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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: kaku17
It was beautiful Shruti (guess that's your name and hopefully you would not mind me calling you by your name 😳 )...

I for once loved swara.. (I wonder why I love her only in fan fics...when would she give me the reason to love her in the serial ...)...She wanted to help sanskaar in remembering Kavita exactly how she should be remembered...I liked her hesitancy also as she was not sure about how sansku will react reg her proposal to go the shishu vihar...liked sanskaar's awkwardness when discussing kavi with swara and his exasperation with suju...😛

but without a doubt the star for me was sujata...she is one helluva character and her reasoning's, justifications are so out of the world just like her...I wish someone write a fan fic on her integrating it with swasan...that would surely be a very light hearted one, given her propensity to give superb one liners...😆...oh and I love suju ...😉...the maa-beta duo is awesome...😛

Please keep writing more, as I think we are in for a tough time ahead in the serial 😭...only the fan fics might be our consolation...😊

Hey Kaku (that is right?) 🤗 Of course you can call me Shruti! Shruts or Shru is also good, just not kamini or other words like that 😆😆 (but even that in fun is fine!).

So happy some of you see the Suju importance here. I adore Suju and just find her nautanki top class funny. I am so thinking of writing something else on her. Maybe I will give her a twist somehow?! Let's see hmmm. Thanks for encouraging me. I do hope we get some awesome SwaSan in the show and not unlimited drama only. As you say, the fall back is the fictions! Catch you again very soon! x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Shruti 🤗
How do you manage to write a new story everytime? WOW simply brilliant. I must say you have lots of immagination (and thanks to SwaSan as well 😉)👏
A new concept, and a lovely one.😳
Everything you describe was perfect and described beautifully. Especially Sujata's dialogue. Very well done. I like her character and would love to see this side of Sujata in the show as well.
The trio will be awesome for sure 😆 Maa-beta-bahu rocks 😉
Keep writing stories Shruts because you are a wonderful writer 😳

Preeto 🤗 What would I do without you guys to keep me going yaara?! Thanks so much as always for being so nice 😳. So glad you liked it and some of us so love our Sujju don't we 😉😆. Thanks again hon x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax
good concept, loved the swasan convo❤️ well written👍🏼

Thank you so much for reading and liking!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
This is heart warming dearie! 🤗 I loved how thoughtful Swara was being... I'm just going to imagine that this is going to be their new tradition on this day every year... 😳

Posted this in pg 3, guess u missed it! 😉

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

So beautifully written...

Loved it so much dear...

The emotions u described was so beautiful...

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Posted this in pg 3, guess u missed it!😉

Arrey! Haan, sorry hon! Totally missed it. Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it and yes just something that Swara does for a change which becomes a meaningful gesture for them:). X

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: anu91
So beautifully written...
Loved it so much dear...
The emotions u described was so beautiful...

Thank you so much Anu, glad you liked it x

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Shruti... 🤗 👏 May I say, what a pleasure it is to see so much research and effort being put in to a Fic. Hats off to you.

Coming to the story itself, you portrayed Sanskaar's confusion and distress at the planned divorce very well, yet he is, as you put it, a slave to Swara's happiness. Really liked the bit where there is an realization from Swara's side, of all she has put Sanskaar through, what she has made give up, and endure for her. And now there is this "awareness" between them after his taking such a big step of the false vow for her, and her seeking solace, as ever, in his arms. 😊 I'm going to put on an imaginary judge's robe and wig (God, they don't wear those powdered wigs anymore!!) and boom: Divorce NOT granted! 😉 I was also going 🤣 at Sujju's calculations about the disadvantages of Swara's Bengali DNA being outweighed by her general popularity among all the MM family now! Typical Sujju!

The gesture Swara plans about the visit to the orphanage---very, very moving, indeed. Hope to see such genuine caring moments between this magical couple, on the show.

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Shruti... 🤗 👏 May I say, what a pleasure it is to see so much research and effort being put in to a Fic. Hats off to you.

Coming to the story itself, you portrayed Sanskaar's confusion and distress at the planned divorce very well, yet he is, as you put it, a slave to Swara's happiness. Really liked the bit where there is an realization from Swara's side, of all she has put Sanskaar through, what she has made give up, and endure for her. And now there is this "awareness" between them after his taking such a big step of the false vow for her, and her seeking solace, as ever, in his arms. 😊 I'm going to put on an imaginary judge's robe and wig (God, they don't wear those powdered wigs anymore!!) and boom: Divorce NOT granted! 😉 I was also going 🤣 at Sujju's calculations about the disadvantages of Swara's Bengali DNA being outweighed by her general popularity among all the MM family now! Typical Sujju!

The gesture Swara plans about the visit to the orphanage---very, very moving, indeed. Hope to see such genuine caring moments between this magical couple, on the show.

Hey Viji 🤗

Thank you so much! Haha- the research thing is just my OTT obsession with detail, otherwise I feel like it won't work with my story.

So glad but not surprised that as usual you totally picked up with wavelength with what I was trying to bring out for SwaSan 😳. Ha- it will probably take a judge for silly Swara in the show. And yes, whilst most judges don't wear those wigs all the cases I do in the High Court and Court of Appeal here, they have to as do our barristers- poor them, not a flattering look! As it is our profession suffers from a dearth of good looking and then you add the wigs 😆.

Sujju is amazing na? I am so wanting to write a piece on her, I have a few ideas so let's see how it translates! I just wanted something deep and meaningful they did to remember Kavita so the orphanage seemed an idea. I wondered about continuing this to give them more moments at the actual orphanage but not sure if it's too cliched...

Thanks again and hope this week is easier! x

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Such a touching OS. Fitting tribute I must say! 👏

Awww... these muddleheaded two! Sujata and some guardian angel(in this case Kavita 😊) have to do a lot to drive some sense to Swara and Sanskar.😃 To make them realize that they are meant for each other! ❤️

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