont want to talk to you. (told an annoyed geet).

maan was literally shocked and dont know what went wrong and where he did mistake , he felt like his life took a 360 degrees turn.

m: adi can you give me the no of sam.

a: that i gave you na.

m: ha wo... and he explained the whole story

now adi is tensed as he felt that there is some mistake from him as that day he couldn't get what pinky told correctly due to disturbance.

a: k i will take the no

and when he got the no from pinky he knew that he is dead for sure but still went to maan and told everything to him

m: KYA?

how can that happen? how can I talk to someone thinking her to be my love?

a:maan ab kya?

m: you will go and ask sorry from misty i mean the girl whom i talked to as it was your mistake.

a: mein...

m: ha TUM

a: teek hai.

Adi went to geet's house and told everything to her in front of her family.

g: how did i make such a big mistake dad? because i can't blame maan for whatever happened some where there is my mistake too.

adi tell him i am ok. and one more thing adi plz ask him not to call me and even I will not call him, I f he called even once then i cant handle myself, and plz sorry kehne keliye bhi nai .

saying so geet went to her room and cried her heart out. seeing her in such condition even her parents and cousin are very upset.

next day maan went to sam's boutique to talk to sam about sam and yash as he felt he came between them.

m: misty... i mean sam plz listen to me what ever happened its because of some mu of mine and there is no fault of yash.

s: plz if you want to talk about him the the door is that way.

m: what do you mean?

s: i dont want a person who accuse me because of some idiot .

m: you meant you no longer want him.

s: YES.

m: my line is clear. (yippee)

s: just get out.

m:but misty... i mean sruthi.

pre-cape: geet hurt because of maan's behavior and thought to teach him a lesson of how painful when your heart breaks.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
felt bad for geet 😭..
but this maan..doesnt he have any feeling to whom he talked for hours..
i am just not liking this maan..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Lovely update geet told abt her love to her parents they were very happy for her maan looking for his mishty reached geets home but he had the right pic just wrong home geets bthday came maan wished a special way geet was falling for maan not knowing she was heading for heartbreak maan saw Sam and yash together he came to know he blasted yash for it Sam and yash fought maan was drunk he talked to geet who got annoyed later when he confronted Sam and yash he came to know he was talking to wrong girl he asked adi who went and told geet who was shattered she asked adi to tell maan never to call her like he cared for bhi San ke neeche hi bhsg raha tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48


Oh no 😭😭😭 This was so sad . Maan is feeling happy that now his line is clear to get back shruti but what about geet ??? I thought he would realise about geet but e is acting so bad .



Its good to know that in the next update geet is gonna take revenge but then is her revenge justified ? bcz it was all about a wrong call and maan dint do it purposely . they could have better talked out face to face rather than revenging 😆😆 but lets see what is geet gonna do for teaching maan a lesson .

it was a sad update and felt bad for every character 😭

waiting for the next part 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Fantastic Update

Maan thinking all this time that he is talking to Sam but it was Geet while Geet have spoken about Maan to her father and when Maan sees Sam and Yash he is angry , he tells Yash that Sam is the same girl he loves and Yash and Sam has a fight .
Maan thinking that Sam no longer wants Yash will accept him
precap Geet wants to teach Maan a lesson
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
geet got support from his family n she was so happy.loved geet n father bonding.maan;s surpise on her b;day was nice.but seeing yash sam 2gether maan mu sam n got angry.he was rude 2 geet.maan approached sam n finally realized that geet was not sam.knowing that from adi geet was heart broken.bcz of yash sam fight maan is happy that his route is clear.now how will maaneet unite?very interesting

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