Tribute- A SwaSan OS - Page 4

Really loved this os. Felt more emotional. 😭😭 Sanskars hesitation. Swara became friends again with sanskar. Her idea of gng to Shishur Sevay, he s felling like he can't go ther after her loves death. But he hopes that the angel who is gng with him will show the path 😊.

Originally posted by: jasw

Such a touching OS. Fitting tribute I must say! 👏

Awww... these muddleheaded two! Sujata and some guardian angel(in this case Kavita 😊) have to do a lot to drive some sense to Swara and Sanskar.😃 To make them realize that they are meant for each other! ❤️

Originally posted by: gayu6

Really loved this os. Felt more emotional. 😭😭 Sanskars hesitation. Swara became friends again with sanskar. Her idea of gng to Shishur Sevay, he s felling like he can't go ther after her loves death. But he hopes that the angel who is gng with him will show the path 😊.

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Nice concept, I love how you write your stories, describing what each character is feeling at all moments. I can imagine the scene in my head, which makes reading it much more pleasurable.

I love that Swara chose to go with Sanskaar not to help him to get Sujata off his back, but instead so that she too could celebrate Kavita's life and memories with him. I love the fact that she's involved and making Kavita as much as a part of her life as she is of Sanskaar's. The fact that she's not shying away from Sanskaar's attachment to Kavita is making me love Swara more. 😊

Shruti...🤗 Amazing as always yaar...👏 Loved the way you captured Sanskaar's character.😃 I think if something like this happened in show, he will react just like this... cautious yet hopeful. I loved you Swara and Sujju... Why can't they be like this in show?? 😭
Actually, Here I loved Sujju so much... Here she is like mother should be not like she is in show .. Apne hi bete ki khushi ki dushmaan 😡
And sorry for late reply.. I like to read when I am totally free that way I enjoy the stories to the fullest 😆 Going for Letter series last two parts now 😳

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Shruti...🤗 Amazing as always yaar...👏 Loved the way you captured Sanskaar's character.😃 I think if something like this happened in show, he will react just like this... cautious yet hopeful. I loved you Swara and Sujju... Why can't they be like this in show?? 😭
Actually, Here I loved Sujju so much... Here she is like mother should be not like she is in show .. Apne hi bete ki khushi ki dushmaan 😡
And sorry for late reply.. I like to read when I am totally free that way I enjoy the stories to the fullest 😆 Going for Letter series last two parts now 😳

Awesome 👏
Beautifully written

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome 👏
Beautifully written

Hi Shruti...
Beautiful and amazingly superb.
I loved this. I have read it thrice.
The way you portrayed Sujata here I actually felt her concern worry for her child. Her motherly feelings for her child, his happiness, her plight to see him happy and her turmoil what if Swara leaves him again but this time forever were beautiful penned down given the way how her character is.

Swara, what can I say for her. She is one wonderful confusion happened to Sanskar who have decided to confuse him with her actions, she cares for him, feels for him but unable to name her feelings, confused regarding her own changing emotions towards the man who has been her solace in the hard times of her life. Yet keeping everything aside she is there surprising him with her behaviour again trying to be with him in his difficult time similar to the way he has been with.

Sanskar ! My heart goes out for him. I don't have words to explain how I felt the way you described his thoughts and emotions. You left me speechless where I felt my eyes tearing up at point reading it. His pain was so palpable ..his turmoil and his unsaid words everything just perfect...

You are one supremely talented writer:-)
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Stay blessed
MUKTA