Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Thanks for all your comments.Hope you all like this part 6
Part 6
Both were staring at each other and they both had a passionate eye lock then suddenly and Swara comes in her senses and gets up from Sanskaar and after that Sanskaar also gets up and they both were embarrassed
Swara:Woh I am sorry I always go round while sleeping so I fell on you(feeling embarrassed)
Sanskaar:No problem it was just an accident nothing else
And there was silence but it was broken by Sanskaar
Sanskaar:I will go freshen up and come and up to that you select your dress as we have to leave for meeting in some
Swara:Ok
And then Sanskaar went and freshen up and came and after that Swara went and went and freshen up and and as she came out Sanskaar was mesmerized seeing her beauty.She was wearing a white full sleeves net top with blue jeans and he commented
Sanskaar:(staring at her)You are looking beautiful
Swara:Thank you
And then Sanskaar realized what he said and they both felt awkward and was but the silence was broken by Swara
Swara:Lets go now we are getting late
Sanskaar:Yes lets go
Both reached the venue and the meeting started they both presented their presentation and explained and they coordinated with each and it went nicely and after that all of them who we presented there appreciated them and a man commented on them which made them both embarrassed
Man:Mr. You and your wife have done a superb job
Sanskaar:My wife
Man:Ya your wife she is your wife right
Swara:No We are not husband wife you have a misunderstanding
Man:Oh I am sorry I misunderstood you both husband wife as you coordination with each other was very good and you both even look lie husband wife
Swasan were left speechless then the head made an announcement
Head:There is going o be a party held day after tomorrow and all are invited
And Swasan takes leave from there

Precap:Swasan day out with whole mastii

Hope you all have liked this part also.Please do comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Thanks to all for your likes and comments and please do tell if I should improve something in my FF. You can share your views freely.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awsum..loved it...n asd Romance too nw...waiting to see Romance b/w dem...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Thanks for all you comment.Hope you all like this part also.
Part 7
As Swasan were going hotel Swara sees an ice cream shop and asks Sanskaar about it
Swara:Sanskaar I want to eat ice cream Please lets go and see there is a ice cream shop also
Sanskaar:Swara stop behaving like a child
Swara:(makes her a pout face and sees Sanskaar innocently with her cute eyes)Sanskaar please
Sanskaar:(have to bend down)Ok Swara
Sanskaar:Thank you Sanskaar
He smiles at hi childishness and Swara goes towards the and suddenly when she was going to fall Sanskaar saves her. They both have a passionate eye lock but it gets broken in some time and they both part themselves
Sanskaar:Take care while walking
Swara:Ya I will take care next time
And they both go towards the ice cream stall and as they reach the shopkeeper ask them
Shopkeeper:Which flavor do you want
Swasan together:Black current
Shopkeeper smiles seeing this and he goes to take black current while Swasan feel awkward
Sanskaar:Even you like black current
Swara:Ya I like it since child hood but what about you
Sanskaar:I also like it since childhood
And they both have a passionate eye lock and their internal soul says
Swara;(in mind)What's happening with e Why I and he are so much similar to each other Why do I feel we are meant to be each other What is this Is this only called love. If yes then lets see where this path will lead me happiness or sorrow
Sanskaar:(in mind)Why we both have these many similarities . I hate her but my hatred is nothing in front of my this feeling . Have I fallen in love with her. If this is love then this love will also make her fall for me
then suddenly they come out of their their thoughts when the shopkeeper gave them ice cream
Shopkeeper:Here your ice cream sir
Sanskaar:Thank you
And he takes one and gives another to Swara
Sanskaar:Here your ice cream now eat it or else it will get melted
Swara:Thank you Sanskaar
And they both eat ice cream and enjoy eating it and then Swara asks Sanskaar
Swara:Sanskaar can we tour London today please(makes a pout face)
Sanskaar:Swara really hats of to you I never seen a girl like you. No one can be as cute and innocent like you
Swara:So it means yes
Sanskaar:Yes Miss innocent cutie
Swara:Thank you Sanskaar
And then Sanskaar realized what he said
Sanskaar:I am sorry
Swara:No problem and I will neither mind if you call me like that
And by listening Sanskaar was about to hug Swara but he stopped but Swara understood this and She hugged him. For a minute but he also hugged her back and they both had a passionate hug

Precap:the day out continues

Sorry for not posting yesterday. Hope you all like it.Please do comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update
The likes of swasan are same. They have a soul connection.
Unknowingly they started to love each other.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
hey nice update..
story is really interesting :)
waiting for ur next update
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice update..Swasan growing feelings 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
nice zaira.cute story.keep writting.
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update and what sweet bonding over ice cream..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Sorry guys for not posting yesterday and neither I will be able to post today as I have lost all my data😭 but Yaa there is a teaser for all you guys😃
Teaser
Swara(in mind):
Why do I feel so protective in his arms. Have I really fallen for him. Sanskaar you have made me fall for you and now I will not let you go away from me. You have become my life and I will not let my life go away from me.I love you Sanskaar
Felt her feelings
Sanskaar:(in mind) Swara you are my whole world and you have become my life and need. I cannot live without you.You have changed my hatred for you into love and I will not let my love go away from me.I love you too Swara.

Will they confess their feeling to each other.What will happen next.To know keep reading my FF Hatred or Love.

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