Ishra ss-kyunki..tu dhadkan main dil#3 teaser updt on pg 126 on Apr 10 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra

Nice one..end of d part little emotional..plZ make her cm bk.. Updt soon



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yashivid

Awesome raksha. Poor ra man. Don't make them suffer too much.

Jaldi mila do unhe.
Update next part soon.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Awesome update RAKSHA but sad at the end 😭😭why Ishu runaway. She could not wait to hear from him once what is going on. And how did she know about this news. Poor Raman he try every possibility to stop the news with his power and now seem to be successful but Ishu had gone. Hope he will find her soon. Subbu how much damage he will do for Ishra. Should put him behind bar forever for all wrong deed he did to all the women including Ishu. Thank you for the update and pm . Have a wonderful weekend my dear. 🤗🤗



Thanks jum
Glad u like it
U will know why she ran away
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Raksha,

What is this I am very angry with you😡 How can you make them separated already they suffered enough please bring them back together. When I read the teaser I thought Ishita going away would be something in the middle of the update and RKB would be scolding her and dragging her back home where she belongs but you finished the update with Ishita leaving him.

Thanks for the pm

update it soon I can't see them separated😭



Thanks Maya
Will update soonish
Don't get angry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf

An awesome update!!!!!!!!

Cute Ishra morning romantic moments - shower romance!!!!😳☺️❤️
Raman's RKB mode comes out when he hears the "breaking news" He goes and sorts the media out - sorts everything out and comes home all happy but all happiness disappears when he sees Ishita's leaving letter!!
He is devastated and cannot believe that she has left him!!!!!!!!😭💔
The letter is so sad and emotional but he refuses to do what she asks him to: "Raman hugged her letter to his heart and cried- no Ishita,u can't do this.no no never.I am not going to listen any of ur nonsense.I will not take care of myself. I will punish myself.I will make my life hell and make u repent ur decision. U have to come back to me.I will bring u back to my embrace where u belongs to. U can't leave ur Raman alone to die.u have to come back ,u have to come back ishita.he said crying bitterly laying on the floor."😭💔

I cannot wait for the update - soon yaar please!!!!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!🤗



Thanks nafisha
Glad u like it
Yes she took an impulsive decision with going away
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ranisa123

oh raksha dr it's sooo emotional to handle dr but i love the update.raman is crying bitterly dr.poor he.i know now ishita also suffering somewhere. plz make them unite soon.don't separate them for long time. update soon dr.thanks for the pm



Thanks chammi
Won't separate them
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie95

Lovely update Dee
But very emotional
Plz don't separate them
Continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
Author's note- never updated any story so quickly ,but the anger and sadness of my sweet and lovely readers compel me to update this fast.I know many hadn't commented yet ,so for them.I want two different comment on ur two updates,ek se kaam nahi chalega.thanks for giving 120+ likes in less then 24 hours.so here is the next update.

PART 14

Raman was laying on the floor crying bitterly hugging the letter tight to his heart when mihir came inside.he come to meet ishra .he knocked but came inside because it was open.mihir saw him crying and ran to him.he shook Raman and said- what happened bhai.is everything alright.

Raman hugged him tight and said- nothing is right mihir.she went,she went leaving me alone.he said between his hiccups.

Mihir was stunned to listen this and moreover shocked over Raman's reaction.he always knew that Raman loves his bhabhi but didn't know that he loves him so much.

Mihir-bhai,bhai.please stop crying.we will search her and bring her back.please bhai stop crying.

Raman- she is so stupid mihir.how can she leave me alone like this.she can't go.I will bring her back and will punish her badly.will not talk to her.she is just so stupid.I will make her repent her decision of leaving me like this.

Mihir- haan bhai,we will search her.and u can punish her then.

Raman- main baat bhi nahi karunga,uska banaya khana bhi nahi khaungaa.usse apna koi kaam nahi karne dunga.( I will not talk to her,won't eat the food made my her,won't let her do any of my work)how can she leave me mihir.I am Raman,her Raman.its not fair.everyone can't leave me like this.

Mihir-yes bhai,stop crying.let's go and search for her.she mustn't have gone far.she don't know much about the city.

Mihir words click on his mind ,he stand up and start looking something in the cupboard.

Mihir-what u r looking at bhai.

Raman- money.

Mihir- I didn't get u.did u think she had gone taking ur money.

Raman- no ,u r as stupid as her.she hadn't taken any money.mihir what she will do,where she will go.she don't have any money,she don't know anything.where she will go.what if something happened to u.no no I can't let anything happen to her.she is my baby.I have to search for her and then I will not talk to her.saying so he wiped his tears and went outside the house.mihir came along with him.Raman was sad and devastated but for him now searching his stupid wife is foremost important. He can't let anything happen to her.he knows well she will be crying somewhere and he wants to reach to her as soon as possible.he wants to take her in his arms and soothe her pain.

