Tribute- A SwaSan OS - Page 5

Hi dear .
I am new on this forum ,
Actually a silent reader , opened account just now.
I must say you are a fabulous writer .
The way you write , the way you always portrays swasan's emotions is mindblowing.
Coming to the OS , it was totally a treat to read.

I loved it ...Totally.
Sanskar ... This character itself is so strong , and impactful , that everytime when it comes to him , it just makes me fall in love with him again and again.
Sanskar wanted to stay alone and Swara wanted to accompany him , and loved the line
"maine kai mahino tak tumhari dosti ka sahara liya hai , aaj dosti ka farz ada karne ka chance mujhe bhi chahiye"
It was simply mindblowing .
Loved every bit of your OS .
Keep writing more .

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi Shruti...
Beautiful and amazingly superb.
I loved this. I have read it thrice.
The way you portrayed Sujata here I actually felt her concern worry for her child. Her motherly feelings for her child, his happiness, her plight to see him happy and her turmoil what if Swara leaves him again but this time forever were beautiful penned down given the way how her character is.

Swara, what can I say for her. She is one wonderful confusion happened to Sanskar who have decided to confuse him with her actions, she cares for him, feels for him but unable to name her feelings, confused regarding her own changing emotions towards the man who has been her solace in the hard times of her life. Yet keeping everything aside she is there surprising him with her behaviour again trying to be with him in his difficult time similar to the way he has been with.

Sanskar ! My heart goes out for him. I don't have words to explain how I felt the way you described his thoughts and emotions. You left me speechless where I felt my eyes tearing up at point reading it. His pain was so palpable ..his turmoil and his unsaid words everything just perfect...

You are one supremely talented writer:-)
-
Stay blessed
MUKTA

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hi dear .
I am new on this forum ,
Actually a silent reader , opened account just now.
I must say you are a fabulous writer .
The way you write , the way you always portrays swasan's emotions is mindblowing.
Coming to the OS , it was totally a treat to read.

I loved it ...Totally.
Sanskar ... This character itself is so strong , and impactful , that everytime when it comes to him , it just makes me fall in love with him again and again.
Sanskar wanted to stay alone and Swara wanted to accompany him , and loved the line
"maine kai mahino tak tumhari dosti ka sahara liya hai , aaj dosti ka farz ada karne ka chance mujhe bhi chahiye"
It was simply mindblowing .
Loved every bit of your OS .
Keep writing more .

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey there!How are you? Welcome to the Forum and hope you willhave lots of fun here! Oh wow- yourcomments made my day! I always getvery happy to see new readers and you are so kind with yourwords - am trulytouched. Iparticularly adore Sanskaar and of course SwaSan so it felt so good that you felt that my Sanskaar was so relatable. Iwrote this a while ago and reading thisbrought back such goodmemories!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I have written afair number of other things which are all on my index at the bottom of my signature in caseyou want tocheck the othersout:) My currentobsession is an on-going FF on a totally different storyline butbasedaround SwaSan- a period drama, alternative plot. If you fancy checking itout, please do so and let meknow what you think😳, would love to haveyour views:)</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thankyou again for your lovely comments- and hope we will interact more.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love,</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Shruti x</font>

I am good dear.
Thank you for your welcome.
I also think that I will be having lot of fun here,
as this forum contain such mindblowing writers like you,
So I m sure it will be great being here.
I will surely read your other works too soon.
And yes Your ongoing FF means Dark knight right ?
I so wanna read it , but I guess I will have to wait for it as I have my exams now .
Once I m done with my exams , I will go for it first.
And will let you know about it.
Yeah we will interact more for sure.
Have a great day dear.

BTW I LOVE YOUR USERNAME...

ITS KIND OF CUTE:-)

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

I am good dear.
Thank you for your welcome.
I also think that I will be having lot of fun here,
as this forum contain such mindblowing writers like you,
So I m sure it will be great being here.
I will surely read your other works too soon.
And yes Your ongoing FF means Dark knight right ?
I so wanna read it , but I guess I will have to wait for it as I have my exams now .
Once I m done with my exams , I will go for it first.
And will let you know about it.
Yeah we will interact more for sure.
Have a great day dear.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hello again! Yes, the FF is Dark Knight indeed😳. Oh wow- you have exams? Wish you all the very best for that, I really hope you get great success:). Yes, of course read whenever- studies/ work always first! Oh and thanks for liking my UN- old joke from uni and people sometimes calling me Footie instead of Shruti etc and then my niece when she was a baby used to say Aunty Tootie😆</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Lots of love x</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">PS: Let me know your name if you feel comfortable in doing so😃</font>

Hey thank you so much for your wishes.
And will u mind if I call u Tootie ?
I find it really really cute ,
Actually super cute.
Ohh so sorry I forgot to introduce myself ,
My name is Harshada ,
U can address me by that .

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey thank you so much for your wishes.
And will u mind if I call u Tootie ?
I find it really really cute ,
Actually super cute.
Ohh so sorry I forgot to introduce myself ,
My name is Harshada ,
U can address me by that .

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Beautiful OS :)