Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I am new here and am a die heart fan of swasan . I am first time writing a FF so please forgive me. This is the intro

Swara Bose
She is a bubbly yet matured girl. Her parents died when she was young so she lives with her uncle and aunt. She hates them but her hatred is most with their rivals the Maheswaris

Sanskaar Maheshwari
He is a very deep and secretive guy.He is a big business man and is very matured he lives in a joint family but remains isolated as he hates them because they have never treated them as their own but his hatred is more towards their rivals the Bose company

This story is about their lives how the hatred starts to melt and how their love starts.

Note:Raglak entry is in the 12th part


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely !!
The intro was fab !!
Please continue soon...
PM me please...
And yes... Keep me updated !!
Eagerly waiting !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Should I continue or not there are many views but no comments 😭 please who ever sees please comment how is it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome beginning
I really loved it.
The story line is different from the original one.
Waiting for your next update
Please continue the ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
Swara's room
Swara was getting ready for a meeting. She came out of the washroom wearing a pink sleeveless collar top on a dark blue jeens she looked into the and she was looking damn gorgeous. She applied a little make up and she went to mandir and prayed
Swara: Aaj mere liye bahut important day hai. Today I have chance for my day of freedom from my family. I have to win this chance of going London.

Sanskaar's room
Sanskaar was also getting ready for a meeting. He wore a blue t-shirt on black jeens with a black blazer on it he was looking damn hot that any girl will fall for him. He also prayed to god.
Sanskaar: Aaj Ka din is the day of my victory on my life of isolation. Ek baar has mujheLondon jaane Ka mauka mil jaye then I will get my freedom.

In the lift
The door was just going to close and suddenly Swasan together shouted
Swasan:Lift Ka door close mat karo
And they ran and got inside and suddenly Swara's leg slipped and she was going to fall on the spot Sanskaar holded her and they had a very passionate eye lock suddenly a girl in the lift asked them whether she is fine
Girl:Kya tum theek ho
Swara:Yes
They both parted away and Swara told Sanskaar thank you
Swara:Thank your for saving me
Sanskaar: Your welcome
And they both went in different directions
They both reached the meeting place and the host started giving the introduction and it was the time for Swasan's introduction and he introduced
Host:Presenting Sanskasr Maheshvari
This left Swara shocked that she was saved by his biggest rival
Host: And now presenting Swara Bose
Which left Sansksaar shocked that he saved his biggest rival
They both stared each other continuously

Precap: Announcement of the person who will go to London

This was the first part hope you all liked it and please leave your comments below

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsme interesting continue soon..pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice yaar.. So Swasan are rival... Waiting for next... I'm kamila..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice beginning
Sanskar saved swara,
Who will got the opportunity to go London
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So hate to love !!!,
Nice start!!!
If u can do pm me!!!
Part 1 was nice!!!
Waiting to see rivals together!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for your valuable comments this is the second part hope you all like it.
Part 2
Both Swasan were staring each other and there was silence. suddenly the silence was broken by the host
Host:Sir and Mam please take your seats
Both swasan went to their seats and sat in their respective places. Swara was sitting next to Sanskaar and the both had a conversation
Swara:If you have saved me once then don't think that I would be very grateful to yo it was just an accident.
Sanskaar:I also don't have any habit to do these type of things it was just by accident or else who will bare such a heavy load
Swara;what am a heavy load no chance and who told you to save me
Sanskaar:as a human I did this for humanity or else some people don't even have humanity in themselves like you who don't even know to talk properly with a guy who saved you
As they were fighting the host came an announced the company which will get the chance to go London
Host:The company which got the chance is
Both Swasan's heart were beating as their dreams were going to come true and he announced
Host:It is a tie between the Maheshwaris and Bose
Both Swasan were left speech less they didn't knew what their reaction should be. whether they should be happy as their dream came true or angry that they have to work with their biggest rivals
they both went to the head of the committee and said
Swara:I don't want to go to London
Head: but why Miss Swara
Swara;I cannot say the reason but i don't want
Head:Then Mr Maheshwari you have to go alone
Sanskaar:Neither i want to go Sir
Head:You both have time till tomorrow if your decision change then please inform us
Swasan together:Sir this is our last decision
and they both go to their respective homes
Swara as soon she reached she saw her Bua has called A boy to meet him for marriage but she doesn't want to get married she furiously goes and says
Swara:I am sorry but you people please go
All of them get shocked then her Bua says
Bua:But why at least talk once
Swara:No I don't want to talk to anyone I don't want to get married
Bua:Then who will take your responsibility we are are tired of you
Swara: One time I complete my project in London then I will establish my business and get settled
Bua:Ok and if you are not able to then we will get you married
Swara:Ok
Then Swara thinks what she said has made her stuck in a trouble
Swara:What have i done Now what i will do i have no other option left except talking with that Sanskaar Maheshwari
as Sanskaar reached home and was going to his his he listened a conversation which made him angry
Dp:I told he will loose this chance as he is not as good as our son
Ap:Yes you were right we cannot compare him with our son
He got furious and said
Sanskaar:I have got the chance and would be leaving in some day
And he went to his room and when he reached he realized wat he sai
Sanskaar:What have i done Now I have no other way except talking to that Swara Bose
Then suddenly his phone rang and he picked and it was Swara"s
Sanskaar:Hello who is speaking
Swara:Hello i am Swara Bose
Sanskaar:Wow Swara Bose calling me May I know the reason
Swara:I just wanted to say that whether we both can change our decision o going to London
Sanskaar:So Bose have bended in front of us
Swara:Not at all but for now Please can We
Sanskaar:If you are saying then Ok and first of all I also want to talk about the same matter so then we will meet tomorrow outside the Head's office sharp at 8'o clock an d please don't get late
Swara:I don't have have a habit of getting late then Ok we will meet tomorrow at 8'o clock
They both cut the call and went to sleep.

Next Morning
They both reached outside the Head's office sharp at 8'o clock and have a small conversation
Sanskaar:Wow on time at least Bose are good in something
Swara:Bose are not good in something but everything
Sanskaar:Ok lets stop this and we will fight later
And they both went and informed the Head about their changed decision
Head:So you both changed your decision then get ready you have to leave tomorrow
Swasan:Yes sir

Precap;Swasan in flight and suddenly ...

Hope you guys like this part




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