But he couldn't think anything straight. He was like loosing all his sense.he was not getting idea to find her so he started asking each and every passerby showing her pic in his mobile.he was wandering on the road like a lost soul and mihir was just safeguarding him from getting injured.mihir was feeling sad for his bhai on one side while feeling worried for his bhabhi on another side.

It was almost two hours,since they were searching for ishita,asked almost everyone they can but still don't get a clue of her.Raman started feeling drizzy as he hadn't ate anything since morning,and after much crying and running here and there,his energy was loosing slowly. At last he sat in a rock in the corner of the road and said- I lost her mihir.don't know where to search for her.where is she mihir.he said crying breathing heavily.

Mihir- bhai,calm down .we will find her.please go home.u r looking so tired.

Raman- home? Which home mihir.she was my home,her smiling face was my solace.where can I find her. Where I can find my Ishita,her embrace.he said hiding his face between his legs.

A man was looking them since long,he cane to them and asked- is everything alright .they look at the direction and find it was ashok standing .

Ashok asked again- what's wrong mihir.what happened to Raman.

Mihir- nothing,its just.

Raman- she went leaving me alone.he murmured lost .

Ashok- who went.he asked amused by his behaviour.

Raman- my ishita left me.

Ashok- Teri biwi tujhe chod ke bhaag gayi kya( did ur wife ran away)he said laughing.

Raman glared at him listening his words.his eyes were puffy and blood red. Ashok was shocked to see him like this.he has always seen Raman as a fighter but today he was looking devastated.

Ashok sat by him and said- what happened Raman.tell me.may I help.

Raman didn't say anything but mihir told him everything hoping he may help.after listening to the matter,he said- I can't believe that someone can love somebody so much,and a man like Raman.I salute u yaar.saying so he hugged Raman tight trying to soothe him pain.but Raman was like oblivious of the surroundings.

Ashok- mihir,u give me details about her.I will search for her.u take him home,he is in very bad state. Moreover there is a weather forecast that there will be heavy rainfall and will continue for more then 72 hours.u guys should go home before that.take him home first.

Mihir- but why u will search for her before 24 hours. That too for bhai.

Ashok- see ,I understand, I am his enemy but that's a professional one,I can't see him like this.please take him home.I will search for his wife.I and my team is clearing the road.I can search for her easily.

Mihir make him stand and said- thanks a lot ashok.I am sending u her details. Bhai let's go home.

Raman shrugged his hand and said- I am not going anywhere without her.

Ashok- I will search for her Raman.u go home,storm is coming.r u getting tufan aane wala hai.

Raman- tufan toh aa gaya ,meri zindagi mein.meri ishita chali gayi( storm has already came in my life.my ishita went)I am not going anywhere.let me go.he saying shrugging his hand.but ashok held his tight and slapped him - Raman,hosh mein aao.pagal ho gaye ho kya.( had u gone crazy)

Raman- yes,I have crazy.bring my ishita back.Ishita. he screamed and fell on the ground crying.and it start raining heavily drenching him badly.

Mere saath mein ro raha aasmaan
Mera pyaar khoya hai jaane kahan
Usse dhoondhta main yahan se wahan
Milan ki mujhe aas hai
Nikalti nahi jaan hai
Main kitna majboor hoon
Yeh kaisa imtihaan hai

Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam
Ek mulaqat zaroori hai sanam.

He loosed his sense and they took him home. Mihir called the doctor. He gave him some injections and told them not to disturb him.let him rest.mihir saw him sleeping with the lines of tension.he caressed his forehead and said- bhabhi,where r u .bhai can't live without u.please come back.

Ashok- its good,he will be sleeping.I will go and search for her.will call u if find her and will scold her too ,what she has done to my enemy.saying so he was going when mihir hugged him and said- thanks for coming ashok.bhai was out of control. I couldn't do two things at a time.

Ashok- its OK.don't act like a girl.I am doing this for myself then him.I want my enemy back.saying so he went away.

Two days went in a jiffy,ashok was trying hard to search for her but not getting any clue.on the other hand Raman's condition was deteriorating.mihir and doctor was taking good care of him but he wasn't eating or drinking anything.it was mandatory to keep him under seductive to keep him calm.

Raman get up from his bed and went to his cupboard. He open it and touched her sarees.he took out one of her saree and cried .

Raman- where r u,come to me jaan.ain't u missing ur Raman. Can't u feel my pain.nahi jee paunga tumhare Bina ,laut aap( can't leave without u,come back) he said hugging her saree close to his heart.

