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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Shruti 🤗

How do you manage to write a new story everytime? WOW simply brilliant. I must say you have lots of immagination (and thanks to SwaSan as well 😉)👏

A new concept, and a lovely one.😳

Everything you describe was perfect and described beautifully. Especially Sujata's dialogue. Very well done. I like her character and would love to see this side of Sujata in the show as well.

The trio will be awesome for sure 😆 Maa-beta-bahu rocks 😉

Keep writing stories Shruts because you are a wonderful writer 😳

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

good concept, loved the swasan convo❤️ well written👍🏼

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
Beautiful!
Sanskar .my heart goes out for this person. It is is said love is greater responsibility hence it comes with pain.but in sanskars case pain is an adjoining twin to love. He was broken and amended. Pain loves him too much to go away.and yet again love and pain follows him like his shadow.
And swara this lady really puzzles me. She wants to see things which she can handle. She sees superficial woundsand empathizes for it. But wouldn't want to know the roots and real ache of the same wounds.she is too weak to go through real emotions. She would rather turn a blind than coming face to face with reality. Something she inherited from shekar.

Thank you for reading and liking. Yes Sanskaar and pain seem to be interconnected but despite that he shows the most sensible and strong reactions from everyone in the show. I really feel he will get his due happiness at some point:). Swara is somewhat confused and I don't think she reacts to only superficial wounds as she reacts aptly for others, maybe over emotionally but I think for Sanskaar as she has feelings she doesn't want to face, it all goes wrong. I wanted to show here that she can step out and offer him real comfort, I just hope it happens soon on the show!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bgscribe
I like the way you have portrayed the hesitation Sanskaar had when talking about Kavita and i could actually feel the awkwardness in the air😭
Glad that Swara has learnt to be his friend again and leave the decision of of divorce tp the test of time.😳

Loved Sujata as usual.. she is one colourful character.😆

Thank you! Yes I thought a bit of hesitation fitting to show the changed status of their relationship on both sides:). I just love Sujata and so wanted to include her in something:)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
A beautiful OS! I wonder, though, if they will show us anything about Kavitha in the show?

Thanks a lot! On the superfast express that is the show I doubt we will get closure on kavita unless they are saving her for some crap bhoot waala track in the future 😆

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This is heart warming dearie! 🤗 I loved how thoughtful Swara was being... I'm just going to imagine that this is going to be their new tradition on this day every year... 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet
Tottie Frootie...
First I love ur profile name...because I like tuttie frooties a lot😛

Second... I chanced upon one of ur OS Maelstrom. IT was sooo sooo good. I also had read the first two parts of Overpowered by Love..but but but I forgot the title... Then began a frantic search for your work and one by one I am reading them all...

So here is not a comment-er for you but a Fan.

Also checked through the web site of Shishur, its remarkable that some people go beyond goals and personal achievements and see their life on this earth as a blessing and make others life worth. Thank you for the good info.

U have a good language and flow of emotions through words. Keep up the good work and thanks a ton for ur works.

Luv,
Roshini

Roshni, firstly thank you for your kind words- some of the nicest anyone has said to me on the forum. I'm really touched and please don't say you are a fan, I don't think the writing is that good 😳. Oh and glad you like the name! Used to be a nickname by some friends in uni and since and then my little niece turned aunty shruti into Aunty Tootie so 😆.

I'm so impressed with the work done by Shishur- so happy you checked it out! I hope to interact more with you on the forum and hope you did find the links to the other ramblings I penned easily?! PM me if not and once more, thank you!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
ohh emm gg!!! supeb...👏
nicely written. swara's char was awesome in this story. when r we going to witness such swasan scene in this show?😭
great work, loved it...😳

Thank you so much Kulsum. Who knows in the show but let's be hopeful eh?! 😉

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
Its nice shruti. Nice concept..and nicely written.
But for me the star of the story was sujata, not swasan.

I actually volunteered for that institute you have mentioned, a few years back.😃

Its different...and new. Do write more of such pieces. No matter what you write, it will be good, because you are a good writer.😳

love--
medha.

Medha 🤗Glad you liked it. I'm so glad you got the Sujju role- I so love that woman, am thinking of other stuff I can bring her into!

OMG- seriously re Shishur?! We do have a freaky connection eh?! I am so impressed by their story, too far away for me to do much but I am going to donate at least- not the best thing but it will hopefully help in a little way!

I am trying to get to a mixed bag of writing. I usually go by my moods for writing so have to feel light hearted to write light but that is something I am working on:) Thanks for encouraging me xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: misaki
Really appreciate that you actually took time to research about an actual orphanage to write about. 👏
I seriously have started loving our Suju and the way she speaks. Although I can totally understand everything she says, I cannot write or speak the way she does. How did you get all that right?😲 What language is it? Gujju?😕
The star of the OS was definitely Sujata for me. She's amazing! And the way you have written about how her brain functions!🤣
SwaSan ofcourse were adorable too. I really want them to explore the Kavita angle too. However only in a way, that would help SwaSan track move forward just like how you have managed to do it. I just hope and wish the CV's really take good care of the track.😳
Another amazing one from you Shruthi. Honestly enjoyed reading it😊

Thank you Geetha! I am a bit of a freak- if the logic just doesn't work for me, I can't in all honesty write it. I think its a bit of a professional hazard from real life and research comes easy to me 😃. I adore our Sujju- total nautanki 😆. Oh no she isn't speaking Gujurati- that is my mother tongue, that would have been easy 😆 They speak Rajasthani as they are Marwari. I just pick some dialects up. My hindi is entirely self taught as is my punjabi and urdu. This too, I have heard on other shows and the words are quite similar to a mix of hindi and kutchi (which I speak) so I find it easy to follow. Speaking it fluently is hard so I did my best:). Swaragini CVs are so bent on madly running from one melodrama post to the other, when will they have time for Kavita except to show her return from the dead 🤣. Thanks so much again for your kind words.

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