Tenu itna pyaar karaan
Ik pal wich sau baar karaan
Tu jaawe je mainu chad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Ke tere liye duniya
Chod di hai
Tujh pe hi saans aa ke ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake

He was sitting on ths floor when his phone ranged.he picked it in a jiffy thinkung may be she called him.

Raman- hello,who's this.

Ur well wisher,subbu.ur ishita went leaving u naa.he said laughing sarcastically.

Raman was stunned to hear it from him.

Subbu- u r thinking how I know all this.come to me ,I will tell u everything.

Raman- I am coming.saying so he wiped his tears and changed his clothes and was leaving when mihir asked-where r u going bhai.

Raman- to subbu.he is behind all this.he has called me.

Mihir- I know he has been calling but I never gave u coz u were disturbed. He is calling just to make fun of u.don't go.

Raman- but how he knows that Ishita went.its not any news shown on national TV.I am sure there is more then its looking like.

Mihir-shit I didn't think like this.OK let's go bhai but before have something .u hadn't ate anything from last three days.

Raman- r u out of ur mind mihir.don't know where my ishita is.she don't know anything,don't have any money and I know she is also hungry.she hadn't taken anything from last four days,how can I eat anything.I just want her sound and safe near me.then only I can eat anything.let's just go.

Soon they were in police station.ashok also came there.he was feeling guilty that he couldn't find her. Raman went to meet subbu alone.

Ashok- Raman,don't be aggressive, his statement can help us in finding ur wife.

Raman- I know how to make him spill the bean.saying so he went inside .he sat opposite to him.he was smiling.Raman wants to beat him into pulp but now he want information regarding ishita from him.so he remain silent.

Subbu- u know why i called u here.i just wanna see ur tears filled face after ur ishita went away.she went naa leaving u alone.I knew she will.poor girl she is just too naive and innocent.she easily trust people first me,then ur neighbor.

Raman got shocked hearing this.

Subbu- got shocked.but its true.she is my partner in crime. I always make girls stay with her but ishita never got a chance to stay with her coz she was sold very easily naa.because she has a very curvy figure.

Raman fist tighten in anger but ashok and mihir tell him to control his anger on the microphone.

Subbu continued- toh I was telling,poor ishita ,she didn't know that she is trusting a wrong person. Luckily one day i saw her in ur backyard.i was about to grab her when my aunt said that u r a big lawyer,so i told her to take ishita to the temple but couldn't take her away due to a man.then u guys arrested me and u beat me into pulp.and when I saw ur wallet ,I came to know u r the one.then I bribe a constable and called the media.u know these media guys,always looking for breaking news.never try to confirm it.the rumour spread like fire and my aunt instigated ur neighbors that ishita is a prostitute.they treated her very badly ,he said laughing again.

Raman cried hearing what she has gone through when she was being accused.I was being angry on himself that he couldn't protect her.whereas ashok send a team to arrest that lady.

Subbu- they all insulted her much and when she was almost broken ,my aunt convinced her to leave u saying that u will also has to go through same insult because of her.she loves u alot.didn't thought once before leaving u for ur sake.I mean any girl will at least think once for herself. She was getting everything with u.luxuries, comfort and u know physical love,Raman didn't let him complete and punched him hard on his face.he couldn't control himself and beat him mercilessly breaking almost every bone of his body.subbu was wincing in pain.

Raman clutched his collar and said- I am listening to ur nonsense that doesn't mean u can bad mouth about her.I know she is very innocent and naive ,anyone can instigate her taking my name.but I promise u ,I will find her and bring her back to me.and after that I will come to u and punish u for ur deeds.u haven't seen my wrath.and about my tears that u wanna see,u can never see that because only my ishita has power to make me smile or cry.saying so he came out leaving him.

Raman came out and find that constable and beat him badly and then he told his assistant to file a case against him for taking bribe.he cried but Raman didn't listen to his cries.

They were talking when some constable take that old lady along.

Ashok- give me ten minutes,I will make her tell everything.

Raman- give me one.

Ashok signalled him to go ahead.he goes to her and slapped her hard.she fell down.all went to save her but ashok stopped them.

Raman grab her neck and said- tell me where is my wife,or I will kill u just now.and don't try to make me a fool because I am very angry at this time.tell me or else I will kill u.

That women look around for help.

Raman- noone will help u and none can touch me even if I kill u.so just tell me.I am giving u a last chance.

She started telling- I told her that everyone will insult her husband forever just due to her ,so its better that u go away from his life.she wasn't ready but I emotionally blackmailed her.then she get convinced. I immediately took her to bus stand,buy a ticket for her to Lucknow.and make her seat in the bus.and then I went back.

Raman- why Lucknow.

Lady- I had my goons there to catch her and sold her again.she said in weak voice.

Raman slapped her hard and asked-where is she now.where is my wife.

Lady- I dont know.she didn't reached there.

Ashok- I think ,she don't know anything more.take her away.

They took her away.

Ashok- so she is in Lucknow. I think we should get going.

Raman- no,she is here only.in Delhi.

Ashok- how can u say that.she told her that she make her sit in Lucknow's bus.

Raman- and she never reached there.coz she didn't board that bus.she came back after that lady went.because that old lady didn't give her anytime to write a letter.but she wrote a long one for me.that means she came back home again.and from last two days,every transportation is stopped due to heavy rainfall. That means ,she must be somewhere in any of the bus stand waiting room.

Ashok- then we must search for her in every bus stand.in know there must be many but we have to do this.

Raman- no,I have a plan.she will come to me ,herself. Mrs bhalla ,enough of running away ,now be ready to come running to me,in my arms.where u belongs to.he said determined.

In a small bus station's waiting room.

Everyone was gathered around a lady ,who was laying on the cold floor in the cirner of the waiting room,her face was covered with a shirt.

Man1-is she dead.

Man2-dont know ,but didn't see her moving from last two days.

Woman 1-remove the shirt.

Woman 2-why she is covered by shirt.did someone murdered her.

They were talking when a lady remove the shirt from her face. She touched her hand and said- she is alive.and have fever also.give some water.

Someone pass the bottle.she sprinkled some water on her face.she wake up instantly and said- Raman.

The lady caressed her face and said- who r u beta.

She look around,everyone got back to their place seeing her alright. The old lady forwarded her water to drink it but she denied.

Old lady- what's ur name.

Ishita- Ishita Raman Kumar bhalla.

Old lady- where is ur husband. Why u r here.u have fever.is anything wrong.

She nodded in no and hugged his shirt again,when his photo fell down.the lady picked it and said- is this ur husband. Where is he.did he left u.

Ishita cried and said- no,I left him.

Old lady- why,did he loved someone else.

Ishita- no,he loves me only.very much.but I had to leave her.she said crying.

Old lady think that she should leave her alone so she went from there.

Ishita hugged his photo and caressed his face lovingly. She kissed his face and said- I am sorry Raman.I know u must be crying without me but its better that I should stay away from u.I am a curse for u and ur name,so its better that I stay away from u but seems my destiny don't wanna let me go far from u,my all path leads to u only.she said looking at his photo.

Aankhon ki hai yeh khawahisein
Chehre se tere naa hate
Neendon mein meri har pal
Khawabon ne li hai karwatein

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake.

The lady came with a biscuit packet and a blanket and forwarded the biscuit packet to her to eat.

Ishita- aunty,I don't wanna eat anything ,please go.

Old lady- but u have fever.at least have this blanket.this shirt is wet beta.it can't protect u from cold.

Ishita covered herself with the shirt again and said- it can protect me from everything coz its my Raman's shirt.please go.I don't wanna be rude but I want to be alone.she said sobbing silently.

Old lady went away and ishita again lay on the wet floor covering herself with his shirt crying bitterly hugging his pic,remembering the incident happened two days ago which tune her world upside down.

That's all for now.I know ishra didn't met today but they will met in next update.so give me long and lovely comments and atleast 100+ likes asap to compel me to update next part asap.will wait for ur responses.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Un-res-ed...Only on your demand... 😆

All Said to you...They were angry...But I did not say...because I know...You will not let them separateed for long...
Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago
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Oh My God...

Raman to Devdas ban gaya...whay you created such problem in their life...they were so happy...

My Poor Raman...where he will find his Ishita...

Raman was so broken...Ishita bhi chhod kar chali gai..

More over she had not taken money with her...

Bawara bana ghum raha hai sadko par...

Yeeeppiii...I was right...Ashok aa gaya...apne yaar ka saath dene...

Raman...had not eaten anything from 4days...Isita ne bhi nahi hi khaya hoga...

This bloody Subbu...use phone kise karne diya...Raman beat him...wow...

So...wo lady bhi Subbu ke saath thi...kitne ghatiya log hai yeh dono...

Poor Ishita...has to through so much...Raman should have taken care of that...He should have been careful about society...

Ohhh last scene...Ishita did not go leaving Delhi...she came back to Raman...& go away again...taking his shirt along with her...that was so painful...

Ishita sirf Raman ka shirt le kar so rahi thi...wo bhi wet shirt & wet floor par...& upar se usse fever bhi hai...

But Raman told...that Ishita will return on her own...Will he do some plan to bring her back...I think he would telecast some news that...Raman Bhalla is so ill...

Aur uss ke baad kya hoga...Ishita bhagti bhagti aayegi apne Raman ke paas...

Par IshRa to mile nahi iss Part me...so sad...

Sooo Beautiful Songs...perfect...

Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago

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